"Holy Biography" fanfic has been modified a little bit
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The big shot symposium maintains a graceful manner and plays with each other. I like this rhythm. Let's do it more vigorously (hey hey...
我要求不高，论坛体八一八小情甜蜜日常，大家都来磕CP！！！
泪啊~幸亏我已经练多了。。
Bai Ling, when can you come back?
In fact, I think Ziyue is a bit heartless and rushing. Of course, this is just my imagination. Continue to look forward to Song Yueming. . . . . . Whee
Press the claws. Press the claws. . . Is that Xinwen Shuangjie?
The fight in this picture is so exciting. It's been a long time since I read a martial arts novel, and I got that feeling back ^_^
我只能说你再不回来，我们大家就快把你给忘了。赶紧更新吧，你都可以算在龟速这一行列了。
Is that lunatic not dead? No way = =
What is the aftertaste of BT? !
Xiao Lingzi knew that he was going to die of panic ~ By the way, you are so brave that you actually saw the new pearl ~
The big shot symposium maintains a graceful manner and plays with each other. I like this rhythm. Let's do it more vigorously (hey hey...
我要求不高，论坛体八一八小情甜蜜日常，大家都来磕CP！！！
泪啊~幸亏我已经练多了。。
Bai Ling, when can you come back?
In fact, I think Ziyue is a bit heartless and rushing. Of course, this is just my imagination. Continue to look forward to Song Yueming. . . . . . Whee
Press the claws. Press the claws. . . Is that Xinwen Shuangjie?
The fight in this picture is so exciting. It's been a long time since I read a martial arts novel, and I got that feeling back ^_^
我只能说你再不回来，我们大家就快把你给忘了。赶紧更新吧，你都可以算在龟速这一行列了。
Is that lunatic not dead? No way = = What is the aftertaste of BT? !
Xiao Lingzi knew that he was going to die of panic ~ By the way, you are so brave that you actually saw the new pearl ~
Why doesn't the author reply? Are you too busy?
我看了着个《狼医》我觉得没有爱情的感觉，只有故事的框架对手戏写的太差了尤其是男女主角的感情戏写的太假，尤其是男主的感情太过廉价了。人物很白痴，情节很空洞，没有悬念，没有铺垫，没有烘托。只是过了几年旧不认识了自己所爱的人，这里只有一见钟情，没有经营爱情，就谈相守，还爱的死去活来，给人一种不真实的感觉，男配的感情们就比男住的感情丰富多了，至少他们还负出过，而男住什么都没做就得到女住的爱，我怎么想都觉得这上一个很。。。。。《狠烂》但故事的框架还是很不错的。还有很多细节要修改男配，明明是个小偷突然摇身一变做王爷，文中依然无半点交代之词，男猪分明就一跑江湖的小白，后来突然变为一朝天子，文中完全没有任何交代，身份转变牵强得够可以。要好好改哦《我看好你哦》
我是一口气看完的文，没能参与一路的风景有些遗憾也有些庆幸，因为这不是坑，我这次的直觉出乎意料的准这是一篇值得期待的文，看完全篇文我有个场景记得特别清楚。就是在清和的店里洋平重离开少年的身后走出，想要抽烟却发现自己并没有烟瘾或者烟瘾其实是很小的。有些淡淡的夏天和青春的味道，不像是火影之类的穿越文，我其实不是很敢尝试观看灌篮高手的同人文。因为那是凝聚了我整个童年，少年时代的最喜爱的充满了热血和单纯笑声的动漫。对他我有很深的感情，不能轻易放弃的感情，观看时的紧张激动。结尾的不甘心和胜利的笑失败的泪~总是沉沁在最后夏天的决绝意味，但是这篇文恰到好处的表现了那种淡淡的带着沁香的回忆感动。。。其实离开那个夏天我们还可以走的很远，人生的旅途刚刚开始。。。 呵呵。。。少年啊加油哦
泪流满面，国庆的大惊喜啊。
The author won't give up, right? ! Please update! ! !
The article is very nice, but a bit short. I wish my future articles will get better and better!!!
偶然看到推荐才发现的这文…不怎么看BE，但是文风真心不错…PS:大大你的wb叫啥求GD。。
Will you continue writing Naruto fanfics?
加油 更新更新更新更新
教授和主角认识很多年了吗？？难道我哪儿看掉了？
Look good, good, good_(:з∠)_