From the perspective of a lively sister, it tells the daily story of a "genius" brother who is very kind to his sister. (Note: The "I" in the article does not represent the author himself, and "my brother" does not represent a real person)
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Xiaoyang is indeed an intellectual, which should also be the design of the character. The last paragraph can reflect the author's feelings and insights, making this chapter a very fulfilling read with both narrative and discussion.
Xiaoyang is indeed an intellectual, which should be the setting for the character. The last paragraph shows the author's feelings and insights during his travels, making this chapter a rich and enriching chapter with narratives and discussions.
In the middle, there is an interlude between "I" and Xiaoyang, well... How to put it, it just depends on the author's intention. Daan is too funny, the big boy is afraid of heights, the plot is reversed... You know
Integrating life philosophy and using many metaphors, it is vivid and interesting, as if all the scenes are vividly written on the page.
Cherish every person you meet, maybe she will be your A Hong (glass). 841143.
What do you mean? I didn't understand the last part, but it looks good.
I like this pair of siblings and hope you can stick with it.
Ah, Ah Hong's behavior feels a bit like the male protagonist in a romantic drama... Isn't the younger brother too tender-hearted... And the two siblings are in the same grade, are they twins?
A handsome, pouty, iceberg-faced, trend-setting, hands-on person with excellent academic performance and a heartthrob younger brother who protects his sister. Well... Why don't I have one? My brother just looks like a rice dumpling and looks down on me!...
What are your zodiac signs? You are both aloof and funny...
Xiaoyang is indeed an intellectual, which should also be the design of the character. The last paragraph can reflect the author's feelings and insights, making this chapter a very fulfilling read with both narrative and discussion.
Xiaoyang is indeed an intellectual, which should be the setting for the character. The last paragraph shows the author's feelings and insights during his travels, making this chapter a rich and enriching chapter with narratives and discussions.
In the middle, there is an interlude between "I" and Xiaoyang, well... How to put it, it just depends on the author's intention. Daan is too funny, the big boy is afraid of heights, the plot is reversed... You know
Integrating life philosophy and using many metaphors, it is vivid and interesting, as if all the scenes are vividly written on the page.
Cherish every person you meet, maybe she will be your A Hong (glass). 841143.
What do you mean? I didn't understand the last part, but it looks good.
I like this pair of siblings and hope you can stick with it.
Ah, Ah Hong's behavior feels a bit like the male protagonist in a romantic drama... Isn't the younger brother too tender-hearted... And the two siblings are in the same grade, are they twins?
A handsome, pouty, iceberg-faced, trend-setting, hands-on person with excellent academic performance and a heartthrob younger brother who protects his sister. Well... Why don't I have one? My brother just looks like a rice dumpling and looks down on me!...
What are your zodiac signs? You are both aloof and funny...