What should she do if she loves someone and he doesn't know it?
What if she loves someone but has to endure him loving someone else?
What should she do if she loves someone and ends up alone and surrounded by others?
She just loves someone wholeheartedly, just loves. ． ． ．
She really didn't know if his lack of awareness after waiting like that would give her the courage to continue waiting. She really didn't know. ． ． ．
Goodbye...
Never meet again...
(I re-wrote it~~~~I hope everyone will support it~~~If you don't support it, I'm willing to step on it as well)
Reader comments
If you don't do one or the other, don't cultivate—Hugh
Come on again, come on drunkenly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
First of all, I want to say that the author's article is very creative. Xiao Gong and Xiao Shou have very good personalities and look very comfortable. At a time when picky people like me are crying about literary shortages, they have sent a novel that is better than many works on the list.
But I have to say that the author's story rhythm seems a bit... How should I put it? Although the storyline is very clear and there are good foreshadowings, (especially the fact that Zha Gong's former fiancée rescued Xiao Shou in the end is great. When I saw Xiao Shou scolding Zha Gong for not only feeling sorry for himself but also for his fiancée, I thought it would be a pity that his fiancée would not hear this.) But overall, the story seems to lack climax and climax. The part where the matching and the minor's condition were revealed was quite touching, but it didn't seem to make people feel that kind of heartwarming, at least that's what I thought. The same goes for the ghost part. The fighting part is not very prominent, and the text is not easy to convey a thrilling feeling. The overall feeling seems a bit bland, but I seem to think that the author's original intention was not to write it so bland... So I feel a bit regretful.
Also, I have a small opinion. Regarding the Internet part of the article, the author's description of the online community seems to be too gentle. For example, the netizen who posted the black post is actually a very strange kind of person. This is especially true in the online community. Often, the more people point out that a certain black person is actually wrong to be black or that things are not at all like the black people imagined, the more violent those "black people" will be. Of course, the same is true for "fans".
If I were to use the same meme, I would probably arrange for the "black" person to be even more dissatisfied because he was asked to talk to his own master, but he couldn't do anything to the master. He would reply and say that he would also become a fan of the master in the future, and would never listen to these people's dramas again. But when I later found out what illness Xiao Shou had suffered and how hard he had worked, he came back and posted an apology, and determined that he would become a loyal fan. Personally, I feel that this can better heighten the conflicting effect of the plot. Of course, this is how I would arrange it if I was the author using the same plot. It is just my own yy, and it is just a communication.
That ghost couple, generally speaking, it is difficult for a pair of orphans to listen to radio dramas when their lives are difficult. The audience of radio dramas is not large. When their lives are in hardship, what kind of opportunity did the two people who were struggling to survive fall in love with the voice of the great god? Maybe the author should explain this. After all, most of the radio dramas nowadays are mainly about beauty, and a pair of orphans who come into contact with pornographic dramas are a little bit out of touch with reality. But if the author can find a reason, a reason for the encounter between the master's voice and the lives of those two people, the story will become real in an instant, and it will also make the master's voice more "divine".
Well... If you're not angry after reading this, I'll write more.
About the title issue
When Bai Jingtao and Lin Luo proposed to address each other by their names for the first time, the author seemed to have forgotten our daily speaking habits.
"There is no man who doesn't like to eat meat. But there is a patient at home recently. His intestines and stomach can't adapt to the greasiness of meat, so he didn't buy it. Jing... Jing Tao, if you don't like it, then I can tell you where there is a restaurant that sells home-cooked food." Since it was the first time to call someone such an intimate name, Lin Luo spoke a little stiffly. .
In this part, if we follow normal living habits, we will not call the other person's name directly in the sentence, but use "you" instead. When calling the other person's name, it is more used to remind people to pay attention, such as: So-and-so, do you want to eat this or that? Or: What do you think about this matter?
When two people are talking alone, they rarely add their names unless it is a nickname. It is okay for Bai Xiaogong to call Xiao Luo by his name. That is because he wants to create an atmosphere of closeness between him and Xiao Luo. Xiao Luo's sentence pattern of calling Bai Xiaogong seems uncomfortable, and it feels a bit like Taiwanese romance. Moreover, Xiao Shou's personality should not be so quick and easy to accept being called by someone's first name, or at least he should change his tune under Xiao Gong's stronger request.
I accidentally wrote so many words, but it seems like I am still picking at faults.
But please believe me, the author, I do it out of love.
Is our brother He going to fight back? Very much looking forward to it!
The two old men are more reliable. Brother Qi Wang is too straightforward.
Wow, I'm so looking forward to it, I want to see Concubine Xian~
I'll tell you if this article looks familiar to me - -////
Immortal Qiongrong is Master Master?
I was not allowed to give points just now, saying that I was overdoing it by brushing up my points. I have obviously been given points before and said~~~`~
When you have time, can you please fill it in~
People really like this article! ! QAQ
When the commoners come out, they will become stronger and stronger!
I am the first one to leave a message~ So I need to give more benefits to the governor~ Gao Shan [cross out] Gao Shan's height has been ruined╮(╯◇╰)╭
Bubble(`Д′)ﾉ
I woke up halfway through my sleep and watched for a while... Ah dear~~
Buffalo heroine has adulterous affair
It's even updated... To make up for the points
In the Prime Minister's Mansion, Concubine Zhang and the eldest prince hit the wall this time!
I really hate the start of school, I even have to back off from updating articles.
If you don't do one or the other, don't cultivate—Hugh
Come on again, come on drunkenly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
First of all, I want to say that the author's article is very creative. Xiao Gong and Xiao Shou have very good personalities and look very comfortable. At a time when picky people like me are crying about literary shortages, they have sent a novel that is better than many works on the list. But I have to say that the author's story rhythm seems a bit... How should I put it? Although the storyline is very clear and there are good foreshadowings, (especially the fact that Zha Gong's former fiancée rescued Xiao Shou in the end is great. When I saw Xiao Shou scolding Zha Gong for not only feeling sorry for himself but also for his fiancée, I thought it would be a pity that his fiancée would not hear this.) But overall, the story seems to lack climax and climax. The part where the matching and the minor's condition were revealed was quite touching, but it didn't seem to make people feel that kind of heartwarming, at least that's what I thought. The same goes for the ghost part. The fighting part is not very prominent, and the text is not easy to convey a thrilling feeling. The overall feeling seems a bit bland, but I seem to think that the author's original intention was not to write it so bland... So I feel a bit regretful. Also, I have a small opinion. Regarding the Internet part of the article, the author's description of the online community seems to be too gentle. For example, the netizen who posted the black post is actually a very strange kind of person. This is especially true in the online community. Often, the more people point out that a certain black person is actually wrong to be black or that things are not at all like the black people imagined, the more violent those "black people" will be. Of course, the same is true for "fans". If I were to use the same meme, I would probably arrange for the "black" person to be even more dissatisfied because he was asked to talk to his own master, but he couldn't do anything to the master. He would reply and say that he would also become a fan of the master in the future, and would never listen to these people's dramas again. But when I later found out what illness Xiao Shou had suffered and how hard he had worked, he came back and posted an apology, and determined that he would become a loyal fan. Personally, I feel that this can better heighten the conflicting effect of the plot. Of course, this is how I would arrange it if I was the author using the same plot. It is just my own yy, and it is just a communication. That ghost couple, generally speaking, it is difficult for a pair of orphans to listen to radio dramas when their lives are difficult. The audience of radio dramas is not large. When their lives are in hardship, what kind of opportunity did the two people who were struggling to survive fall in love with the voice of the great god? Maybe the author should explain this. After all, most of the radio dramas nowadays are mainly about beauty, and a pair of orphans who come into contact with pornographic dramas are a little bit out of touch with reality. But if the author can find a reason, a reason for the encounter between the master's voice and the lives of those two people, the story will become real in an instant, and it will also make the master's voice more "divine". Well... If you're not angry after reading this, I'll write more. About the title issue When Bai Jingtao and Lin Luo proposed to address each other by their names for the first time, the author seemed to have forgotten our daily speaking habits. "There is no man who doesn't like to eat meat. But there is a patient at home recently. His intestines and stomach can't adapt to the greasiness of meat, so he didn't buy it. Jing... Jing Tao, if you don't like it, then I can tell you where there is a restaurant that sells home-cooked food." Since it was the first time to call someone such an intimate name, Lin Luo spoke a little stiffly. . In this part, if we follow normal living habits, we will not call the other person's name directly in the sentence, but use "you" instead. When calling the other person's name, it is more used to remind people to pay attention, such as: So-and-so, do you want to eat this or that? Or: What do you think about this matter? When two people are talking alone, they rarely add their names unless it is a nickname. It is okay for Bai Xiaogong to call Xiao Luo by his name. That is because he wants to create an atmosphere of closeness between him and Xiao Luo. Xiao Luo's sentence pattern of calling Bai Xiaogong seems uncomfortable, and it feels a bit like Taiwanese romance. Moreover, Xiao Shou's personality should not be so quick and easy to accept being called by someone's first name, or at least he should change his tune under Xiao Gong's stronger request. I accidentally wrote so many words, but it seems like I am still picking at faults. But please believe me, the author, I do it out of love.
Is our brother He going to fight back? Very much looking forward to it!
The two old men are more reliable. Brother Qi Wang is too straightforward.
Wow, I'm so looking forward to it, I want to see Concubine Xian~
I'll tell you if this article looks familiar to me - -////
Immortal Qiongrong is Master Master?
I was not allowed to give points just now, saying that I was overdoing it by brushing up my points. I have obviously been given points before and said~~~`~
When you have time, can you please fill it in~ People really like this article! ! QAQ
When the commoners come out, they will become stronger and stronger!
I am the first one to leave a message~ So I need to give more benefits to the governor~ Gao Shan [cross out] Gao Shan's height has been ruined╮(╯◇╰)╭
Bubble(`Д′)ﾉ
I woke up halfway through my sleep and watched for a while... Ah dear~~
Buffalo heroine has adulterous affair
It's even updated... To make up for the points
In the Prime Minister's Mansion, Concubine Zhang and the eldest prince hit the wall this time!
I really hate the start of school, I even have to back off from updating articles.
The writing is very good, I hope there are more