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Is it a trick of fate or a bewitchment of emotions?
Although he is kind-hearted, he cannot escape moral troubles.
When she met him and him, she was involved in the whirlpool of ethics and conspiracy...
He wants to send you full warmth;
He is committed to a complete love;
And she just wants to find a peaceful mind.
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Some Su is not too much and is acceptable. Personally, I think it is the author's right to write what type of article, and readers have the right to choose what they read. What you like may not necessarily be what I like, and vice versa. It's hard to agree with everyone, and it's hard to be liked by everyone.
I like your work very much. I hope you will continue to write better works. I also feel that the ending is too hasty. The heroine comes back to her heart a little too quickly. I will always support you. Author's reply:
Thank you.
I love you very much di~~~~ (青梅)
Sir...
Why do I feel like I've been cheated...
Li Yue Zhaoyun is indeed a beauty... So beautiful... I really want to throw him down...
Wanri Huifeng (? I forgot this name...) Has endured it for two years, but he still hasn't knocked down Xiao Yueyue? The endurance is so good...
The big picture is also quite beautiful, but the proportions of the characters are not very good. The shoulders are often too broad, and the lower body is too thin...
Praise the author for persistence. The author replies:
Thanks, I'm glad it was done. Hehe.
Will you write a second part? Looking forward to it! ! ! ! ! Author's reply:
I don't know how to write it for now. If I can write it, I will just write it this time. It's more complicated, haha. Thank you for your attention.
Li Zhi, a cannon fodder~~ said he was upset when he saw it! Let him appear less often
OMG what a super invincible giant Raven-_-Author's reply:
Thank you for such a big hat.
Will the second part continue here? Looking forward to it
Is there a second part? ? Author's reply:
Not decided yet. Thanks.
Hohoho, long time no update.
The first few chapters scared me to death... I thought they were going to separate... Author's reply:
Thank you for your long-term and enthusiastic support.
After three days of separation, treat each other with admiration = = Xiaoyu, when did you switch to Korean style = =
A bouquet of flowers to celebrate the Great Consummation... Author's reply:
thank you
The author of a lousy article with confusing logic replied:
I can't understand it, there's nothing I can do about it.
What a contradictory girl! But it's not bad. The author of the rating responded:
Thank you.
I feel like it ended a little hastily, but I think it was quite hard to write, so extra points. Author's reply:
Thank you, it speaks to my heart. Hey-hey
Finally together, extra points, extra points~~~
Lightning strike article
Write more
Very literary
There is no way this ending can be justified.
The ending was too hasty, the author replied:
It could just be the ending of the first part. Thanks.
Will there be a second part? Then wait nig~~~~~
The ending is so messy
Why didn't Zhan show up later?
Not knowing the truth is too cruel for him. Even if he misses so much time, the final ending should let him show up and make him feel regretful!
And the heroine is too cautious. This irrationality greatly undermines the article.
Author's reply:
A lot of suspense is left in the lower part
Alas, the thinking of elementary school and the methods of junior high school. Fortunately, I only took a brief look at it.
The person surnamed An can leave now. Let's replace him with a real person who is loyal and loyal...
Yes, the ending was so rushed, I guessed that Li lied to her and said it was her brother to take advantage of him haha~~~~ I hope to see the next part soon.
I really haven't had enough of it, is there anything else? Write more
I'm a little disappointed, it's not as cruel as I imagined, but it's okay~~
It's a happy ending after all~~~
No! Is this the end? ? ? ? ? ? Sigh-----It's too simple! Not very satisfied
Some Su is not too much and is acceptable. Personally, I think it is the author's right to write what type of article, and readers have the right to choose what they read. What you like may not necessarily be what I like, and vice versa. It's hard to agree with everyone, and it's hard to be liked by everyone.
I like your work very much. I hope you will continue to write better works. I also feel that the ending is too hasty. The heroine comes back to her heart a little too quickly. I will always support you. Author's reply: Thank you.
I love you very much di~~~~ (青梅)
Sir... Why do I feel like I've been cheated... Li Yue Zhaoyun is indeed a beauty... So beautiful... I really want to throw him down... Wanri Huifeng (? I forgot this name...) Has endured it for two years, but he still hasn't knocked down Xiao Yueyue? The endurance is so good... The big picture is also quite beautiful, but the proportions of the characters are not very good. The shoulders are often too broad, and the lower body is too thin...
Praise the author for persistence. The author replies: Thanks, I'm glad it was done. Hehe.
Will you write a second part? Looking forward to it! ! ! ! ! Author's reply: I don't know how to write it for now. If I can write it, I will just write it this time. It's more complicated, haha. Thank you for your attention.
Li Zhi, a cannon fodder~~ said he was upset when he saw it! Let him appear less often
OMG what a super invincible giant Raven-_-Author's reply: Thank you for such a big hat.
Will the second part continue here? Looking forward to it
Is there a second part? ? Author's reply: Not decided yet. Thanks.
Hohoho, long time no update.
The first few chapters scared me to death... I thought they were going to separate... Author's reply: Thank you for your long-term and enthusiastic support.
After three days of separation, treat each other with admiration = = Xiaoyu, when did you switch to Korean style = =
A bouquet of flowers to celebrate the Great Consummation... Author's reply: thank you
The author of a lousy article with confusing logic replied: I can't understand it, there's nothing I can do about it.
What a contradictory girl! But it's not bad. The author of the rating responded: Thank you.
I feel like it ended a little hastily, but I think it was quite hard to write, so extra points. Author's reply: Thank you, it speaks to my heart. Hey-hey
Finally together, extra points, extra points~~~
Lightning strike article Write more Very literary
There is no way this ending can be justified.
The ending was too hasty, the author replied: It could just be the ending of the first part. Thanks.
Will there be a second part? Then wait nig~~~~~
The ending is so messy Why didn't Zhan show up later? Not knowing the truth is too cruel for him. Even if he misses so much time, the final ending should let him show up and make him feel regretful! And the heroine is too cautious. This irrationality greatly undermines the article. Author's reply: A lot of suspense is left in the lower part
Alas, the thinking of elementary school and the methods of junior high school. Fortunately, I only took a brief look at it.
The person surnamed An can leave now. Let's replace him with a real person who is loyal and loyal...
Yes, the ending was so rushed, I guessed that Li lied to her and said it was her brother to take advantage of him haha~~~~ I hope to see the next part soon.
I really haven't had enough of it, is there anything else? Write more
I'm a little disappointed, it's not as cruel as I imagined, but it's okay~~ It's a happy ending after all~~~
No! Is this the end? ? ? ? ? ? Sigh-----It's too simple! Not very satisfied
Write some post-marriage extras and baby extras