Shimizu Wei, a girl who loves Echizen Ryoma, unexpectedly finds herself in a different world while sleeping? ! The girl who claimed to be the guardian of fate suddenly appeared in front of him, and inexplicably brought him to the world of the Net King! Although I can see the prince in my heart, is this really happiness? Will you take away more sadness when you leave?
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In fact, it was a coincidence that I saw your article when I was browsing the historical time travel category at about 1 o'clock in the middle of the night yesterday, so I immediately paid attention to it when I saw it on BS today.
Last night I thought, if I read this copy, I wouldn't want to click on it. [The author should not be angry~]
Now come in and take a look, without talking about the content of the article, can your copywriter be replaced?
1. There are too many words and it's too confusing [Who cares to read it carefully for a long time?
2. I personally don't like the word [even] appearing frequently. It's rare to see this word, really.
3. I can't understand your copywriting. It's a bit confusing
4. You made a three-dimensional cover that takes up a lot of space [Get rid of it, you don't customize it now, so it takes up space, and it takes a long time for the reader to see the main text￣□￣｜｜
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In fact, it was a coincidence that I saw your article when I was browsing the historical time travel category at about 1 o'clock in the middle of the night yesterday, so I immediately paid attention to it when I saw it on BS today. Last night I thought, if I read this copy, I wouldn't want to click on it. [The author should not be angry~] Now come in and take a look, without talking about the content of the article, can your copywriter be replaced? 1. There are too many words and it's too confusing [Who cares to read it carefully for a long time? 2. I personally don't like the word [even] appearing frequently. It's rare to see this word, really. 3. I can't understand your copywriting. It's a bit confusing 4. You made a three-dimensional cover that takes up a lot of space [Get rid of it, you don't customize it now, so it takes up space, and it takes a long time for the reader to see the main text￣□￣｜｜ ***********