This article is a fanfic of the game Legend of Sword and Fairy IV. The female protagonist is original, non-travel and non-reborn. The male protagonist Murong Ziying may involve the ancient sword plot. By default, Murong Ziying is the real person Ziyin.
In addition, let me state in advance that the author has no feelings for the three protagonists, especially Han Lingsha! ! ! On the contrary, I have a very good impression of the Qionghua Sect, and I also understand the leader Suyao very well. She is considered a fan of Suyao, so the heroine will side with the Qionghua Sect and Suyao. Those who do not accept this setting should not read it.
Reader comments
The first part is good, but the flashback chapter is too long. In addition, the heroine's character becomes inexplicably jealous in love and the ending is too rushed.
Wow, let me praise you first. The supernatural atmosphere and dungeon design of the whole book are really touching. Many scenes made me go numb while watching it. It was also very enjoyable to catch up to the end.
However, I was a little confused when reading this section from Chapter 42 to Chapter 43. Although it can be seen that the character perspective has been switched, there seems to be a sense of disconnection in the plot connection. In the previous part, the protagonist was still confronting the woman in the sarcophagus in the cave extending from the dark well. In the next section, she suddenly arrived at the ancient tomb. Another female protagonist was already fighting with the ancient corpse. The woman in the sarcophagus suddenly disappeared, which made me think that I had missed the order or skipped the chapter.
I can understand that the intention here may be to create a sense of weirdness and information disparity, but because there is a lack of transition in the middle, the timeline and space transitions will be slightly difficult to connect. I feel that if one or two transitions could be added, or a brief explanation of how the characters came to the ancient tomb and where the woman in the sarcophagus went, the overall reading experience would be smoother and the sense of suspense would be more complete.
Of course, this is just my personal reading experience. Overall, it's still very good-looking, especially the atmosphere and thriller are really strong!
The first part is good, but the flashback chapter is too long. In addition, the heroine's character becomes inexplicably jealous in love and the ending is too rushed.
Wow, let me praise you first. The supernatural atmosphere and dungeon design of the whole book are really touching. Many scenes made me go numb while watching it. It was also very enjoyable to catch up to the end. However, I was a little confused when reading this section from Chapter 42 to Chapter 43. Although it can be seen that the character perspective has been switched, there seems to be a sense of disconnection in the plot connection. In the previous part, the protagonist was still confronting the woman in the sarcophagus in the cave extending from the dark well. In the next section, she suddenly arrived at the ancient tomb. Another female protagonist was already fighting with the ancient corpse. The woman in the sarcophagus suddenly disappeared, which made me think that I had missed the order or skipped the chapter. I can understand that the intention here may be to create a sense of weirdness and information disparity, but because there is a lack of transition in the middle, the timeline and space transitions will be slightly difficult to connect. I feel that if one or two transitions could be added, or a brief explanation of how the characters came to the ancient tomb and where the woman in the sarcophagus went, the overall reading experience would be smoother and the sense of suspense would be more complete. Of course, this is just my personal reading experience. Overall, it's still very good-looking, especially the atmosphere and thriller are really strong!