I didn't expect that today I would also become a member of a time traveler, but who am I playing?
Is he the owner of that body? It's just who's replacement for that person ------
Reader comments
高成真的是粗中有细啊,与妖孽袁朗简直是配合默契
SF~
Come on come on! Author's reply:
Xi~~I see you again~~^_^ Thank you~
I agree with the first part of Downstairs' sentence. Even if she doesn't wear it, she's still a Mary Sue.
Xiangxiang, the love story of warlords has been written about by gangsters, so it is inevitable that there will be the shadow of "Bi", but you also have your own style, I like this type of writing, keep up the good work,
I think this novel has great potential. I have met the author twice. She is a classmate of my junior sister. Like my junior sister, she is a very unique girl. The writing style of this article is very good, but I think it is a bit like a Gothic novel. The characters The description is too rough. According to my junior sister, the author of this article will finish this article soon. However, here is a piece of advice for the author of this article: You are writing about martial arts and romance, and there may be some tragedy. Therefore, this kind of article is mainly long, and even short stories should be thought-provoking. Chew carefully and reflect slowly, this kind of article is a good article. Next, the junior sister said, you all did not do well in the mid-term exam. As a student of the provincial middle and high school, I want to remind you: It doesn't matter this time. This time will not determine your life. I will I used to be a loser, naughty, mischievous, and always failed in exams. However, after my own efforts, like my cousin, I was admitted to the provincial high school. I never thought at the time that Qingxue in your article is a strong and kind girl, and I believe you are too.
You don't have a computer at home, so you asked a classmate to send it for you. I would also like to thank the classmate who sent it for you. She is often mentioned in my junior sister's articles. She is equally smart and a good student. Her grades are very good. I believe she will be a good teacher and helpful friend for you and your junior sister. My junior sister said that her novel "Daily Classmates" will be This is the last novel she wrote and will be updated until she graduates from the third year of junior high school. I think your relationship must be very good, otherwise she would not mention you so frequently in her novels. In the physical education class, you played together and seemed to be very happy. After that, I hope that your articles can continue, and the more you write, the better.
Come on, I like no cp, I support you
Okay, although there is still no update, I still want to spread the flowers~~~~~~~
突然就进入了主题~
(大拇指)做得好
(旁白:乃的脑袋里究竟在装什么==)
No way... I almost laughed when I read the movie review you wrote... I just finished watching it two days ago, and I followed your article all over again...
高成真的是粗中有细啊,与妖孽袁朗简直是配合默契
SF~ Come on come on! Author's reply: Xi~~I see you again~~^_^ Thank you~
小白好清纯可爱啊
呵呵~ 像吗?笑,青苹果~ “很好啊!最终得到了理解,但是最终不清楚的气氛,到底是什么?该不该去弄清楚?很多很多的问题…… ”小鸳,现在才看到你的留言,不清楚的气氛,确实是这篇有点故意的特点,笑~也许答案要到文中人的信件或日记中去找了。^_^ “其实想专程来问一个问题....苹果的糖分多还是西瓜的糖份多? ” 自然是西瓜糖份多~ ^_^
让你更一章真不容易
If you see it on the post bar, come and rate it!
我跟过来啦! 主角终于凑一对啦!
貌似有点。。。。。 莫名其妙~ 的说。。。
看完了...半天回不过神... 咳咳...其实这篇文无意中从天某那戳中的,再接下来就被‘父嫁’一词给萌住了【但人家很CJ哟~】 不得不说,我看前几张的时候是一目十行随便瞄了瞄的,但不知道什么时候就认真起来了。 经年桑是个情感细腻的好娃,曦妹妹和斑爷爷的情感变化非常有趣。有温暖有心酸包括那么一点点小虐... 宇智波是变态的家族!能力变态性格变态就连情感也变态我去! 看到一半的时候我还和朋友说我在看‘父女恋’的小说,于是理所当然的收到了‘变态’这一词的回复。【讨厌~都说了人家很CJ啦~】 也觉得曦的属性不像是小说女主,有私心,不圣母,有天赋但也挺悲剧的含副作用...但感觉不错,反而觉得更加真实化。 再说佐助和鼬那两个悲剧,在经年桑的文里面鼬哥哥死了我看了真的想泪奔然后抽打经年桑。【怒】 佐助也挺二的,和斑抢女人就显得更二了。 不过就像经年桑说的‘佐助二一点有爱’...俺不排斥佐助~ 曦死了,看到那一段我真的喷了啊喷了,难过死我了,老子不要悲剧啊混蛋!很好,经年桑乃顺利的牵动了俺的情感神经。 再后来曦从飞机上跳下去俺还是很聪明的猜到了曦会回来,那个时候也想了很多,斑会说些什么,曦会说些什么... 不过最后竟然只是以一句‘嗯欢迎回来我的曦’结尾。 经年你个混蛋!多写一些JQ你会怀孕吗?!【(#‵′)抽打经年】 好吧,还要哀悼一下炮灰小蕨...挺喜欢她的,可惜被斑爷over了...虽然这才像他的做法吧... 最后,这确实是观后感哟~是看了这么多章所有感想的结合哟~经年桑看这乱七八糟废话的就知道了吧... 最最后!我很喜欢这篇文!也是第一次写这么多字数的评!【高呼万岁】
I agree with the first part of Downstairs' sentence. Even if she doesn't wear it, she's still a Mary Sue.
Xiangxiang, the love story of warlords has been written about by gangsters, so it is inevitable that there will be the shadow of "Bi", but you also have your own style, I like this type of writing, keep up the good work,
男猪很多时候让我觉得他很凉薄诶~~~
夜 我会给烧钱的
求作者每一章都加粗加长啊!! 用第一人称真是炒鸡有代入感!而且语言神马的特别有特色! 赶紧更新,眼巴巴的等着呢!!!
I think this novel has great potential. I have met the author twice. She is a classmate of my junior sister. Like my junior sister, she is a very unique girl. The writing style of this article is very good, but I think it is a bit like a Gothic novel. The characters The description is too rough. According to my junior sister, the author of this article will finish this article soon. However, here is a piece of advice for the author of this article: You are writing about martial arts and romance, and there may be some tragedy. Therefore, this kind of article is mainly long, and even short stories should be thought-provoking. Chew carefully and reflect slowly, this kind of article is a good article. Next, the junior sister said, you all did not do well in the mid-term exam. As a student of the provincial middle and high school, I want to remind you: It doesn't matter this time. This time will not determine your life. I will I used to be a loser, naughty, mischievous, and always failed in exams. However, after my own efforts, like my cousin, I was admitted to the provincial high school. I never thought at the time that Qingxue in your article is a strong and kind girl, and I believe you are too. You don't have a computer at home, so you asked a classmate to send it for you. I would also like to thank the classmate who sent it for you. She is often mentioned in my junior sister's articles. She is equally smart and a good student. Her grades are very good. I believe she will be a good teacher and helpful friend for you and your junior sister. My junior sister said that her novel "Daily Classmates" will be This is the last novel she wrote and will be updated until she graduates from the third year of junior high school. I think your relationship must be very good, otherwise she would not mention you so frequently in her novels. In the physical education class, you played together and seemed to be very happy. After that, I hope that your articles can continue, and the more you write, the better.
Come on, I like no cp, I support you
Okay, although there is still no update, I still want to spread the flowers~~~~~~~
突然就进入了主题~ (大拇指)做得好 (旁白:乃的脑袋里究竟在装什么==)
No way... I almost laughed when I read the movie review you wrote... I just finished watching it two days ago, and I followed your article all over again...