[HP] Songs of Hometown

Coming from Chapter 6, Remus's character will not be like this. He directly kisses the heroine and talks about being his girlfriend. But it's still a hard work, thank you to the author

Wow, this debt is really increasing🤣

Why do we write fan fiction? Just for everyone to be happy! ! ! ! Woooooooooo Lemmy is finally free oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Free! ! ! ! Great, wow, wow, Lemmy doesn't have to feel so inferior! ! ! !

It smells so good, so good, so good, so good, the dragon food, I eat it, I eat it, I eat it, I eat it, I eat it [Star Eye][Star Eye]

After reading the author's explanation in this chapter, I feel that it may indeed be because the younger brother is regarded as the author's projection in the article, making him appear to be a bit of a tool, which is a pity. After all, I actually quite like the character of the younger brother. He is a very gentle boy. I really hope he can get a better ending.

Made me cry. It's not because of sadness. They have always loved each other from their school days to their adulthood and then to their old age. Although there were many emotional problems in the process, luckily they have all come through. After experiencing life and death, they are more in love, and they are together even in death. It is really touching. Thanks to the author!

So sad, why so many people died, Dumbledore, Moody, Fred, and even the heroine's brother died. Isn't this a fanfic? Why can't it have a happy ending?

I really like the werewolf chapter. Because I was bitten by a werewolf and turned into a werewolf, it was really painful to live a life of hiding in Tibet. It's great to see people like this in the fandom being able to find relief.

Ooooh my poor brother?

After reading so many HP fics, this book touched me the most. It wasn't like a cool novel or focused on romance, but it touched me very much. While telling stories, my wife also discussed human psychology and growth with us. As a reader, you can really empathize with this book! Recommend everyone to come to Kangkang!

Except for the protagonist, the characters are thin and have nothing to do with the limited perspective of the male and female protagonists. Most of the time in the HP book, the perspective follows Harry alone. There are many vivid and three-dimensional characters written in just a few strokes. For example, in the seventh movie, Lupine left the pregnant Tonks to find Harry and was scolded by him and rushed home. This plot is actually a very small part of the main plot of the seventh Horcrux. It is just a small matter that the protagonist handles during the journey, but it immediately reflects Lupine's fear and avoidance in intimate relationships, and the image of being irresponsible because of trauma is immediately established. The role of perspective switching in non-third-person omniscient works is to show more things that the characters see. Many things can only be seen by a specific character, and many feelings can only be produced by a specific character. The weak character image has something to do with the plot design and text expression, but has little to do with the perspective.

It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the setting and original world view arrangement. Ah, the relationship between gods and modern humans, I can't help but think of some classic model dramas of Xingyue (. The design of the emotional line is reasonable, but due to the lack of descriptions of daily interactions, it feels like a lot of things have been lost in fast forward. Two People suddenly fell in love with each other... My favorite emotional plot is the one where Lupine loses his mind and makes trouble in the bar after the First World War. Oh, this man looks like a good gentleman, but he is actually so twisted and awkward. He has a hundred and eighty dark thoughts in his heart???

Why am I dying? [Cracked] I feel like I can still write two hundred chapters in the outline [Crying]

It's great to be able to lift the curse.

Even if they die together! ! (Gritting teeth)

I have always thought that I should be afraid of nothing but the sun. I am an indescribable creature with no neck to chop off. I didn't expect that I would die from the poison of the wisteria flower in the end. This is too...

Ah? ? ? Ah? ? This is too simple. . . Ah?

Gryffindor: What? Boss point? Just go in!

I feel that it is better to kill the traitor forever.

Woooooooooooooooooooo brother

It's so beautiful, every character has flesh and blood, and the description of Remus is really not OOC at all. The longing for the future when he was a student, and the confusion after graduation were all written so well. When I read the original work, I felt that he was a bit cowardly and evasive in his feelings. The same is true in this article, but because of the existence of Kimmel, he is braver than in the original work. The two of them are mutually healing beings [poor][poor][poor]

Let's relive it! It was probably the first time I read this article in 22 years. It really reminded me of when I was thirteen... I don't know that it has been a long time and the author still hasn't read it. Anyway, I would like to share my feelings below (it's more about impressions because I haven't read it for a long time). The character that impressed me the most in this article is Liam because he has a vitality in him, whether he studies medicine to heal himself or bravely joins the war and sacrifices his life for peace. It is the power exuded by this character. This power really inspired me deeply. For example, before the high school entrance examination in 2024, I felt slack and collapsed due to too much pressure. In the last two weeks, I stayed at home reading the article. When I didn't study anything, I thought of him. Finally, it inspired me to continue to forge ahead on the road to study. Pasong is the character I dare not face the most. Maybe it's because the element of his future being ruined due to an accident scares me, who is cowardly and loves feathers. Anyway, I'm very happy when I think of him having a good ending in the end, but I also wonder how he will integrate into society? How to face life? I'm back to my original thoughts [covering my face and laughing] In fact, reading the timeline of this article is really shocking. In 17 years, I was just a child under ten years old. In 20 years, I had just started to get in touch with Harry Potter. The forum and some of the competitions on it (I don't know how to describe it, I'm sorry), to me, it's more like things from the last century [covering my face and laughing] Finally, I want to say that your article made me interested in Irish culture. From the Middle Ages to modern history, this country also has that kind of perseverance and non-giving up spirit, and there are many people who sincerely admire it. What also reminds me of this article is the composer Field who created the music genre of nocturne (I don't know if I am right) Okay, I have said so much without realizing it. I don't know how to end. So I wish the author and all readers like me a happy life, good health, and happiness every day [red heart]

If you don't write HP anymore, you can consider writing Western fantasy. I will always follow your articles!

Why is there no more AAAAA! What a perfect campus light comedy!

2025.5.26.00.23 Three brushes completed [eat melon]

Hahahahahaha, you are so jealous, you are taking revenge.

Satoru is the cutest cat in the world!

Oh, I thought I was too busy for two days to read novels, so I would have something new to eat QAQ

With the re-release of "The Philosopher's Stone" after the epidemic, I once again rekindled my love for the magical world. Ever since I opened the tome of the First Humanities Club in elementary school, this magical and extremely real world has accompanied me from childhood to an ignorant teenager. It is even worthy of criticism: I dare not watch Deathly Hallows because I am afraid of the end of the story. But I really like the world of Harry Potter. To be honest, I have read the first three novels at least ten times. It was a fairy tale-like world full of magic and legend. I loved every person and every chapter. Watching fandoms has become an emotional projection of my love for HP. I enjoy watching all kinds of HP fanfics from BL, BG and BL, witnessing countless trips to Diagon Alley, countless Hogwarts Express, countless sorting ceremonies... In the era when Jinjiang HP fan fiction was most prevalent, it was also the era when I was the most middle-aged. I also liked bad guys and the cool-looking Snake Yard, and felt that the Lion Yard were all prejudiced idiots. In 2020, when I was in the second grade of middle school, I grew up, and Jinjiang even canceled the HP label, but I was still pleasantly surprised to see many doujins in Jinjiang that are still being serialized and of very good quality. The story is no longer stuck in the original text, it is in Hogwarts. Many stories have been extended to France, Germany, including Ireland in this article, and they no longer revolve around the Gryffindor Iron Triangle and Hogwarts campus life. I am very happy to see so many stories about their grandparents, parents, and even their children. My favorite pro-era is no longer just a group of stereotyped elders, their adventure stories and the turbulent collision of the times are also brilliantly performed. Among the robbers, my favorite is Sirius, followed by Lupine. One starts off with a good hand, but continues to suffer a series of tragedies, while the other seems to be soaked in pain from the beginning to the end, and can only occasionally surface to take a breather. Remus Lupine in "Hometown Ballad" was also interpreted very well and reasonably by my wife. Remus, a young man who hides his werewolf life and is tortured every month, can't help but fall in love with a girl named Kemel. The hesitation in the middle is full of youthful feeling. He thinks that love can be controlled, but it is revealed in every aspect. The young man faced obstacles in finding a job, and his self-esteem as a top student was shattered. Familiar people left one by one in the flames of war. The sadness, anger, hatred for one's werewolf identity and powerless despair were all written very well. Speaking of the heroine Kemel, the Druid setting is really cool, at least it is a relatively new angle in the ones I have seen. But under the strong ability are the character flaws caused by the childhood tragedy. The only time they spoke bravely allowed them to get together smoothly. However, Kmel and Remus's own inner character flaws made the relationship between the two seem sweet, but in fact they were walking on thin ice. The mutual redemption love made both parties extra cautious. In order to maintain the relationship, they did not think too much or communicate too much. The lack of trust and communication also led Claire to leave Remus and go to the Red Keep. (To be honest, I cried while watching that part. I'm too old to watch more abuse.) Fortunately, they reunited later, resolved their misunderstandings, and held a wedding. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the story stopping here, but this is also one of the things that stands out from other fans: the completeness and complexity of the story. It's not just about sweetness for the sake of sweetness, or torture for the sake of torture, all the characters' thoughts and actions are reasonable. The writing style of the author's wife is very good. The Werewolf Curse Breaking Chapter takes us back to the story of the Age of Gods, and can be reasonably connected with the werewolf story. It also makes the setting of the heroine Druid more complete, and it reads like a magnificent adventure of a Western fantasy. The Red Keep chapter recycles the previous foreshadowing and settings, allowing everyone to see how far the druid's power can be achieved. Although there are many perspective problems, there is a section in the middle that is a bit confusing to read. Maybe it will be more exciting to expand and write. (The one who finally got along with me was stabbed in the back and fell into a coma! I'm so angry and anxious!) Although the problems between the characters were reconciled, and there was a moment of warmth, the shaky war in the background version still came, and Liam was taken away unexpectedly, the biggest tool of our male and female protagonists, Adi. Although, Remus and Claire no longer needed Liam in their relationship in the future, so he died, and the heroine felt the cruelty of the war. Liam was so miserable. But this is a more real life, with joys and sorrows, people coming in and people leaving. Thanks to my wife for bringing me such a true and wonderful story about the magical world. I believe that there really is such a parallel world with gentle whistles and gentle moons.