On the Time-Traveling Woman's Collapse

God who passed the trial hahahahahahaha I really want to die laughing

After chasing it, talk about your feelings. This is a typical atypical novel. If you tell it well, the story is novel, and if you tell it poorly, it means the writing is arbitrary. After Yunxiu was sent away, the first half of the novel was written smoothly and smoothly. Some of the plots and the author's writing were refreshing to me. I read the first half with great pleasure. However, starting from the second half, although I can't tell exactly where it started, I felt that the story moved too fast... Many things could be explained in more detail but were just passed over in one stroke. The disappearance of Shi Qi has no beginning or tail, King Jing's sudden change of character, Yun Xiu has no sense of existence, as if he has changed from the protagonist to the background of a master. Board, the novel seems to have turned into a lengthy confession of Fourteen, with a sloppy ending (although the unfinished ending seems very meaningful, but in my opinion, among the unfinished novels I have read, except for Gone with the Wind, the ending is just right, most authors have compromised the completion of the novel in pursuit of the so-called meaning). I think a reader's comment on the first chapter is quite right. People who like this novel like it very much, but people who don't like it can't stand it at all, because the shortcomings and advantages are very obvious. I prefer the side I like. No matter how many flaws it has, this story is quite unique and touches me more than the same story.

In order to facilitate reading, I looked up the unknown characters: (yue), the fourth tone (zhuo), the second tone, (yuan), the first tone, (chu), the second tone???┒Lie

No wonder after reading the second half, I just felt that it was tasteless and a pity to throw away. After reading the comments below, I realized that it was because the protagonist of the story gradually moved from Yunxiu to Shi Shi, and the female-oriented one became a male memoir...

I was really caught off guard. But it's quite reasonable. The prince died before he succeeded to the throne, and Yun Laner married Shi Shi and became the queen. It was in line with the prince's prediction. The Fourteenth always couldn't remember it after he became the emperor. What's wrong is that the Fourteenth took power before he became the emperor, so he started to forget Yunxiu. Woo hoo hoo, mom's stamina is coming up

Hey, after reading it at night, I was immediately depressed.

I couldn't understand what the story was for a while.

What is Xiaoyao Dao? Will Yunxiu be free in the end, or will she become a concubine and a fairy? Where did Linghu Shiqi go? Will Shiro Shiro marry Yun Lan again in the end? I think many readers and even the author himself feel that the book is "wrong", probably because of these unanswered questions. I started to get tired of all types of online novels two years ago, because no matter what the theme, no matter what the direction, the story must eventually have an ending, and most of them will be successful and everyone will be happy. This feeling of inescapable fate makes me feel exhausted. This time I have been on vacation for too long and was very bored. I thought about Ah Li and Xie Lian who were always stuck in my throat. When I came back and took a look, I found that there was another update that seemed to be from the same series... To be honest, although I also felt a little disappointed, I didn't feel that the writing was broken, and I even felt vaguely surprised to a certain extent - this is the kind of ending I have been waiting for. It is not an ending according to the traditional definition, because it does not seem to have any clues about the future of the protagonists. He did not make any explicit arrangements for his fate, and did not complete the task from beginning to end. He even missed a suspected male lead candidate... (I am a little bit resentful about this! This time I really like the cute and cute type of Linghu Shiqi! The result... Hum) There is no arrangement, no perfunctory, and there is no such explanation as "breaking up as we go". There seems to be too much blank space. For readers who are accustomed to the author explaining everything at the end, if it is not fully explained, he will write more extra chapters to explain it clearly. It is really not easy to accept. The two male lead candidates confirmed that they were attracted, but Yun Xiu didn't seem to be interested. She seemed to be just dropping in with someone and accompanying him for a journey. She didn't care how long the journey would take. It might only be determined by the distance of the journey. She deviated from the exam syllabus of the Zhai Dou Division from the very beginning, but the unfettered Taoist heart she cultivated may make her an outstanding graduate of the Fantasy Division. (Besides, it's a bit far away. For example, if Yunxiu becomes an immortal, will there be a chance to become an immortal after leaving the examination room... But this is just my own random imagination) Life moves forward smoothly, and the story does not have to have an ending. It is not a bad thing to leave some blank space and let Yunxiu write it by herself. It is also a kind of faint relief for me who is trapped in a small space outside the book, unable to escape from the mortal world, and unable to glimpse the future. Also, although I know that he is wandering around to cultivate immortality, I really want to know the whereabouts of Linghu Shiqi! It's not impossible to have a side story to talk about it a little bit : D

The more involved with the world of mortals, the harder it was to remember Yunxiu, so Xiaosi kept forgetting things, so in the end he forgot about Yunxiu and married Yunlan

Could it be that he was originally an omega?

What the hell is this ending?

Alas, my seventeenth year

When the heroine comes to this world, does it need to be set as a graduation exam? The ending seems to ignore this layer of nesting. Since you don't even have to worry about test scores, why do you want to be so close to Fourteen? Acquiring someone only increases the pain of separation. How happy it is not to see each other when we are together. I really have no understanding. When I read this chapter, the baby next door was crying, and I felt pity for him. He still has such a long way to go.

It makes sense downstairs. The saddest thing about Yunxiu's story is that she herself can't live in peace and quiet, but Linghu can. Various people in the article have various shortcomings, which makes the good side appear to be particularly good, and people like Fourteen seem to be even better... But in the final analysis, this is not Yunxiu's world. All the bad things are that the system is an economic foundation, and there is no good foundation to build a conceptual superstructure. There are indeed many places in the story with beautiful angles, but when it stops here, it always feels like she is trapped inside.

I'm really a bit disappointed and my nose is sore. 14 And Yunxiu are so good. But Yunxiu originally planned to accompany 14 for the first life, otherwise half his life will be fine. After all, there is a marriage line! That's right!

I feel sad and sad, but I still like it so much

? ? Why is it so bad? This counts as he, right? The two of them are at least together now, right?

After much effort, I finally finished reading this book. I knew I was going to fall apart when I got to the middle of it, but I felt stuck for half of the story, so I finished reading it anyway. Although I have already guessed what the ending will be, I still feel uncomfortable after seeing it.

The book is finally finished. It took me two days to read it. Feeling very sad now. I recently read "The Fall of the Princess" again. Although there are occasional cheerful and modern words, and the third episode is finally completed, the whole book still has a touch of sadness, just like "Run Lola Run". /I thought this book was cheerful at the beginning, but after a long break, I thought that in the end the two of them were happily together day and night, although that was true from a certain perspective. Some of the words in the book are still a little jumpy and unsmooth, but as the night dims and the stars become more and more obvious, the sadness that the story gradually deepens and foreshadows caught me. From a certain perspective, 17 and 14 are two personalities of the same person. 14 Has always been too perfect, and 17 is like another possibility of him. The earliest recluse is like 14 determined to abandon his past/restlessness/, and finish the mortal world like a martyr. If Yunxiu hadn't met 14, he would have disappeared with 17. In addition, this book has a special sense of reality. The characters are not masked. Although the stepmother is vicious, it is partly due to her husband; Father Liu is a capable minister but has no love for his eldest daughter. Li Yuan can actually become a naughty child and become a prince with a sense of people's livelihood; naturally, there is no need for extra chapters. , The extra chapter is also about a past life episode occasionally mentioned in another book: 14 and Yunxiu should only have a mortal relationship, and then it can only be broken off, just like Jane Eyre's cousin, no matter how good he is, he is a missionary saint who is willing to be martyred, while Jane Eyre pursues ordinary love with a family. (To be honest, almost every time I read the author's ancient words, I will cry for a long time unconsciously after reading it. I have never encountered this with other authors)

This! At once! Over! Got it!

Although it's a pity that it's over, it's really good since we can't change the ending.

This is the first article I read by Akaashi fan, and when I read other articles, I feel it's not right = =#

Is this the exam where the candidates were lost? Alas, it's hard to calm down after all

"The last invitation", so it won't happen after that. Will Yunxiu just leave like Huayang?

This ending felt very real and reminded me of Little Women. If it weren't for submitting to the market, Joe would have remained unmarried for the rest of his life.

I read all the comments on the last chapter, especially the author's personal replies. Sometimes readers feel that what would have been better for the characters in the book is not as powerful as the author's final conclusion. This is the character's world and the author's world.

Can anyone tell me if I want to abandon the article?

I hate it so much. Now, I was caught off guard and read an article about be

Why ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Why did the prince say that if King Xue's hexagram is accurate, he would have no choice but to marry him?