All rewritten. The work that has been conceived for almost three years is unexpectedly unfinished. OTL.
Anyway, I don't want all my hard work to go to waste. Even if only you can read it, write it.
First of all, I want to say that the Xia in the title is the name of the country, not the surname of the heroine, so don't think that the article is not on topic.
Secondly, if you think there is something wrong with Mars, please feel free to mention it and I will correct it.
Again, I have worked very hard to consult a lot of relevant information and tried my best to make the article authentic. I also referred to the records of the Qing Dynasty Hui Dian and other records in the settings.
Then, my writing style is not gorgeous, but more philosophical. I don't like to write parallel prose filled with rhetoric. Hollow space.
In the end, I will never give up.
As mentioned before, write even if you are the only one who can read it.