The work is tentatively titled Clouds Cover the Moon
The story is: The protagonist is a cultivator in modern times. He finally reaches the golden elixir stage and can go down the mountain. As a result, he inexplicably ends up in a different world, and in the form of a baby.
But this body can also be said to be the body of the protagonist. She is extremely talented, and the golden elixir from her previous life is broken into her veins.
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Haha, this is a semi-funny article, I hope you will read it more. Please support me, thank you,
After writing a few chapters, I found that my work had many problems.
For example, the beginning is in the first person, but there are a lot of third-person plots in the article.
Moreover, the article is very scattered and does not highlight the key points. The key point should be the protagonist, but there is not much content about the protagonist in the article.
Wait, there are still many questions
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But I am very grateful to those friends who gave me opinions on my works. Thank you!
I hope you can give me more suggestions next time so that I can improve.
Don't seek to be the strongest, just seek to be better!
I have stopped writing this work for now. I will write some short articles first and then send them out. I hope more friends can help me point out my mistakes. I will be very grateful!
I'll continue writing this when my level improves a bit.