I'm just an idiot here to reminisce and make up points. . . . ORZ
Make up points silently. . . . .
Piece: Layman, please come back soon and update the article. . . My hair has turned gray from waiting T_T
It's a pity. A good man like Wu Wu should have a good ending.
Nothing warmer
This kind of kidda feels more mature and smarter than the one in the cartoon.
In cartoons, I always feel that she is as cute and beautiful as a blank sheet of paper
Come on, write a children's story
Very nice. Thank you very much.
Xuanxuan, it sounds very friendly. I like this feeling.
I read the serialization of "Paper Marriage" in the Hefei Evening News and found it online. Now I have been reading "The Story of a Child". We are about to see the lovely Dongdong, come on Xuanxuan! Come on, dong dong!
I always browse your works, but never comment or rate them. I almost despise myself. I send you a bunch of flowers. I hope you like them! :)
Why? I really want to know~~~
I'm looking forward to a villain, a bad girl or a bad man, who looks more interesting.
TAT... I just realized now that we all like to read Honkai rants and spoof articles recently - -|||
Mama, keep up the good work and update the article [I haven't been online for a long time in a foreign country and only then did I realize that it was updated so little... I'm so sorry = =
Not too bad. . . . . .
Support support support! ! !
Update it quickly!!!!!! Why not update it!!!!!! The author can't be so lazy, right?
I just saw the big article today. It's well written. Is it from NP?
Butt, oh, how sweet it is. People who watched the extra episode were filled with tears.
Boss Lian is so cruel that he is unpopular~
How can we torture it as we imagine? Boss, you really save the trouble and give readers space for imagination in a beautiful name.
Dddddddddddd Author reply:
Thank you for your support!
It's so confusing. This article is the one that brought me the most tears later. Why can't we be together even though we have been entangled for seven generations? The ending without the extra story is so cruel to Liu, another stepmother.
Why is the drama so similar to "Lonely Night in the Empty Courtyard"? However, I still finished reading both. Both books are the same and have no ending. The love of an emperor always has a beginning and an end. Long live the process!
Is the future Wei Fu the same as the previous Wei Hua?
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Then I don't want to see it either
Finally finished reading, happy ending~~~~Spread your flowers
Actually I like your story very much
Like it very much
Because\'bland\'
Copywriter You also said
This article contains no comedy, no sadomasochism, and no deep emotional entanglements.
The heroine is not the omnipotent queen either
The main purpose of the character is not to collapse
On these points
I think you wrote it very well
At least it's not very different from what you originally expected.
I can see that you put a lot of effort into not ruining the main plot and character personalities.
Actually, I read a lot of fanfics
Basically, someone will forcefully infiltrate the plot.
It'll be fun to watch at first
But then after reading a lot of articles
It will feel strange
Just give an example
Just\"On the spaceship, Xiaoku tells the past\"
Many authors always let the protagonist steal the show and run to enlighten Xiaoku
Ask him to let go of his hatred, otherwise he will become empty
But
How can such a burden be let go in just a few words?
Can't empathize with it, haven't experienced it
How can you say something like that that seems reasonable but is actually harmless?
What's even more ridiculous is, why can Xiaoku let go after hearing those words?
So
When dealing with this plot
I really think you wrote it very well
As far as 'foreknowledge' is concerned
Personally I think you explained it very well
If the protagonist always says that he can predict
So what should we do after the plot of 'this year' develops?
Should I just end the article in a hurry?
Then
Meet celebrities
I think this is understandable
Because the self-created corner is something that should not exist in the first place.
Without meeting, how can we connect the plot?
Should we just let the protagonist live in seclusion somewhere?
Just write it like this
\"I traveled through time because I didn't want to meet celebrities among hunters,
So I lived in seclusion, and after a few decades, I died, end of story. \"
This is such a short fanfic!
For me personally
As long as the story doesn't appear too unreasonable,
All within the acceptable range
(Is it possible that I have just traveled through time and have no money and can still stay in a hotel without being rejected? The boss is so kind that he jumps off the building and gives away free of charge?)
Because the existence of some small unreasonable things in animation is necessary
Otherwise, how would the story continue?
Like the "Bamboo Dragonfly" in "Tinker Bell"
If we really want to rationalize "Bamboo Dragonfly"
The airflow during operation can separate a person's head from the body!
Now let's talk about routines.
Because the article is created based on your own "want"
In other words, it is the writer's own desired plot.
Then, more or less, every writer will have the same thoughts
But I think that when there are more fanfics,
It mainly depends on the choice, expression, and handling of the protagonist.
"It is very important for the protagonist to catch the eyes of celebrities"
Otherwise, as soon as we meet the protagonist, he will be killed and tortured into a "winter melon", how can we still write nonsense?
If we really want to pick out many small unreasonable words,
Then why not just write a mystery essay?
That's why I can't figure out why some people would like to criticize writers based on these
However, after criticizing, I didn't give any suggestions.
Criticism≠suggestion!
Fanfiction is in my understanding
It should be a work for self-entertainment, right?
How can you demand perfection?
If you are perfect in everything, you can place your work in a "perfect" position.
ㄜ.. I don't know what I'm fighting for either.
This is the first time I have so many messages for a writer XD
I'm not very good at comforting people either.
But I want to emphasize
I really like your article!
Not only because of your seriousness but also because of your writing style
Also because of your persistence^^
I hope you don't lose heart.
It's not that no one is watching, it's that you are too diligent in updating.
Younger sister! What's her name?
Hey hey hey, do you know that the Great Emperor Qinghua of the East Ji and Taiyi the Suffering Heavenly Lord are the incarnations of the Yuanshi Heavenly Lord (correctly). Although they can be respectfully called Taiyi Zhenren, they are not really his disciples...
Ahem, this character is quite similar to the Qing Emperor Dongwang Gong. One is transformed by the essence of Nine Yangs, and the other is transformed by the innate Yang Qi. However, Qing Emperor is the son of Yuanshi Tianzun (the Queen Mother of the West is the daughter of the Queen Mother)... Haha, I must underestimate Yuanshi Tianzun! This is a real BOSS...
I started working, and I would take time to watch Xiaoyuda every weekend~Press my thumbprint first!
I'm just an idiot here to reminisce and make up points. . . . ORZ
Make up points silently. . . . . Piece: Layman, please come back soon and update the article. . . My hair has turned gray from waiting T_T
It's a pity. A good man like Wu Wu should have a good ending.
Nothing warmer This kind of kidda feels more mature and smarter than the one in the cartoon. In cartoons, I always feel that she is as cute and beautiful as a blank sheet of paper
Come on, write a children's story
Very nice. Thank you very much.
Xuanxuan, it sounds very friendly. I like this feeling. I read the serialization of "Paper Marriage" in the Hefei Evening News and found it online. Now I have been reading "The Story of a Child". We are about to see the lovely Dongdong, come on Xuanxuan! Come on, dong dong! I always browse your works, but never comment or rate them. I almost despise myself. I send you a bunch of flowers. I hope you like them! :)
Why? I really want to know~~~
I'm looking forward to a villain, a bad girl or a bad man, who looks more interesting.
TAT... I just realized now that we all like to read Honkai rants and spoof articles recently - -||| Mama, keep up the good work and update the article [I haven't been online for a long time in a foreign country and only then did I realize that it was updated so little... I'm so sorry = =
Not too bad. . . . . .
Support support support! ! !
Update it quickly!!!!!! Why not update it!!!!!! The author can't be so lazy, right?
I just saw the big article today. It's well written. Is it from NP?
Butt, oh, how sweet it is. People who watched the extra episode were filled with tears. Boss Lian is so cruel that he is unpopular~
How can we torture it as we imagine? Boss, you really save the trouble and give readers space for imagination in a beautiful name.
Dddddddddddd Author reply: Thank you for your support!
It's so confusing. This article is the one that brought me the most tears later. Why can't we be together even though we have been entangled for seven generations? The ending without the extra story is so cruel to Liu, another stepmother.
Why is the drama so similar to "Lonely Night in the Empty Courtyard"? However, I still finished reading both. Both books are the same and have no ending. The love of an emperor always has a beginning and an end. Long live the process!
Is the future Wei Fu the same as the previous Wei Hua? ---------------------------------------- Then I don't want to see it either
Finally finished reading, happy ending~~~~Spread your flowers
Actually I like your story very much Like it very much Because\'bland\' Copywriter You also said This article contains no comedy, no sadomasochism, and no deep emotional entanglements. The heroine is not the omnipotent queen either The main purpose of the character is not to collapse On these points I think you wrote it very well At least it's not very different from what you originally expected. I can see that you put a lot of effort into not ruining the main plot and character personalities. Actually, I read a lot of fanfics Basically, someone will forcefully infiltrate the plot. It'll be fun to watch at first But then after reading a lot of articles It will feel strange Just give an example Just\"On the spaceship, Xiaoku tells the past\" Many authors always let the protagonist steal the show and run to enlighten Xiaoku Ask him to let go of his hatred, otherwise he will become empty But How can such a burden be let go in just a few words? Can't empathize with it, haven't experienced it How can you say something like that that seems reasonable but is actually harmless? What's even more ridiculous is, why can Xiaoku let go after hearing those words? So When dealing with this plot I really think you wrote it very well As far as 'foreknowledge' is concerned Personally I think you explained it very well If the protagonist always says that he can predict So what should we do after the plot of 'this year' develops? Should I just end the article in a hurry? Then Meet celebrities I think this is understandable Because the self-created corner is something that should not exist in the first place. Without meeting, how can we connect the plot? Should we just let the protagonist live in seclusion somewhere? Just write it like this \"I traveled through time because I didn't want to meet celebrities among hunters, So I lived in seclusion, and after a few decades, I died, end of story. \" This is such a short fanfic! For me personally As long as the story doesn't appear too unreasonable, All within the acceptable range (Is it possible that I have just traveled through time and have no money and can still stay in a hotel without being rejected? The boss is so kind that he jumps off the building and gives away free of charge?) Because the existence of some small unreasonable things in animation is necessary Otherwise, how would the story continue? Like the "Bamboo Dragonfly" in "Tinker Bell" If we really want to rationalize "Bamboo Dragonfly" The airflow during operation can separate a person's head from the body! Now let's talk about routines. Because the article is created based on your own "want" In other words, it is the writer's own desired plot. Then, more or less, every writer will have the same thoughts But I think that when there are more fanfics, It mainly depends on the choice, expression, and handling of the protagonist. "It is very important for the protagonist to catch the eyes of celebrities" Otherwise, as soon as we meet the protagonist, he will be killed and tortured into a "winter melon", how can we still write nonsense? If we really want to pick out many small unreasonable words, Then why not just write a mystery essay? That's why I can't figure out why some people would like to criticize writers based on these However, after criticizing, I didn't give any suggestions. Criticism≠suggestion! Fanfiction is in my understanding It should be a work for self-entertainment, right? How can you demand perfection? If you are perfect in everything, you can place your work in a "perfect" position. ㄜ.. I don't know what I'm fighting for either. This is the first time I have so many messages for a writer XD I'm not very good at comforting people either. But I want to emphasize I really like your article! Not only because of your seriousness but also because of your writing style Also because of your persistence^^ I hope you don't lose heart.
It's not that no one is watching, it's that you are too diligent in updating.
Younger sister! What's her name?
Hey hey hey, do you know that the Great Emperor Qinghua of the East Ji and Taiyi the Suffering Heavenly Lord are the incarnations of the Yuanshi Heavenly Lord (correctly). Although they can be respectfully called Taiyi Zhenren, they are not really his disciples... Ahem, this character is quite similar to the Qing Emperor Dongwang Gong. One is transformed by the essence of Nine Yangs, and the other is transformed by the innate Yang Qi. However, Qing Emperor is the son of Yuanshi Tianzun (the Queen Mother of the West is the daughter of the Queen Mother)... Haha, I must underestimate Yuanshi Tianzun! This is a real BOSS...
I started working, and I would take time to watch Xiaoyuda every weekend~Press my thumbprint first!