It has been criticized as "dry and tasteless" and "watery". If any students can persist in reading it, they will be rewarded.
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After watching this, my heart felt like it had been bombarded. I was very sad and wanted to cry.
I was so tortured that I couldn't get out for a long time. I would be in a daze just thinking about it.
Lu Da, when will you continue writing? T T
I cried like a dog. I imagined thousands of outcomes. "Zhang Tai" was the child of an immortal or something like that. I never imagined that he would be an immortal... It was so shocking that my heart was broken when I saw it at the end.
At the end, it felt like a shot to the heart.
Very good. I need to read a hundred sweet articles to recover.
A sad and ignorant story
Every piece of land that is not stained with blood is beautiful
Crying with snot and tears streaming down my face
I didn't pay attention to the puns made by the girls upstairs at first, but after thinking about it, I realized that it was really like this. Sendao remembered that he grew from 5 to 8 years old, which means that he has not been stagnant. Then when he is 70 years old, although he may not remember it, he has enough time to recall and think about the interactions with Rukawa after the amnesia and what he said before his death. So... The last sentence is really what "Shouta" said to Rukawa across time, space and death.
It's very good. I hope you won't be fooled.
I want to say that there is no grass growing here~
It's the beginning of summer, come and see Zhangtai and Rukawa.
I'm an idiot. I cried when I saw this
It's so graphic that I don't even dare to think about it. He remembers that sentence but he will never know the deep meaning. Cry QAQ
The scholar's ability to summarize is so strong that he finished Zhan Bai's emotional entanglements in just a few chapters. Sharp.
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In fact, there are quite a few illogical places, although the story is good
Don't immortals look in the mirror?
After watching this, my heart felt like it had been bombarded. I was very sad and wanted to cry.
I was so tortured that I couldn't get out for a long time. I would be in a daze just thinking about it. Lu Da, when will you continue writing? T T
I cried like a dog. I imagined thousands of outcomes. "Zhang Tai" was the child of an immortal or something like that. I never imagined that he would be an immortal... It was so shocking that my heart was broken when I saw it at the end.
At the end, it felt like a shot to the heart. Very good. I need to read a hundred sweet articles to recover.
A sad and ignorant story
Every piece of land that is not stained with blood is beautiful
Crying with snot and tears streaming down my face
I didn't pay attention to the puns made by the girls upstairs at first, but after thinking about it, I realized that it was really like this. Sendao remembered that he grew from 5 to 8 years old, which means that he has not been stagnant. Then when he is 70 years old, although he may not remember it, he has enough time to recall and think about the interactions with Rukawa after the amnesia and what he said before his death. So... The last sentence is really what "Shouta" said to Rukawa across time, space and death.
It's very good. I hope you won't be fooled.
I want to say that there is no grass growing here~
It's the beginning of summer, come and see Zhangtai and Rukawa.
I'm an idiot. I cried when I saw this
It's so graphic that I don't even dare to think about it. He remembers that sentence but he will never know the deep meaning. Cry QAQ
The scholar's ability to summarize is so strong that he finished Zhan Bai's emotional entanglements in just a few chapters. Sharp.
… In fact, there are quite a few illogical places, although the story is good Don't immortals look in the mirror?