In the winter of 1977, when Remus Lupine, who had just graduated, walked into an alchemy shop, all he expected was to find a job without discrimination. However, his love for the young shopkeeper girl caught him off guard.
In the winter of 1977, when Lorenthia Field posted a job opening in the newspaper, she just wanted a clerk to help her introverted and shy self deal with customers. However, neither the recruitment of a werewolf nor the fact that she actually developed a liking for the werewolf was something she expected.
How can a girl with a soft and gentle personality convince a stubborn werewolf? How can an alchemy genius girl with almost no fighting ability avoid the pursuit of Death Eaters?
The background of the parent generation, the dark age of magic, alchemy, and love.
Stable and updated every other day, no pitfalls. Completed.
Tips before writing 1. The original heroine, CP is Remus Lupin. We try our best not to whitewash or whitewash any characters in the original novel. Except for the heroine and Lu Ping, other CPs are official partners.
2. The heroine has a golden finger and a halo as the protagonist, but she is not very big. It will not affect the IQ of the supporting characters or cause major changes to the magic system settings of the original work.
3. The works involved include characters from the original generation in HP, including characters from Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them.
Conception:
Reader comments
The heroine's career line is very good, and she also confiscated a lot of lunch boxes. The only flaw is that her emotional line is more similar to that of the original work. Lupine always refuses to dodge and passively accepts it. It would be better if the female votes were bolder.
It's quite good, the writing is smooth and not dramatic, and the heroine comes together with Lupine peacefully and naturally. If I have to find fault, the only flaw might be that it's too peaceful and not exciting enough hahahaha
The emotional line is too peaceful. Remus's character should be tortured hard. I'm good or bad hahahahaha, but this is a very exciting story!
Although the ending of the main text is a bit perfunctory personally, I really like the extra chapter. The splitting and other things are very good. Finally, the personality is not fused... I am greatly relieved. The problem with Mo Xinghe's characterization can actually be seen from the real-world plot at the end of the text, because the main promotion is Wei Yunbai's revenge (?) Line, and the length has not been increased. Compared with before, only 1/2 of the original plot is used for the emotional line and characterization. It is inevitable that the character's personality will not be complete and distinct. Since I'm not following the serialization, I don't know if the author is in a hurry or has other reasons for writing this way. Overall, I like the setting of the protagonist very much. After reading the whole story, it's quite comfortable for those who are more aggressive. Good job.
It looks good, but it's really a pity that Shi Qian and Xiao Bai can't be teammates in the end. . . I also want Xiaobai and Zhengran to be teammates forever. I just hope that HIT will have a suitable mid laner in the future.
Overall, the plot is engaging and smooth. However, it focuses too much on the struggle against Voldemort and does not mention much about Lupine's love life. Moreover, the relationship between the heroine and Lupine did not come at a time that I clearly understood. There were several reconciliations between the heroine and Lupine that were not clearly written.
Although it's a bit unaccustomed, a healthy, happy and bold Harry looks pretty good, but he looks too much like the second James and might make Snape have a stroke (if he was still a teacher)
Good food, peerless good food55
That's great. It's perfect.
I've been obsessed with HP fanfics recently, and this is my favorite one I've seen so far. The author is so awesome, I'm ready to abandon the fanfic and fall into a big trap, hahaha.
I finished reading it in one sitting, I loved it so much!
Wow! ! In my lifetime!
As for Lupine and his children, why don't they have sweet parent-child interaction? It's not enough!
Finished reading! ! ! ! So well written! ! ! ! ! Thanks for finishing! !
I finished reading it in one go. I really like this story. Thank you very much! ! ! !
Finished reading! Good looking! Thanks to the teacher for producing grain, the children are very happy to eat!
2022.7.9
"Pa" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
It's Percy, big brother
Finished reading~
Like it very much! !
What a joke, Newt didn't graduate, he was expelled
Tasty. . . Ask the teacher if he will create a physical version in the future (please delete if inappropriate)
Teacher, teacher, please continue writing hp fanfics, it's really good [hug your thighs]
I'm curious! ! ! Did Dumbledore have feelings for anyone else? ! !
The heroine's career line is very good, and she also confiscated a lot of lunch boxes. The only flaw is that her emotional line is more similar to that of the original work. Lupine always refuses to dodge and passively accepts it. It would be better if the female votes were bolder.
It's quite good, the writing is smooth and not dramatic, and the heroine comes together with Lupine peacefully and naturally. If I have to find fault, the only flaw might be that it's too peaceful and not exciting enough hahahaha
The emotional line is too peaceful. Remus's character should be tortured hard. I'm good or bad hahahahaha, but this is a very exciting story!
Although the ending of the main text is a bit perfunctory personally, I really like the extra chapter. The splitting and other things are very good. Finally, the personality is not fused... I am greatly relieved. The problem with Mo Xinghe's characterization can actually be seen from the real-world plot at the end of the text, because the main promotion is Wei Yunbai's revenge (?) Line, and the length has not been increased. Compared with before, only 1/2 of the original plot is used for the emotional line and characterization. It is inevitable that the character's personality will not be complete and distinct. Since I'm not following the serialization, I don't know if the author is in a hurry or has other reasons for writing this way. Overall, I like the setting of the protagonist very much. After reading the whole story, it's quite comfortable for those who are more aggressive. Good job.
It looks good, but it's really a pity that Shi Qian and Xiao Bai can't be teammates in the end. . . I also want Xiaobai and Zhengran to be teammates forever. I just hope that HIT will have a suitable mid laner in the future.
Overall, the plot is engaging and smooth. However, it focuses too much on the struggle against Voldemort and does not mention much about Lupine's love life. Moreover, the relationship between the heroine and Lupine did not come at a time that I clearly understood. There were several reconciliations between the heroine and Lupine that were not clearly written.
Although it's a bit unaccustomed, a healthy, happy and bold Harry looks pretty good, but he looks too much like the second James and might make Snape have a stroke (if he was still a teacher)
Good food, peerless good food55
That's great. It's perfect.
I've been obsessed with HP fanfics recently, and this is my favorite one I've seen so far. The author is so awesome, I'm ready to abandon the fanfic and fall into a big trap, hahaha.
I finished reading it in one sitting, I loved it so much!
Wow! ! In my lifetime!
As for Lupine and his children, why don't they have sweet parent-child interaction? It's not enough!
Finished reading! ! ! ! So well written! ! ! ! ! Thanks for finishing! !
I finished reading it in one go. I really like this story. Thank you very much! ! ! !
Finished reading! Good looking! Thanks to the teacher for producing grain, the children are very happy to eat!
2022.7.9
"Pa" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ It's Percy, big brother
Finished reading~ Like it very much! !
What a joke, Newt didn't graduate, he was expelled
Tasty. . . Ask the teacher if he will create a physical version in the future (please delete if inappropriate)
Teacher, teacher, please continue writing hp fanfics, it's really good [hug your thighs]
I'm curious! ! ! Did Dumbledore have feelings for anyone else? ! !