
Lin Toe
麟趾
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- Completed
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- 728k Words
- Chapters
- 169
- Genre
- No CP
- Theme
- Legend
- POV
- Male Lead
- Age rating
- 13+
- Updated
- 7h ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Now that I've finished reading it, let me tell you a little bit about my feelings. I read the physical book first, and after a long time, I came to Jinjiang to reorder and review it. I really like this story. The characters have very distinct personalities. You can see them in their behavior without too many direct words. The author's writing is good, and there are many plots, but I think it is not rich enough. It's not that there are more twists and turns, but the details of the plot, or that it lacks some gripping memory points. Not every article needs a climax. This depends on the author's personal arrangement, but the memory points are different. If arranged properly, a supporting character or a minor character can also have enough outstanding memory points. The death of some people, the change of some people, the resolution of some things, there is no problem with the logic, but the details need to be added. Sometimes the perspective description of other characters is necessary. One point that I feel is very obvious in this article is that there are many supporting characters, but not many are decisive. In the background of war, there are too many things to describe about the fighting process, the deployment of combat forces, the deployment of troops, and the suffering of the people. Not every battle is fought only head-on. The rapid changes on the battlefield and the deployment of troops are very important. But so far, I'm not very impressed with each battle. To be honest, what impressed me the most was the letter written by He Zhan to He Rong, "Why not save me?" It was just four words, but it carried a lot of weight. When I saw it, there seemed to be some controversy in the comment section. I felt that the author's follow-up treatment was not too deep, and it would be better if the two brothers had more descriptions in mind. I have a certain affinity with this article and this author. When I read her first article, I forgot whether it was Qianqiu or Chenghua for fourteen years. These two articles are relatively early. Then there is Wushuang, which is the only novel that I update chapter by chapter. When I read a book, I rarely pay attention to the author. I focus on the copywriting, so after reading these three articles, I didn't notice that they were written by the same person. Later, I bought a book on Dangdang. I got a lot of discounts and bought a lot. When I was putting together the order, I thought of checking on the bookshelf to see if there were any published books. Only then did I realize that these three books were written by the same mother and the author was in the same category, Jian Dan Qin Xin. So I blindly picked up the last book in this category that I haven't read yet, which is Lin Zhi. Fortunately, I wasn't disappointed in the end, it was a good story. I hope we can meet again and wish Sanlang and Wulang well.
I stayed up a few nights to read the full article and evaluate it carefully. It is indeed a good article. The author has rich historical knowledge, clear logic, and good writing style, but there are also some regrets. The early stages are told in a leisurely manner, especially the part about the mission to the Western Turks, which is intense and full of pride. It can be said to be my favorite part of the book. I don't know why the pace suddenly accelerated in the later period, and many plots were a bit abrupt. It started off a little bit with the death of the prince, then the capital was moved, then the death of the emperor, the death of the second prince, the death of Li Kuan, etc. The plot all advanced too fast and was a bit confusing. Then at the end, the third brother returned to Chang'an to clean up the country and ascend the throne, and it seemed peaceful. There was no exciting battle, and there was no transition. It felt like the author was pushing forward. Some puzzles have no ending. For example, the third brother's mother was not cleared of charges. Who killed the queen's legitimate son? There are also some characters whose endings have not been explained, such as Princess Zhending (actually I am quite optimistic about her and think she should play a big role in the later stage, but there is no further story), Wen Jiang, Gao Changning, and Li Sui'an. It is said that these women are all outstanding, but there is no final explanation. Anyway, it ends a bit abruptly. In fact, I really like the setting of the story. I really hope the author can extend the timeline a little longer and write about the growth process of Saburo and Goro. In addition, what I have always been a little confused about is the third brother's mental journey from just wanting to protect himself at the beginning to gradually becoming ambitious for the world. How did it change little by little, and what events and situations stimulated him to have the ambition to become an emperor. In fact, I am not used to the development of the plot of someone like the third brother competing for the throne. I always feel that it is not in line with his temperament. However, if he is motivated by the desire to serve the world and the common people, I can accept it. However, I always feel that the author did not write down his mental journey well, which kept me a little busy and ignorant. I mentioned a lot of shortcomings, but actually I still feel a little regretful because I really like this article. The author is really great for being able to write this kind of cp-free historical plot so fascinatingly. Thank you again to the author!
I want to watch the extras, woooooooooo, I want to watch Gao Changning, I want to watch Wen Jiang, I want to see Princess Zhending, I want to watch the Sanglin extras, I want to see Shiro's extras, I want to see the daily life of Wu San, I want to see the daily life of Emperor Sanlang, I want to see the scope of the gradual integration of the overseas Chinese, oooooooooo
You don't even want to write a side story
I feel like there are still a lot of things to explain, and I can't bear to leave them, so I'll leave them here. A third brother who spread the rumor finally said: When the moon shines brightly and the stars disappear, Wu Lang might as well be like Chang'e on the moon (fuck)
Nice! The author is awesome! But after reading it, I really wanted to yell: Where is Wen Jiang! Where is Li Sui'an! Where is Sang Lin! Why isn't there a side story? ! !
Ahhhh, it's good-looking even without any CP. It's a career-focused movie with great stamina. The supporting characters are also outstanding. It's worthy of being one of my favorite authors. It's a pity that there is no extra story. I really want to see the third brother take over and start a prosperous age. It must be "the nine heavens open the palace, and the clothes of all nations worship Mian Liu."
Super pretty! ! ! But it's so sad that there is no extra episode
Sure enough, it's more exciting to fight without CP!
It's over and done with. Although the ending feels a bit sudden, Rongbao and Zhanbao will definitely be fine~
After reading the ending, I want to read the second chapter. I saw the life in Zhushan County in the first chapter, but I can't read it for the time being. So what do people pursue in this life?
After watching the check-in, I was really annoyed by the operation of some characters in the middle... The ending is not perfect but it is already the best ending. I sighed.
Please make a side story!
No extras! ! ? ?
Woo woo woo woo, there's not even a side story, it's over, but I'm caught off guard [crying] [crying] [crying]
Woohoo, no extras?
So good
It would be nice to grow a little longer, it's not enough to eat meow meow meow~ A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!
Not enough, I want to see the daily life after becoming emperor
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that I stayed up late to finish reading Wen Huang
Ah? It's actually over, I feel like I'm still finished
Are there any extras? Please find out the Extra Nutrient Solution (1/1) achievement. There is a certain chance of dropping an update. Please keep up the good work, knights.
I have opened the novel countless times but have not finished it. Now that I have read it, I really feel that it is well written and it is really a good article.
Is there no extra story?
I really want a side story [poor]
Drop
Why are there no extra extras?
If there is a good article, I will never forget it. I will drink nutrient solution vigorously and become frivolous about it.
The last chapter made me so happy, so happy, I kept crying, it was really satisfying [crying] Our sister is the best! In this love, the younger sister is much braver than the elder brother! Of course, my brother is also very good (hahaha, a bowl of water will be the same), but seeing our Lanjia getting better and better, I am really happy for her from the bottom of my heart [red heart]. I also really thank you, teacher, for your company for such a long time. Every time I see your updates, it is also the happiest moment of my day! ! !
The author has worked hard to update the article. Let's refresh yourself with a mine!