Try writing a science fiction novel - Eyes
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Three times through, I always liked the ending.
Well, the writing is getting better and better, but I still have to think about my feelings! Author's reply:
I feel the same way. It's the first time I'm writing about Zhaobai, so I can't quite grasp my feelings...
In fact, the truth is Jiang: I happened to see the MV of Mouse and Cat a few days ago, and I was so excited that I watched all the related videos on 56. If there were no videos, I read the articles. The articles I saw were all gorgeous and long. You know I get dizzy when I read too many words...
I felt itchy in my heart even though I didn't read it... Finally, after I had a dream... This article was born...
There is only Bai Yutang inside... Zhan Zhaodu has become a supporting role
There are really few characters...
I can't write the content, there are only eight thousand words in total...
In the end, I decided to let them all be wiped out. After that, I will write about their thoughts.
I didn't sleep well the whole night after I finished writing this article…
The writing is so bad... I'm sorry for Zhaozhao, I'm sorry for Xiaobai, I'm sorry for the tubes in the 75 pit...
Just treat it as your own entertainment and just take a look...
I think Mr. Bai likes the heroine, but I don't know clearly. He may feel pity for Ruyan,
Meow meow, you haven't updated for a week~
The little fairy has been waiting so hard~~~
There is really nothing to look forward to in this kind of future.
So well written. My heart clenched when I saw the little blind boy being teased. Such trampling and insult must be borne by a six or seven-year-old child. Technology has developed, but the darkness of society and class has not improved at all.
Fortunately, there is the everlasting tolerance of maternal love.
An article that shocked me.
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A little perspective. I feel that the background introduction at the beginning is not in harmony with the narrative method of the following articles, a bit hard and redundant. Just start with the sentence "Earth calendar year 2568".
In fact, this is where I started watching.
Mother, child, feel sad, but can't shed tears
Speechless, isn't it just a label of pure love and a small viewing angle? Supporting character Zhan Zhao and other Kaifeng Mansion personnel. As a result, the author's obscure CP turned out to be a background board with only a few hundred words? ? ? Can the author eat the pure love label and change it to a non-CP one?
Three times through, I always liked the ending.
Well, the writing is getting better and better, but I still have to think about my feelings! Author's reply: I feel the same way. It's the first time I'm writing about Zhaobai, so I can't quite grasp my feelings... In fact, the truth is Jiang: I happened to see the MV of Mouse and Cat a few days ago, and I was so excited that I watched all the related videos on 56. If there were no videos, I read the articles. The articles I saw were all gorgeous and long. You know I get dizzy when I read too many words... I felt itchy in my heart even though I didn't read it... Finally, after I had a dream... This article was born... There is only Bai Yutang inside... Zhan Zhaodu has become a supporting role There are really few characters... I can't write the content, there are only eight thousand words in total... In the end, I decided to let them all be wiped out. After that, I will write about their thoughts. I didn't sleep well the whole night after I finished writing this article… The writing is so bad... I'm sorry for Zhaozhao, I'm sorry for Xiaobai, I'm sorry for the tubes in the 75 pit... Just treat it as your own entertainment and just take a look...
I think Mr. Bai likes the heroine, but I don't know clearly. He may feel pity for Ruyan,
Meow meow, you haven't updated for a week~ The little fairy has been waiting so hard~~~
There is really nothing to look forward to in this kind of future.
So well written. My heart clenched when I saw the little blind boy being teased. Such trampling and insult must be borne by a six or seven-year-old child. Technology has developed, but the darkness of society and class has not improved at all. Fortunately, there is the everlasting tolerance of maternal love. An article that shocked me. --- A little perspective. I feel that the background introduction at the beginning is not in harmony with the narrative method of the following articles, a bit hard and redundant. Just start with the sentence "Earth calendar year 2568". In fact, this is where I started watching.
Mother, child, feel sad, but can't shed tears
Speechless, isn't it just a label of pure love and a small viewing angle? Supporting character Zhan Zhao and other Kaifeng Mansion personnel. As a result, the author's obscure CP turned out to be a background board with only a few hundred words? ? ? Can the author eat the pure love label and change it to a non-CP one?