The tiny vibrations of butterfly wings can affect the entire world. This is the butterfly effect.
Ps Modern Rebirth + Qingshuiwen, those who don't like it are not allowed to enter.
Part 2 http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=460241
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Fortunately, there is a second part. I read this one in 2010. At that time, it was a bit unbelievable that it ended like this. I had been dreaming about it for several years, but I couldn't remember the name. Now I finally found it and read it again.
I see many people saying they don't understand it, but I don't feel that way. This is a rare article that uses the first person without feeling disgusted. It has a feeling of that era, very ancient and nostalgic, far unlike the current rebirth campus. I'm really looking forward to seeing the protagonist's future life, so I'm switching to the second part.
Also, this is an article that I have liked for a long time. Please don't disappoint me, otherwise you will be waiting for me with your fists!
Thumbs up, no fattening, I want to follow up and ask for the update date
... Lock the target, fly, hug and rub~~
As soon as I opened it, I found it was finished, huh~~ I love it so much~~~
Well... I just want to ask who is the male protagonist...
Haha, I love watching this kind of self-righteous female supporting role! ! Come on more~~
Fortunately, there is a second part. I read this one in 2010. At that time, it was a bit unbelievable that it ended like this. I had been dreaming about it for several years, but I couldn't remember the name. Now I finally found it and read it again. I see many people saying they don't understand it, but I don't feel that way. This is a rare article that uses the first person without feeling disgusted. It has a feeling of that era, very ancient and nostalgic, far unlike the current rebirth campus. I'm really looking forward to seeing the protagonist's future life, so I'm switching to the second part. Also, this is an article that I have liked for a long time. Please don't disappoint me, otherwise you will be waiting for me with your fists!
Thumbs up, no fattening, I want to follow up and ask for the update date
... Lock the target, fly, hug and rub~~ As soon as I opened it, I found it was finished, huh~~ I love it so much~~~
Well... I just want to ask who is the male protagonist...
Haha, I love watching this kind of self-righteous female supporting role! ! Come on more~~
总的来说还算是喜欢看。但是第二部的问题明显要多。情节给人的感觉很乱。作者增添了好多第一部没有的东西使得解释说明的话语很多。我觉得作者应该尽可能用曾经出现过的东西来写，情节尽可能向第一部已有情节靠。第二点，我觉得有些情节很多余。最明显的是布赖特和克厄斯，如果写了，后面应该让其再次登场会比较好。毕竟这部分内容篇幅不小，只作为陪衬主角多厉害完全没必要。第三，我认为小说的结局很让人吐血，为什么要让两位回归神职呢，这样结局变得很没有意义，如果是这样她们早就可以回归了，何必打的那么辛苦。我认为应该让他们死亡的话只能等待重生，所以不得不在人间作战。第四就是小说是以两个神为主角写的，再把对手写得很弱，那么小说完全无悬念可言，因此不能很好的引人入胜。第五，人物安排，小角色和只出场一次的觉得其实命名都没有必要，显得很乱。还有就是爱丽莎，这个人几乎是没有用的，还不如换成上一部他们的朋友的转生。贝罗佩露其实也可以再次借尸还魂，没必要增加灵魂契约书。最后就是，语言上还是觉得不够精炼，有凑字数的嫌疑。我觉得一部好的小说再描写上应该多下功夫，不能只交代情节。 以上只是个人的一点小建议，没有诋毁的意思，只是希望作者会写出更好看的小说。
This should not be a sidekick. . . Bar. . . .
Suddenly I can't remember the previous plot_(:з∠)_
白龙~~~期待大人快更新~
I commented that their response was a bit slow. . . The one who was causing trouble was Brother Feng who seemed to have guessed it, laugh~
Happy life, very beautiful
Very good....
It's so tragic... None of them have a happy ending.
How strange~~~~~~~!
It's very clear. The text is very nice. I feel like it's abnormal that I can't understand it... Come on
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Does the fellow below know this? ! You have stepped into a huge pit! Don't be obsessed...
My brother will leave. Is it because I need an heir? If my brother stays, the heir must be my brother, because he is already very good.