Qi Feng, the prince of Qi Kingdom, accidentally disappeared during the war between Qi Kingdom and Fan Yue, which led to new changes in the political situation of Qi Kingdom. A year later, Xiao Yi brought back his savior A Chao and A Chao's beautiful wife Xi Yun. What changes will the arrival of Ah Chao cause in Qi Chao? Is Ah Chao, who has a cheerful personality, a simple mind and an appearance similar to Qi Feng, the Prince Qi Feng who is rumored to be dead? What kind of illusion will he get involved in? What kind of story is hidden in the beautiful and mysterious Xiyun? In the end, what misunderstanding between A Chao and Xiao Ran will result from Yun Xi's departure? How did Xiao Ran, who was once lively and cheerful, become as lonely as catkins all over the sky, and how did he find new happiness in the desolation of wind-swept lotuses in the loneliness of a quiet night? A new life of entanglement begins again, between heaven and earth, over and over again, grudges, love and hatred, how can we finish it in just a few words?
Modify this story and change it into an independent chapter. Friends who have not read the prequel "Xiao Wei" do not need to regret it. I will try my best to change this story into a complete structure. ("Xiao Wei" http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=196886)
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It's so good that I want to cry, from morning to afternoon, please update~
It's not bad, but it would be better if the heroine's inner drama, actions, and operations could be written in more detail. This feels a bit general, I don't know why. It felt like, in a hurry, the male and female protagonists got to know each other. It would also be nice if the behavior of the people around me could be more specific. Oh, by the way, if you want to show that the male and female protagonists are very good, it is best to compare them with other people. I hope your writing can get better and better. Come on
. . There is really little emotion. .
Raise your hand, me! Glaze, nature, smoke bomb type cannon fodder
Hey, you have done something wrong to yourself, what excuse can you make!
So the heroine is pitying the mistress? ? ? ? Don't be such a holy mother!
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It's so good that I want to cry, from morning to afternoon, please update~
It's not bad, but it would be better if the heroine's inner drama, actions, and operations could be written in more detail. This feels a bit general, I don't know why. It felt like, in a hurry, the male and female protagonists got to know each other. It would also be nice if the behavior of the people around me could be more specific. Oh, by the way, if you want to show that the male and female protagonists are very good, it is best to compare them with other people. I hope your writing can get better and better. Come on
. . There is really little emotion. .
Raise your hand, me! Glaze, nature, smoke bomb type cannon fodder
Hey, you have done something wrong to yourself, what excuse can you make!
So the heroine is pitying the mistress? ? ? ? Don't be such a holy mother!