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Cloud Lock Chapter
In the world of troubled times, life and death exist only on a thin line. However, who can escape the entanglement of fate?
She was a calamity for him. She betrayed the city and faced the enemy. She forced him to die in the isolated city. The moonlight on the silver hairpin flowed, the seal characters on the incense plate turned to ashes, the autumn water sword rose, cutting off the tenderness. The hatred in the eyes seemed to be able to corrode the bones, but it could not cut off the cause and effect in the world. There were rebellions, fires, and wars, but she was finally sent back to him again. The dusk was dark and the blood was as red as lotus blossoms, but she saw that her eyes were as sad as water. Blood debts are easy to repay, but how can heart debts be cleared easily?
She once thought that she was just a pawn beside him, with cold tentacles just like the armor on his body. However, fate took a strange turn, and he and she were old acquaintances. Now, the iron-blooded general is no longer the young man in Chang'an. The country has many ambitions, the hero has many sorrows, and the entanglement of love and hate has become a long river in front of him.
The war continues and the winner is king. Where will they go?
Zhulou chapter
Destiny is in a circle, waiting for time to turn
Changes are happening again in the city of Jinling, and a storm is coming in the temple. He wants to leave, and she wants to stay. Who can escape from this destined prison? Conspiracies are born one after another, like a series of links, and I don't know how to dismantle them. He is forced to surrender, and she falls into the dust.
His eyes were like autumn waves, staring at the court, and even more at her. Everything seemed to be under control, but everything was full of variables, palace changes, power seizures, disputes, all of which were just to take back what belonged to him. The misty rain outside the eighty-four umbrellas, on the bank of Qinhuai River in the south of the Yangtze River, he set a trap for her, but she didn't know who it was bound to...
Who is he, who is he
The dense network woven by power is enigmatically wandering on Jinling City. Outside the Zhuyuan, the setting sun weeps blood. In this battle between love and hate, who will finally be saved.
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Cover author in the upper left corner: Xun Yeyu
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Reader comments
Ah ah ah, I want a signed book~~~The author replied:
Have to wait many, many months
Damn, please update it quickly. Please update it quickly. It's nice to say it↖(^ω^)↗
Yes, yes! Implicitness is king! I hope Yan Suihan will get his wish in the end, but judging from the length, there seems to be no hope?
I can't understand the ending. I can't understand the author's reply:
Cover the noodles with the lid. . . Because there are still two chapters at the end and a side story between Yan Suihan and Xiaoxuan = =
I respect Su's verbosity. . .
In fact, I want to explain at the end: the fact that it came back as a bird T T
So Yan Suihan died.
So Xiao Wei ascended the throne and created a dynasty.
So Qi Xuan chose to leave and hide from the world from then on.
It is in response to the prophecy that when the wine is drunk, the love is desolate, and the bottle is still in a state of confusion.
Judging from the content of the article, the ups and downs of the plot are handled very well. The article begins with the tranquility before the war, and then the turning point of the war, and the recognition of Qi Xuan and Xiao Wei, thus adding a new variable factor to the simple rivalry between Yan Suihan and Xiao Wei (women, everything is because of women = =!!). What follows is Qi Xuan's past, the intersection of those past events and the present, and the struggles and confusions of countless people. Time is the main thread of everything. As the war subsided, the internal conflicts of the Chen Dynasty intertwined with the final counterattack of Yan Suihan's troops. When the dust settled, a new dynasty was established based on the legacy of the previous dynasty. There is nothing left but remembrance. The story is quite complicated, and it is not easy to write so many things clearly and tightly in a short number of words. I secretly thought that Chenxiangyuan was very well written about the night when Huaicheng fell. The dialogue between Xiaoyan and Qi Xuan, looking at each other, until Qiu Shui came out of the sheath later, Qi Xuan's past was just mentioned in one stroke, very simple and clear. Then A Xuan's escape and the description of the surrounding environment can really bring out the panic in a person's heart. Then came the official meeting between Xiao Wei and Qi Xuan, and Yan Suihan's disappearance not only began to arouse suspicion between the two, but also left a suspense for the subsequent advancement of the story. So I always think that this kind of opening is very grand and powerful. Much love.
Judging from the structure of the article, it is actually not too complicated. If it is deleted severely, there will only be one main line of Xiao Wei. As for Qi Xuan, Yan Suihan, Xu Tianran, Nangong, and later the Queen Mother, Song Cheng, (and Xiao Wei's brother, I wonder if this role was deleted in the end?) Are just side characters. This clue becomes more obvious the further it goes on. Looking back at the previous articles, there seems to be no obvious foreshadowing, which is probably a pity. The grasp of rhythm should be the second most important thing in an article after the content of the article. Only when the narrative is detailed and soothing can it arouse the emotions of readers. Comparing the upper and lower parts of the article, the Zhulou chapter at the back is better than the Yunsuo chapter at the front. On the one hand, it is because the temple dispute in the latter part gradually becomes more complicated, and Yan Suihan's first part is insinuating, and the suspense begins to deepen. On the other hand, the use of writing becomes more crisp and clear, and there are not too many irrelevant descriptions of the plot to distract the train of thought.
As for the writing style, it should be the last one. Whether it's gorgeous or simple, it's just a reflection of the author's personal style and has nothing to do with anyone else. The writing style is just for the story, and it can be used freely as long as it can explain the content. Just don't overdo it. Xiao Mulan's writing style is very straightforward, so it can't be discussed.
The extra chapter was very loving, and suddenly I thought that Xiao Wei was still lonely. Winning the country is actually the most unpaid reward. Sometimes when you fight for something, you feel depressed when you can't get it. When you get it, you are afraid that others will take it away again, so you have to be cautious all day long, walking on thin ice, and you will not rest until death, or you will not have peace until death. After all, there are too many things to think about, so people will be very tired. So it's best not to be such a person, and don't expect such a person. As long as a person is alive, it is best to feel comfortable.
But, who will accompany me through all the tribulations, after life and death, gently hold my hand, smile innocently, and spend this life together?
I finally finished writing this damn series of reviews, and then a certain Song struggled weakly and digressed.
No matter what type of novel it is, if it is written by a certain Song Dynasty, it will usually leave a good ending. The romance is the same, the reasoning is the same, and I guess the future novels will be the same. I remember telling Mulan that I wrote this way because there are too many unsatisfactory things in this world, so if I can, I will try my best to make up a myth. At least in my story, the protagonist can still live happily. The result seems to be contempt, and serious contempt. Of course, I know that such an idea is really stupid, but it is difficult to get around this vicious circle. If I had to choose, in the end, it would be better to be in the court than to be far away from the world.
After all, if I have to throw away too many things, I won't be able to part with them.
General Manager of Yue Family
Executive Chairman of the Central Committee of the Yan Party
Executive Secretary of Yan Party Logistics Committee
Deputy Captain of Yan Suihan's Guards
Vice President of Yan Party Research Association
Model steward of the Yanhuang royal family
Song Keer
February 6, 2009 in Fuzhou Prefecture, Jiangnan East Road
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Suddenly I realized that only three of my four comments had been posted! Make up for it~ I looked at the time and it was already eight years ago... Ah youth...
Hey, you are deliberately trying to put gold on Xiao Xiao's face, huh.
In the end, it was written that he looked so innocent. If he was innocent, would my Yanzi still deserve to die?
Hey, I realized that I am really looking for abuse. If I have nothing to do, I will go to your article to stimulate myself.
Don't blame me for being stupid, I still haven't seen the ending of the three of them. I only know that Xiao became emperor and Qi left. Is Yan dead?
Ah ah ah, I want a signed book~~~The author replied: Have to wait many, many months
Damn, please update it quickly. Please update it quickly. It's nice to say it↖(^ω^)↗
Yes, yes! Implicitness is king! I hope Yan Suihan will get his wish in the end, but judging from the length, there seems to be no hope? I can't understand the ending. I can't understand the author's reply: Cover the noodles with the lid. . . Because there are still two chapters at the end and a side story between Yan Suihan and Xiaoxuan = = I respect Su's verbosity. . . In fact, I want to explain at the end: the fact that it came back as a bird T T
So Yan Suihan died. So Xiao Wei ascended the throne and created a dynasty. So Qi Xuan chose to leave and hide from the world from then on. It is in response to the prophecy that when the wine is drunk, the love is desolate, and the bottle is still in a state of confusion. Judging from the content of the article, the ups and downs of the plot are handled very well. The article begins with the tranquility before the war, and then the turning point of the war, and the recognition of Qi Xuan and Xiao Wei, thus adding a new variable factor to the simple rivalry between Yan Suihan and Xiao Wei (women, everything is because of women = =!!). What follows is Qi Xuan's past, the intersection of those past events and the present, and the struggles and confusions of countless people. Time is the main thread of everything. As the war subsided, the internal conflicts of the Chen Dynasty intertwined with the final counterattack of Yan Suihan's troops. When the dust settled, a new dynasty was established based on the legacy of the previous dynasty. There is nothing left but remembrance. The story is quite complicated, and it is not easy to write so many things clearly and tightly in a short number of words. I secretly thought that Chenxiangyuan was very well written about the night when Huaicheng fell. The dialogue between Xiaoyan and Qi Xuan, looking at each other, until Qiu Shui came out of the sheath later, Qi Xuan's past was just mentioned in one stroke, very simple and clear. Then A Xuan's escape and the description of the surrounding environment can really bring out the panic in a person's heart. Then came the official meeting between Xiao Wei and Qi Xuan, and Yan Suihan's disappearance not only began to arouse suspicion between the two, but also left a suspense for the subsequent advancement of the story. So I always think that this kind of opening is very grand and powerful. Much love. Judging from the structure of the article, it is actually not too complicated. If it is deleted severely, there will only be one main line of Xiao Wei. As for Qi Xuan, Yan Suihan, Xu Tianran, Nangong, and later the Queen Mother, Song Cheng, (and Xiao Wei's brother, I wonder if this role was deleted in the end?) Are just side characters. This clue becomes more obvious the further it goes on. Looking back at the previous articles, there seems to be no obvious foreshadowing, which is probably a pity. The grasp of rhythm should be the second most important thing in an article after the content of the article. Only when the narrative is detailed and soothing can it arouse the emotions of readers. Comparing the upper and lower parts of the article, the Zhulou chapter at the back is better than the Yunsuo chapter at the front. On the one hand, it is because the temple dispute in the latter part gradually becomes more complicated, and Yan Suihan's first part is insinuating, and the suspense begins to deepen. On the other hand, the use of writing becomes more crisp and clear, and there are not too many irrelevant descriptions of the plot to distract the train of thought. As for the writing style, it should be the last one. Whether it's gorgeous or simple, it's just a reflection of the author's personal style and has nothing to do with anyone else. The writing style is just for the story, and it can be used freely as long as it can explain the content. Just don't overdo it. Xiao Mulan's writing style is very straightforward, so it can't be discussed. The extra chapter was very loving, and suddenly I thought that Xiao Wei was still lonely. Winning the country is actually the most unpaid reward. Sometimes when you fight for something, you feel depressed when you can't get it. When you get it, you are afraid that others will take it away again, so you have to be cautious all day long, walking on thin ice, and you will not rest until death, or you will not have peace until death. After all, there are too many things to think about, so people will be very tired. So it's best not to be such a person, and don't expect such a person. As long as a person is alive, it is best to feel comfortable. But, who will accompany me through all the tribulations, after life and death, gently hold my hand, smile innocently, and spend this life together? I finally finished writing this damn series of reviews, and then a certain Song struggled weakly and digressed. No matter what type of novel it is, if it is written by a certain Song Dynasty, it will usually leave a good ending. The romance is the same, the reasoning is the same, and I guess the future novels will be the same. I remember telling Mulan that I wrote this way because there are too many unsatisfactory things in this world, so if I can, I will try my best to make up a myth. At least in my story, the protagonist can still live happily. The result seems to be contempt, and serious contempt. Of course, I know that such an idea is really stupid, but it is difficult to get around this vicious circle. If I had to choose, in the end, it would be better to be in the court than to be far away from the world. After all, if I have to throw away too many things, I won't be able to part with them. General Manager of Yue Family Executive Chairman of the Central Committee of the Yan Party Executive Secretary of Yan Party Logistics Committee Deputy Captain of Yan Suihan's Guards Vice President of Yan Party Research Association Model steward of the Yanhuang royal family Song Keer February 6, 2009 in Fuzhou Prefecture, Jiangnan East Road . —— . Suddenly I realized that only three of my four comments had been posted! Make up for it~ I looked at the time and it was already eight years ago... Ah youth...
Hey, you are deliberately trying to put gold on Xiao Xiao's face, huh. In the end, it was written that he looked so innocent. If he was innocent, would my Yanzi still deserve to die? Hey, I realized that I am really looking for abuse. If I have nothing to do, I will go to your article to stimulate myself.
Don't blame me for being stupid, I still haven't seen the ending of the three of them. I only know that Xiao became emperor and Qi left. Is Yan dead?