A Solid Life in Red Mansion

... Ah, what a subtle feeling. Because the plot point is very strange. The first plot point is Jingguang's suicide. It obviously brings together so many worlds, and other parts are also handled very well. For example, Jiudai seeks cooperation with Wu Detective, and uses "Please Don't Die" to recover, etc., And they can communicate with each other. Although this plot point is a bit strange, it makes sense. The strange thing is that Akihiko has clearly sent that kind of message to three undercover agents. When knowing that Scotland was exposed, wouldn't Shuichi think about the possibility that the other party was indeed an undercover agent when confronting Scotland? Secondly, Scotland and Bourbon also exchange messages. Wouldn't they both tell each other this text message? But it can be explained in other ways, so it's okay. Until the second plot point, Belmod actually chose the method of the original work and asked Shiho to protest. It has been six years. Didn't Shiho never think that Akihiko died because of the organization? It was actually Belmod who revealed the news, and this method was too clever. Let's not talk about my brother's side, why did he threaten Belmode until today? In the past two years, it can be said that he was trying to gain power and connections by lurking, but it was clear that Shiho could be stolen directly using illusions. Besides, the big Zhibo is harder to steal than the small Zhibo, because the use value of the big Zhibo is higher. It would be outrageous to directly kill Shiho in the original work, unless there are actually many people who can take over Shiho's position. What I mean by saying so much is that I think the author wrote it very well. But fan fiction is a second creation based on the work. Akihiko is so powerful and can do more things. Don't be afraid of missing the plot because of butterflies and insist on following the plot points of the original work. It's a little far-fetched for me personally. If, I mean if. If my brother has done so much and gone through so many worlds, but still can't change Shiho's fate... I don't know what to say next. Personal opinion, if you don't like it, you can delete it or not review it. Let me once again express that the author's handling of other parts is really good. Thanks for the meal! ! ! !

太子喜欢女主？？

大大你的那篇星动什么时候开啊

Oh oh oh oh oh it's time to write! ! !

一个字爽，写小说看得我贼解气