When Yang Guo was learning to swim on Peach Blossom Island, he picked up a jade pendant among the corals. Later, he gave the jade pendant to Guo Fu because of Guo Fu's request.
The rest of their lives are closely connected because of this jade pendant!
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Long comment warning! The following is purely my own opinion, if you are afraid of spoilers, please don't read it~
It took me several days to finally see this, and I couldn't help but want to write a long review to the author. At first, it was because I was short of books and was addicted to the panic-type articles in the infinite stream, that I found this article by chance. As soon as I saw it, I was like, wow, what an interesting idea. I read the first chapter and kept following it. To be honest, the main factor that attracts me to follow is the author's conception and imagination. As a bookworm in the past ten years, I am not very interested in clichéd articles that can predict the next plot at once. Some niche novels have become more and more popular, not to mention that there are very few authors who get better and better with their writing~
Jumping quickly from the first short story to the 100th one, I thought DaDa wanted to write a realistic story between people, using Brother Ye's dream as a branch line. Unexpectedly, there were several big twists, but these turns were unexpected and connected very smoothly. This is what makes DaDa awesome!
The first two short stories are just an introduction. Starting from the official unit drama story "Rose Hotel", it truly reflects the author's powerful imagination. This unit has its own protagonists, Xiao Song and Agui (ghost). The description of the communication between them is very good. The story is mixed with many horror stalks and elements. The overall shaping is also very good, and the atmosphere is given. Dada slowly unfolded the previous foreshadowing and started a new round of foreshadowing, which was exquisitely conceived. But the story is too short, and I feel that it is overkill as a unit drama. I don't understand the meaning of "ugly" at the beginning, and then I still like to use repeated words to express the inner drama. Very straightforward words and expressions, this kind of feeling is more immersive. Sometimes too gorgeous words can easily cause drama, and it can be seen that there is real intention in writing. (Insert a digression, the description of the beautiful girl is very strong... I can tell you a few stories later.) Ahem, back to the point, compared to the story in Suzhou, this story is a qualitative leap. If the Suzhou horror story can have a bigger "game" like this story, the tone and starting point must be better! (My requirements are really high, please ignore them, they are already great enough hh)
Regarding the short story of the Hundred Man Haunted Mansion Adventure, to be honest, I don't think it is as scary as the previous short story, because I am a bit out of character. In terms of the environment, I feel that I want to create horror elements without giving up the comedy, but the connection is a bit abrupt. There are too many overlapping words and sentences in the environment, which is a bit redundant, and it makes me feel funny. For example, there are ghosts all over the screen and nearly two lines, poof! Let's talk about the theme framework. It's pretty good. The story is told from the perspective of an ordinary person. The radio newcomer Wu Ge tells the story from the perspective of a girl he likes. It's a bit like Xiao Song's hahaha counterattack meme. The second half of the story is very interesting. On the adventure, life is different, people's hearts are different, what you see is not what it is, what is false is false, what is false is true, what is false is true, it is really well portrayed. Then it leads to a time-traveling plot, paving the way for what follows.
In the story of Underworld Co., Ltd., I was a little interested in the rescue dice at first. This setting is very clever and rare. What impressed me deeply was Xiao Hong in "Hundred Demons at Night". It was really hard to watch. Family is very important for children. As a girl, in a deformed environment that favors sons over daughters, she can still maintain her conscience, be kind, and value her younger brothers. It is really rare. I feel sad for Xiaohong, especially the sentence "Xiaohong left tears of dissatisfaction." What's not to be angry about? This is obviously great, and my wish was just to see my brother, but after going through so much, it finally came true. The end of the story is connected with the Rose Hotel, and the foreshadowing that was laid comes to light, but the next foreshadowing begins immediately.
As for the short story of reincarnation as a human being, I feel that it is a bit flat in the middle. The beginning is really attractive to me, with the system of farming, buying, buying, buying, golden fingers and so on. Maybe the expectations are a bit high, so I am not very interested in the middle part. The rescue plot at the end is actually good, but I don't quite understand some of the personal settings, so it doesn't affect his use of time. Finally, I also explained the relationship between He and Ke, Song Ge's cameo, and the bosses of Mao Shi and Fang Xi. The ending was amazing hahaha
The story of "Mysterious Mansion" is a bit unexpected hahaha. The overall feeling is not as loose as the previous stories. It is very compact and describes many realistic and human things, which is very moving. Many details are linked to the characters in the previous story. When put together, the author's imagination is really strong! Wang Daochang, the light of righteousness, is so powerful! A lot of my focus is on Brother Yang's small theater on the title page. Brother Yang is well set up. Although there are some unspeakable things in the plot, the overall look is indeed very attractive. Starting from the mission of the women's house, there are few foreshadowings, but it is very attractive. The author has a lot of room to conceive the scene, and the description is very humorous. The words "Traveling a Thousand Miles in a Day" are really funny! It's a good story, but only a small part of it appears. I really can't get enough of it. Then there is the story on the big title page, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In fact, the female ghost is really pitiful. I hope that in reality, she will get her wish and repay kindness with kindness.
The next story is a ghost-recruiting game. I have to say that I was confused by the title. It is not a traditional game, but a combination of several games with many novel elements added. It is very refreshing to watch. Looking at it, I suddenly felt that it was a bit similar to the configuration of Squidward Game and Alice in the Land of Dying, which was particularly interesting. Ahhhhhhhh xn It's like this a lot of times, because I watch this unit basically at night, at two or three in the morning, it's very quiet, and I completely become the protagonist, okay! (I was startled after them, please don't scare me orz) Fortunately, the small title page and some funny characters eased the situation a bit. I didn't like some of the characters, they were very annoying to watch, and so were the emotional lines. Xianjinghai's reversal was unexpected. Unexpectedly, it was still an identity card. The god of mahjong, yyds, I am so happy playing mahjong every day during the Chinese New Year. I have achieved everything I dreamed of, and I feel so immersed in it. And Zhang Jun and his wife Ono were tortured and the old lady was so angry! A few of the previous stories were actually quite slow to pick up, but this story has a lot of twists and turns, and it's very compact and fun to watch!
Then there is the story of travel ghosts. Every time I see this kind of scene of traveling in Suzhou, I will dream back to visiting Suzhou three or four years ago, eating a lot there, staying in a nice little famous hotel, and visiting classic attractions (I'm glad I didn't join a tour hehe and Then I thought that many authors can actually write about famous hotels. It has more feeling than hotels and so on. You can add a lot of scary materials into it. Hahaha) There is a short story before and mentions those gardens. I must mention that I regret not going because it rained on the day I planned to go. So this article can be easily incorporated into it and pretend that I have been there. Hahaha, when I first read the article, it felt a bit too real, but after reading it, I felt that this kind of writing is really delicious! After that, there were several big twists and some terrifying scenes that really made me want to watch it. Haha, I am both afraid and loving to watch it. After that, there is a big fat title page, and the whole overall picture is intertwined bit by bit. The small stories in the later stages are really interesting!
It is constantly interspersed with some short stories on small title pages, which are huge and beautiful! Sometimes I am really attracted by the small title page, that is to say, the author can obviously expand the small title page into a story or a book, but it will provide us with welfare~ It may be heart-wrenching or heartbreaking. The twists and turns between Ke and Peng confused me hahh, and the most funny scenes and characters, such as Brother Song, really made me laugh to death!
Finally some of my little suggestions~
I feel that the author's writing style is a bit green at the beginning. In some small chapters, the reading is not very fluent. There are too many paragraphs and it seems a bit tired. For example, there is a chapter He xx//He xx//He xx //It is divided into three paragraphs. , I think it would be more comfortable if it were turned into one paragraph, but many people like this method of segmentation (because I have become accustomed to being attracted by the plot after seeing the later chapters. After all, in the face of absolutely awesome content, these forms are secondary). Later chapters become smoother; the text becomes smoother; The story definitely doesn't fully reflect the key points of the plot, and you can also feel that there are a lot of things to be given at the beginning. In fact, there can be more foreshadowing, which does not need to be given directly, to make it more suspenseful and attractive, because the beginning and copywriting of an article are really important, even if the subsequent units The content of the play is indeed very good, but the lack of an attractive beginning will make many readers who like this type of writing miss a good article; the description of some details will be a bit stuck, and may need to be processed with more layers. For example, when it comes to strange faces, the surrounding atmosphere has actually been given Now, if I describe what kind of weird face it is, and add another stroke, it will be more immersive, but it may also be the author's great intention in writing, whetting my appetite, making me want to read more, because when I really want to know what the female ghost in white looks like, Brother Ye woke up from the dream (falling!).
Of course, I am simply picky and nitpicking, hahahahaha, it's just my reading sense! The short stories in the next few units hope to include scenes of interstellar, zombies, cultivating immortals (you can use Wang Daochang as the protagonist!), Or strange stories about rules (I have always wanted to write this kind of article, highly recommended), etc. I am really looking forward to the following stories!
I am super impressed by the author's great ability and perseverance. It is really amazing for a 70k+ short novel and a unit drama! It definitely needs a lot of bragging~
Author, it's been five years, it's time for an update! ! !
Long comment warning! The following is purely my own opinion, if you are afraid of spoilers, please don't read it~ It took me several days to finally see this, and I couldn't help but want to write a long review to the author. At first, it was because I was short of books and was addicted to the panic-type articles in the infinite stream, that I found this article by chance. As soon as I saw it, I was like, wow, what an interesting idea. I read the first chapter and kept following it. To be honest, the main factor that attracts me to follow is the author's conception and imagination. As a bookworm in the past ten years, I am not very interested in clichéd articles that can predict the next plot at once. Some niche novels have become more and more popular, not to mention that there are very few authors who get better and better with their writing~ Jumping quickly from the first short story to the 100th one, I thought DaDa wanted to write a realistic story between people, using Brother Ye's dream as a branch line. Unexpectedly, there were several big twists, but these turns were unexpected and connected very smoothly. This is what makes DaDa awesome! The first two short stories are just an introduction. Starting from the official unit drama story "Rose Hotel", it truly reflects the author's powerful imagination. This unit has its own protagonists, Xiao Song and Agui (ghost). The description of the communication between them is very good. The story is mixed with many horror stalks and elements. The overall shaping is also very good, and the atmosphere is given. Dada slowly unfolded the previous foreshadowing and started a new round of foreshadowing, which was exquisitely conceived. But the story is too short, and I feel that it is overkill as a unit drama. I don't understand the meaning of "ugly" at the beginning, and then I still like to use repeated words to express the inner drama. Very straightforward words and expressions, this kind of feeling is more immersive. Sometimes too gorgeous words can easily cause drama, and it can be seen that there is real intention in writing. (Insert a digression, the description of the beautiful girl is very strong... I can tell you a few stories later.) Ahem, back to the point, compared to the story in Suzhou, this story is a qualitative leap. If the Suzhou horror story can have a bigger "game" like this story, the tone and starting point must be better! (My requirements are really high, please ignore them, they are already great enough hh) Regarding the short story of the Hundred Man Haunted Mansion Adventure, to be honest, I don't think it is as scary as the previous short story, because I am a bit out of character. In terms of the environment, I feel that I want to create horror elements without giving up the comedy, but the connection is a bit abrupt. There are too many overlapping words and sentences in the environment, which is a bit redundant, and it makes me feel funny. For example, there are ghosts all over the screen and nearly two lines, poof! Let's talk about the theme framework. It's pretty good. The story is told from the perspective of an ordinary person. The radio newcomer Wu Ge tells the story from the perspective of a girl he likes. It's a bit like Xiao Song's hahaha counterattack meme. The second half of the story is very interesting. On the adventure, life is different, people's hearts are different, what you see is not what it is, what is false is false, what is false is true, what is false is true, it is really well portrayed. Then it leads to a time-traveling plot, paving the way for what follows. In the story of Underworld Co., Ltd., I was a little interested in the rescue dice at first. This setting is very clever and rare. What impressed me deeply was Xiao Hong in "Hundred Demons at Night". It was really hard to watch. Family is very important for children. As a girl, in a deformed environment that favors sons over daughters, she can still maintain her conscience, be kind, and value her younger brothers. It is really rare. I feel sad for Xiaohong, especially the sentence "Xiaohong left tears of dissatisfaction." What's not to be angry about? This is obviously great, and my wish was just to see my brother, but after going through so much, it finally came true. The end of the story is connected with the Rose Hotel, and the foreshadowing that was laid comes to light, but the next foreshadowing begins immediately. As for the short story of reincarnation as a human being, I feel that it is a bit flat in the middle. The beginning is really attractive to me, with the system of farming, buying, buying, buying, golden fingers and so on. Maybe the expectations are a bit high, so I am not very interested in the middle part. The rescue plot at the end is actually good, but I don't quite understand some of the personal settings, so it doesn't affect his use of time. Finally, I also explained the relationship between He and Ke, Song Ge's cameo, and the bosses of Mao Shi and Fang Xi. The ending was amazing hahaha The story of "Mysterious Mansion" is a bit unexpected hahaha. The overall feeling is not as loose as the previous stories. It is very compact and describes many realistic and human things, which is very moving. Many details are linked to the characters in the previous story. When put together, the author's imagination is really strong! Wang Daochang, the light of righteousness, is so powerful! A lot of my focus is on Brother Yang's small theater on the title page. Brother Yang is well set up. Although there are some unspeakable things in the plot, the overall look is indeed very attractive. Starting from the mission of the women's house, there are few foreshadowings, but it is very attractive. The author has a lot of room to conceive the scene, and the description is very humorous. The words "Traveling a Thousand Miles in a Day" are really funny! It's a good story, but only a small part of it appears. I really can't get enough of it. Then there is the story on the big title page, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch. In fact, the female ghost is really pitiful. I hope that in reality, she will get her wish and repay kindness with kindness. The next story is a ghost-recruiting game. I have to say that I was confused by the title. It is not a traditional game, but a combination of several games with many novel elements added. It is very refreshing to watch. Looking at it, I suddenly felt that it was a bit similar to the configuration of Squidward Game and Alice in the Land of Dying, which was particularly interesting. Ahhhhhhhh xn It's like this a lot of times, because I watch this unit basically at night, at two or three in the morning, it's very quiet, and I completely become the protagonist, okay! (I was startled after them, please don't scare me orz) Fortunately, the small title page and some funny characters eased the situation a bit. I didn't like some of the characters, they were very annoying to watch, and so were the emotional lines. Xianjinghai's reversal was unexpected. Unexpectedly, it was still an identity card. The god of mahjong, yyds, I am so happy playing mahjong every day during the Chinese New Year. I have achieved everything I dreamed of, and I feel so immersed in it. And Zhang Jun and his wife Ono were tortured and the old lady was so angry! A few of the previous stories were actually quite slow to pick up, but this story has a lot of twists and turns, and it's very compact and fun to watch! Then there is the story of travel ghosts. Every time I see this kind of scene of traveling in Suzhou, I will dream back to visiting Suzhou three or four years ago, eating a lot there, staying in a nice little famous hotel, and visiting classic attractions (I'm glad I didn't join a tour hehe and Then I thought that many authors can actually write about famous hotels. It has more feeling than hotels and so on. You can add a lot of scary materials into it. Hahaha) There is a short story before and mentions those gardens. I must mention that I regret not going because it rained on the day I planned to go. So this article can be easily incorporated into it and pretend that I have been there. Hahaha, when I first read the article, it felt a bit too real, but after reading it, I felt that this kind of writing is really delicious! After that, there were several big twists and some terrifying scenes that really made me want to watch it. Haha, I am both afraid and loving to watch it. After that, there is a big fat title page, and the whole overall picture is intertwined bit by bit. The small stories in the later stages are really interesting! It is constantly interspersed with some short stories on small title pages, which are huge and beautiful! Sometimes I am really attracted by the small title page, that is to say, the author can obviously expand the small title page into a story or a book, but it will provide us with welfare~ It may be heart-wrenching or heartbreaking. The twists and turns between Ke and Peng confused me hahh, and the most funny scenes and characters, such as Brother Song, really made me laugh to death! Finally some of my little suggestions~ I feel that the author's writing style is a bit green at the beginning. In some small chapters, the reading is not very fluent. There are too many paragraphs and it seems a bit tired. For example, there is a chapter He xx//He xx//He xx //It is divided into three paragraphs. , I think it would be more comfortable if it were turned into one paragraph, but many people like this method of segmentation (because I have become accustomed to being attracted by the plot after seeing the later chapters. After all, in the face of absolutely awesome content, these forms are secondary). Later chapters become smoother; the text becomes smoother; The story definitely doesn't fully reflect the key points of the plot, and you can also feel that there are a lot of things to be given at the beginning. In fact, there can be more foreshadowing, which does not need to be given directly, to make it more suspenseful and attractive, because the beginning and copywriting of an article are really important, even if the subsequent units The content of the play is indeed very good, but the lack of an attractive beginning will make many readers who like this type of writing miss a good article; the description of some details will be a bit stuck, and may need to be processed with more layers. For example, when it comes to strange faces, the surrounding atmosphere has actually been given Now, if I describe what kind of weird face it is, and add another stroke, it will be more immersive, but it may also be the author's great intention in writing, whetting my appetite, making me want to read more, because when I really want to know what the female ghost in white looks like, Brother Ye woke up from the dream (falling!). Of course, I am simply picky and nitpicking, hahahahaha, it's just my reading sense! The short stories in the next few units hope to include scenes of interstellar, zombies, cultivating immortals (you can use Wang Daochang as the protagonist!), Or strange stories about rules (I have always wanted to write this kind of article, highly recommended), etc. I am really looking forward to the following stories! I am super impressed by the author's great ability and perseverance. It is really amazing for a 70k+ short novel and a unit drama! It definitely needs a lot of bragging~
Author, it's been five years, it's time for an update! ! !