A ghost that is more than four hundred years old meets a wolf demon that is thousands of years old
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Fat man. . . Fatty is so cute. . . The fried haired shou is also so cute. . . Denzhen Meng's face was bloody. . . This article is really good. . .
Alas... I don't always have time to take a closer look. I can only rate it and express my feelings~~ Come on!
Jia you!!!!!!!!!
It looks great. Come on (￣３￣)a
I haven't dared to read campus articles for a long time, but I still read them when I see good ones. I have to say that this article is quite attractive to me. The main reason is that the attack and reception of this article suit my taste. The campus stage when I first wrote it was quite interesting, and it was not as childish as many children wrote. Later, I went out into the society. Maybe the author has not been out of the society yet? I started to write based on the grievances of rich families, which is very bloody. However, this kind of writing is still very attractive to many children who have not been out of society. However, this kind of writing is written out of thin air. The more I read it, the more it is the same. I am an old man, and I prefer to read stories that are close to life. That requires the author to have a certain life experience, and even when making up stories, there will be less ridiculous loopholes. The last stage of this article made me a little painful. Although the author wanted to write about one part of the present and another part of memories, there was a sudden switch between the two. The boundaries were not clear and the content was very jumpy. I kept reading and thought I had missed something. In short, I think the author's writing is quite good. I hope he can make more progress both in terms of experience and writing style. I will continue to follow you.
Don't run away~I'll catch you~
Ah, is this also going to be suspended?
So that's how it is, I understand.
The last sentence is so lovely!
Why haven't you shown up yet?
Mao'er and Shenjun have a bright future~~~The author's reply:
Well, this is also the most gratifying couple for me...
Everything else was okay, but the emotional aspect was rushed and stiff, and there was an inexplicable feeling of 1cpN.
Let Xiaobai come more violently...
Next door>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Could it be Mr. Su?
Name: Mengye Danmei Club
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I also hope that adults and everyone sitting here will come to us to read and chat~~
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Turn it around :)
Go gn, come on~~~ I will keep chasing, even though I am a diver for thousands of years (enough mud!
Yeah, it's pretty good, but it's too heavy and a bit depressing.
Fat man. . . Fatty is so cute. . . The fried haired shou is also so cute. . . Denzhen Meng's face was bloody. . . This article is really good. . .
Alas... I don't always have time to take a closer look. I can only rate it and express my feelings~~ Come on!
Jia you!!!!!!!!!
It looks great. Come on (￣３￣)a
I haven't dared to read campus articles for a long time, but I still read them when I see good ones. I have to say that this article is quite attractive to me. The main reason is that the attack and reception of this article suit my taste. The campus stage when I first wrote it was quite interesting, and it was not as childish as many children wrote. Later, I went out into the society. Maybe the author has not been out of the society yet? I started to write based on the grievances of rich families, which is very bloody. However, this kind of writing is still very attractive to many children who have not been out of society. However, this kind of writing is written out of thin air. The more I read it, the more it is the same. I am an old man, and I prefer to read stories that are close to life. That requires the author to have a certain life experience, and even when making up stories, there will be less ridiculous loopholes. The last stage of this article made me a little painful. Although the author wanted to write about one part of the present and another part of memories, there was a sudden switch between the two. The boundaries were not clear and the content was very jumpy. I kept reading and thought I had missed something. In short, I think the author's writing is quite good. I hope he can make more progress both in terms of experience and writing style. I will continue to follow you.
Don't run away~I'll catch you~
Ah, is this also going to be suspended?
So that's how it is, I understand.
The last sentence is so lovely!
Why haven't you shown up yet?
Mao'er and Shenjun have a bright future~~~The author's reply: Well, this is also the most gratifying couple for me...
Everything else was okay, but the emotional aspect was rushed and stiff, and there was an inexplicable feeling of 1cpN.
Let Xiaobai come more violently...
Next door>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Could it be Mr. Su?
Name: Mengye Danmei Club Address: http://www. Mengyedm. Com/index. Php Reprinted article: Full text We will reserve all your rights to remove, modify, etc. The article I also hope that adults and everyone sitting here will come to us to read and chat~~ ———————————————————————————— Turn it around :)
Go gn, come on~~~ I will keep chasing, even though I am a diver for thousands of years (enough mud!
Yeah, it's pretty good, but it's too heavy and a bit depressing.