I write a little bit every day, and it seems like a lot when accumulated. In fact, if I squeeze it in, it feels like it is all meaningless.
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Do wedges and Guanyin in White count together as the beginning? Because Guanyin in White is not connected to version 2, I included it in version 1.
The beginnings of the two versions have their own characteristics. The first version is about the vicissitudes of life and the turbulent undercurrents, while the second version is about the youthful spirit and bright future.
Personally, I feel that version two is more suitable as the beginning. It has a compact plot and focuses on people. It quickly establishes the character image, catches people's attention, and leads to Shi Heng's line early. The content of version one is still from the early Ming Dynasty, and it doesn't match the copy. When I read it, I felt like I was watching an extra chapter of Jin Yi Xing... And the rhythm is slower. This rhythm is a bit slow as the beginning, so it may be more suitable to put it in the main text.
In addition, I don't know what the tone of the whole story is. The first version is restrained and deep, and the second version is free and bright. Which version's tone is more consistent with the whole story?
Why is there such a thing as a little junior sister secretly falling in love with Qingchen_(:з∠)_
Do wedges and Guanyin in White count together as the beginning? Because Guanyin in White is not connected to version 2, I included it in version 1. The beginnings of the two versions have their own characteristics. The first version is about the vicissitudes of life and the turbulent undercurrents, while the second version is about the youthful spirit and bright future. Personally, I feel that version two is more suitable as the beginning. It has a compact plot and focuses on people. It quickly establishes the character image, catches people's attention, and leads to Shi Heng's line early. The content of version one is still from the early Ming Dynasty, and it doesn't match the copy. When I read it, I felt like I was watching an extra chapter of Jin Yi Xing... And the rhythm is slower. This rhythm is a bit slow as the beginning, so it may be more suitable to put it in the main text. In addition, I don't know what the tone of the whole story is. The first version is restrained and deep, and the second version is free and bright. Which version's tone is more consistent with the whole story?
Why is there such a thing as a little junior sister secretly falling in love with Qingchen_(:з∠)_
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