This marriage is not what she wants, and this man is not what she loves. Getting rid of it has always been her biggest dream.
This marriage is what he wants, this woman is what he loves deeply, and winning her heart has always been his biggest dream.
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Many adults said that it doesn't look better after the change, and some said it was a mess, but I personally like the way it looks after the change.
Mr. Feng Lele is right. The revised article uses flashback techniques, but the character's character and the plot of the story have not changed.
This was set at the beginning of my writing.
Mr. Wildfire is right. I have restrained some lightness and added a little heaviness, but the humor remains the same. Humor and funny are not the same concept.
Therefore, I am learning to write humorous articles but not funny articles.
Thank you for your opinions, I will continue to work hard.
Reader comments
. . . Author, you are finally back~ It's really not easy waiting for you to update the article. I just saw some disgusting plots in a beautiful male fanfic, so I decisively gave up and came back to seek comfort.
After reading the title, it reminded me of Conan
Author ~ I'm here to seek revenge [with a smile]
Not to mention the abandonment of the eldest daughter, Soy Sauce, but now the second daughter, YUI Jiang, is allowed to go to the pervert gathering area~ [YUI Jiang should stay at home and go out, she will meet the unscrupulous LOLI uncle with a bad heart (scum). The forever girly parenthesis is fake, real and perverted~!
The author has prepared a lot of delicious food and vegetables for you! Do you like eggs, cabbage, radishes or tomatoes? ? You can't hold up the pot lid, bamboo hat or anything like that, you have to be a good concubine~
It always stops suddenly when I start to watch... Adults are so good at breaking up (crazy)
Do your best for the exam. Since you don't have time for a cover, let's get rid of that empty cover. This way it doesn't look so abrupt. .
Come and give it a try every day, don't give up!
Give 74 Wen a thumbs up and don't start it carelessly.
It's a bit bloody, but it's okay to write. Will Chen also be cannon fodder?
Uh-huh... Come on... Sister comes to see you... Not bad, not bad... Much better than my grades here&
Haha, Bai Moyao,,,, when will I update again---the flowers have all withered----
Finally everyone is happy.
The ending is very touching.
The maple rain condenses into smoke, wait and see!
. . . Author, you are finally back~ It's really not easy waiting for you to update the article. I just saw some disgusting plots in a beautiful male fanfic, so I decisively gave up and came back to seek comfort.
After reading the title, it reminded me of Conan
Author ~ I'm here to seek revenge [with a smile] Not to mention the abandonment of the eldest daughter, Soy Sauce, but now the second daughter, YUI Jiang, is allowed to go to the pervert gathering area~ [YUI Jiang should stay at home and go out, she will meet the unscrupulous LOLI uncle with a bad heart (scum). The forever girly parenthesis is fake, real and perverted~! The author has prepared a lot of delicious food and vegetables for you! Do you like eggs, cabbage, radishes or tomatoes? ? You can't hold up the pot lid, bamboo hat or anything like that, you have to be a good concubine~
It always stops suddenly when I start to watch... Adults are so good at breaking up (crazy)
Do your best for the exam. Since you don't have time for a cover, let's get rid of that empty cover. This way it doesn't look so abrupt. .
Come and give it a try every day, don't give up!
Give 74 Wen a thumbs up and don't start it carelessly.
It's a bit bloody, but it's okay to write. Will Chen also be cannon fodder?
Uh-huh... Come on... Sister comes to see you... Not bad, not bad... Much better than my grades here&
Haha, Bai Moyao,,,, when will I update again---the flowers have all withered----
Finally everyone is happy. The ending is very touching.
The maple rain condenses into smoke, wait and see!
Come on, Chong Chong~~Come on, come on! ! !