[Comprehensive] a Boy Wearing a Striped Shirt

The author wrote this book very well???, I wonder if we are lucky enough to see the ending? ???

Frigga Bullet is a good helper for home and travel intimidation and deterrence

Real. Mrs. Gu Momo has her own style in writing, the characters are very funny and the dialogues are also very funny, but the story is very exciting, diverse, and tragic. It's a serious comedy, and it's super good-looking.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I chased them all in one night

It's so cold. . . Isn't there any girl here to talk about two cents?

Sit back and wait for the relationship to develop

Highly recommended~ Come on! Persist in!

What the hell is a little bit sexy? ?

One day, all the wind will blow towards you

Renew------------

Ah, madam?_? I miss you so much

Come on(? ??_??)?

Move the Civil Affairs Bureau here quickly! ! Huh? Already married, let's go straight to the bridal chamber!

I haven't updated it after a year... Then I'll do it again |?ω?｀)

Knock on the Bowl Part 2, author, come on! As for my thoughts after reading it, when I first read it, the overall feeling of the article was that of good food + a smooth career path. After reading it, I realized that the author meant to write a group portrait, and the slope was a bit steep. Because when the protagonist first entered Tianfuju, there were a series of slap-in-the-face plots, and the rhythm was clear and refreshing. However, after entering the plot of King of Chefs, the text suddenly focused a lot on various chefs (although it is still in line with my personal preference). In contrast, the competition part has a longer rhythm and plot. Slowing down, simply put, means that the slope of the climax cannot keep up, so readers who are attracted by the pleasure of being slapped in the face will be unhappy, and they will be dissatisfied with the supporting characters such as the Gu brothers and others who "hinder" the protagonist's career. In this case, they may no longer have the patience to understand the characters and the plot. But this does not mean that the soul of the characters is not good-looking, but that the characters, food, and career need a more precise and comfortable balance. This article obviously needs adjustment. Then, I think the previous comments are very accurate regarding readers' preferences. What do you want to choose, wife of the author? One thing that is very clear is that there is no need to follow the reader's preferences everywhere. The most important thing is that the author writes what he wants to write and "expresses" it comfortably. Otherwise, it is easy to lose himself between the fish and the bear's paw, which is unnecessary. The Gu brothers part, which was quite controversial before, is not so much that people like watching delicious food and cooking. Personally, I think it is more about avoiding some redundant anxiety? A career line that is inevitably hindered but relaxed and smoothly climbing, a relationship that is full of contradictions but full of life, harmonious and happy, a life that has occasional changes but is interesting and humorous, a stable and peaceful life, supplemented by gentle and healing food... In general, no matter how the characters' psychology changes, or how twists and turns the plot turns out, the audience needs to stay at home. A comfortable line, this line represents the core atmosphere of the entire article. All fluctuations revolve around this line. The rhythm and proportion of up and down must be well controlled. If it is a hearty and lively life and food article, if the "down" part stays in a certain negative atmosphere for too long, the balance will be destroyed, and the audience will feel uncomfortable and will inevitably criticize... A lot of nonsense, but this is what it feels like, right? The author doesn't need to think too much. Writing and writing about food are not contradictory. They just need to control the proportion or integrate them better. Then for the food part, avoid turning it into a simple recipe article. It is best to mobilize the readers' five senses, otherwise it will become redundant. Regarding the title of the book, in fact, when I was looking for an article on the food label, I was looking for this title because I thought "It's delicious!" Adding an exclamation point is cute orz, and I personally don't think I need to change it. However, if the author wants to create a food world and carefully sculpt various characters, it is best to avoid words that tend to be personal and enjoyable when changing the names. For example, "Top Chef King" actually looks more like the protagonist's struggle history alone. Regarding the ending, it is indeed a bit rushed. To me, it feels like the final score is missing from the overall score, right? Fu's incident was an unpleasant episode in the last game of the schedule, and it was too "light" as an ending. Mr. Qi's statement can only be regarded as the exhaust of the Fu incident. The real ending actually seems to only have about ten sentences? It seems that everything has been summarized, but in fact it only talks about some objective facts that have already existed in the reader's sequential imagination. Of course, such an ending will be unpleasant. There is no rectification and no lead, or to put it more lightly, the rectification is insufficient and the lead is not clear... The audience's final sight is blank, there is no suspense, and even the description of the next stage is almost non-existent, let alone changing the line of sight to open up the horizon. In fact, even the general conclusion of the previous stage is not formed, it is just a feeling that is better than nothing. However, these are barely acceptable. After all, the game has just begun. The connection between the two books is very strong and stable, so it will not be confusing. I typed a lot of words without realizing it. Anyway, come on, author! Looking forward to the next one

This article is the sports fanfic I have always wanted to see the most. I have read it many times in the past few years since it only had more than a dozen chapters (the pain of infinite literary shortage), so you guys! ! ! !

So cruel...(╥╯^╰╥)

Great, looking forward to the update~~

The protagonists of the system article are all movie stars.

When will Shen Yan come out? If not, Yu Zi will be bullied. (

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