Yao Yao never thought that one day her wish would come true. One day she woke up from a dream and suddenly she was in ancient times and became a boy...
The original name was "Xiaoyaoyou", Xiaoyao accidentally discovered a novel with the same name, so...
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M, I found a mistake. Ah la la ah la la
Come on and update. . .
Super awesome, keep up the good work! !
There should be no more abuse in the next volume, right? QQ
So Chen remembered that in the distant second chapter, there was a foreshadowing of Qianxun holding a knife in front of the tomb to worship - Bing Jun is really an expert with thousands of miles of grass and gray lines - according to the plot trend, it is estimated that it will have to wait until many years to fully understand the ins and outs of the matter...
Maybe because it was published in two chapters, I didn't quite understand the twist of Asaru putting down the knife on Xiaobai's neck and turning to cook the Arrancar - the chapters were divided right there, and the first impression was that it was very abrupt. Maybe a little more foreshadowing would be better.
The subsequent description of the separation of the two is quite good, but Bing Junnai could be more stepmother-could it be that Mouchen was abused too much by Hua Qiangu? Orz-Qianxun's anger, sadness, despair, Xiaobai's helplessness, sorrow, and pain can be written more tragically. My suggestion is to add a more moderate description of the environment.
It's time for the second male actor to appear next - this kind of bloody scene is bloody but necessary (the so-called bloody scenes are because they are too classic and are overused and end up being bloody) - I am eagerly looking forward to Bingjun's next chapter, it must be very awesome...
Finally, I would like to make a little complaint: Xiaobai Noi has no right to think that Qianxun is too young, and his age in the Soul Society must be converted before he can be used in the present world. One year in this world is approximately equal to ten years in Soul Society (according to calculations from Du Niang Encyclopedia and TV). Qianxun's age in Soul Society is 160 years old (...), And Nao is only 133--she is still very young... (Xiaobai: Don't call me short!!! Mouchen: Me too I didn't say you were short—although for Xiaobai's age, it is obvious that your height corresponds to that... (Escape from the roof of the sewer) Xiaobai: Sitting in the frosty sky! ! !
M, I found a mistake. Ah la la ah la la
Come on and update. . .
Super awesome, keep up the good work! !
There should be no more abuse in the next volume, right? QQ
So Chen remembered that in the distant second chapter, there was a foreshadowing of Qianxun holding a knife in front of the tomb to worship - Bing Jun is really an expert with thousands of miles of grass and gray lines - according to the plot trend, it is estimated that it will have to wait until many years to fully understand the ins and outs of the matter... Maybe because it was published in two chapters, I didn't quite understand the twist of Asaru putting down the knife on Xiaobai's neck and turning to cook the Arrancar - the chapters were divided right there, and the first impression was that it was very abrupt. Maybe a little more foreshadowing would be better. The subsequent description of the separation of the two is quite good, but Bing Junnai could be more stepmother-could it be that Mouchen was abused too much by Hua Qiangu? Orz-Qianxun's anger, sadness, despair, Xiaobai's helplessness, sorrow, and pain can be written more tragically. My suggestion is to add a more moderate description of the environment. It's time for the second male actor to appear next - this kind of bloody scene is bloody but necessary (the so-called bloody scenes are because they are too classic and are overused and end up being bloody) - I am eagerly looking forward to Bingjun's next chapter, it must be very awesome... Finally, I would like to make a little complaint: Xiaobai Noi has no right to think that Qianxun is too young, and his age in the Soul Society must be converted before he can be used in the present world. One year in this world is approximately equal to ten years in Soul Society (according to calculations from Du Niang Encyclopedia and TV). Qianxun's age in Soul Society is 160 years old (...), And Nao is only 133--she is still very young... (Xiaobai: Don't call me short!!! Mouchen: Me too I didn't say you were short—although for Xiaobai's age, it is obvious that your height corresponds to that... (Escape from the roof of the sewer) Xiaobai: Sitting in the frosty sky! ! !