The Love Journey of a Chef and a Swordsman—a Letter to Sanji in My Heart

I have read all the author's football articles, and I have really improved greatly in his writing style and control of various plots! After reading the final chapter of the book, I watched the game at the beginning and the games in the last few chapters again. It was really different. The details and detailed control were so mature. Although the author's writing was good from the beginning, the chapters towards the end were obviously more sophisticated, and this progress was also reflected in the book writing process of The Striker Next Door. From the perspective of legendary players, the most obvious point is: at the beginning, when Leo was in Real Madrid and Granada, the highlights (or match points) of the game were basically written around the protagonist alone. The protagonist was too prominent and the integrity of the football game was slightly ignored, but it did not affect the perception; it was a slap in the face. The later updated chapters changed the highlight of the game from purely individual to team-based individuals, strengthening the wonderful performance brought about by teamwork. For me personally, the game became more like a competition, that is, the relevant text has a stronger visual sense, and the reading experience is more like watching a live broadcast than reading a novel. At the same time, this also reflects the reality that the team is more important than the pure individual in modern football tactics, making this novel look more real. Another point is that Leo's character image is more fleshed out. In layman's terms, he is more like a person than a simple character: at the beginning of the book, although Leo's competitive line, family line and emotional line were not completely separated, my impressions were not very unified, and individual plots It gives me the feeling that it was written to create a qualified character, but as the story progresses, the author's writing style also improves. By the time of this update, although the emotional line has been weakened, I can already see that Leo's competition, emotion, and family affection are integrated. In reality, as a person, the emotions of a player must be complex and intertwined. In the process of this interweaving, Leo's image becomes real step by step. Anyway, thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful work!

Please update! This article looks really good

Hey, here I am. But since I'm in the third year of junior high school, I won't read it often. I'll probably make myself fatter by reading this book. Come on!

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Hey hey hey, I'm here to remind you of the update! ! ! Fried Chicken Looking forward to this article! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh the author of kswl will update it soon. I can't wait.