Maybe this was written in 2004? Forgot, the version scattered on the Internet. Save it for yourself.
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Haha, hahahahahahaha, so miserable!
It really ends hastily, and it feels like a lot of things haven't been explained clearly. Don't you plan to write a few more chapters, how is the relationship between the two of them, how old they are after more than ten years, and the specific events that happened in the space. Even the relationship between the two was very hasty from the beginning, and in the end I didn't even know what was going on...
Haha, hahahahahahaha, so miserable!
It really ends hastily, and it feels like a lot of things haven't been explained clearly. Don't you plan to write a few more chapters, how is the relationship between the two of them, how old they are after more than ten years, and the specific events that happened in the space. Even the relationship between the two was very hasty from the beginning, and in the end I didn't even know what was going on...