Give You a Home

This is my debut novel. I hope everyone will read Guan Haihan. After reading so many articles, I like it either because it's a scam or it's too slow. I like the indifference and attack. The writing is not good. For the first time, there are various issues that I don't like. I hope you can give me more opinions. The main intention remains the same, but I don't know if it's indifferent or not. I don't know how I will write it! If you like being indifferent, come in and give me some advice! Thank you so much