I want to write a legend, a legend about women!
She is the woman I imagined in my mind, the woman I want to be in my dreams
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Touch. . . I'm really not very good at comforting people. . . But I feel the same way, and I can't imagine how overwhelmed I would be if my grandma left me. . .
The plot concept is good, but your presentation is so confusing that Luoyang is in chaos. Paragraphing is necessary, and the use of punctuation marks must also be standardized. Presenting too much plot at once can overwhelm the reader with information.
Update soon, can't wait
I want to see it~please update it soon!
Nice looking, collected. Don't cheat, don't cheat, don't cheat (it's very important, so I say it 3 times
Touch. . . I'm really not very good at comforting people. . . But I feel the same way, and I can't imagine how overwhelmed I would be if my grandma left me. . .
The plot concept is good, but your presentation is so confusing that Luoyang is in chaos. Paragraphing is necessary, and the use of punctuation marks must also be standardized. Presenting too much plot at once can overwhelm the reader with information.
Update soon, can't wait
I want to see it~please update it soon!
Nice looking, collected. Don't cheat, don't cheat, don't cheat (it's very important, so I say it 3 times