Traveling through time to a strange world,
She became a pet,
As a cat it got his attention,
Their meeting was so dramatic,
Is the outcome destined when we meet?
Can they really be together? We'll see...
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I dug a new hole, but some people may not like this, so...
If you don't like it, don't go up and watch it, I'm afraid of criticism...
New pit address:
Soldier fan:
Bingmei
spy·love
Related:
Soldier·Mei·Wolf·Rui
Yuan Gaodanmei:
sea of fire
love
Avicinar Aka/Infinite Purgatory
Intention:
Reader comments
Leave a mark in the new article. Fatten, fatten
I got another ID and forgot the password. I forgot to score points last time, so I made up for it this time. Ru.
There has been new progress, looking forward to the next chapter!
Came from BS. Can't help but complain.
Girl, if you are under 16 years old, please ignore my words below, because I understand. I hope you will improve in the future.
I won't talk about the whole thing about Danmei. I'll just talk about my feelings after watching it.
1. Mary Sue.
The heroine in the article describes herself this way: As for my appearance... It's not that I'm narcissistic, they all say I'm very cute and loved by everyone.
I once received a love letter from a boy, which described it like this: "A beautiful, lovely girl, with black and smooth hair draped under her shoulders, with bangs on her forehead that meet her eyelashes, holding up her pink face, which exudes an elegant atmosphere. The long and curved shape resembles a crescent moon. A pair of big, bright black eyes are exposed under the eyelashes, and they seem to be able to talk. The small mouth is like a peach, and there is always an urge to kiss. The delicate white skin always feels like a touch, as tender and translucent as a pear, and is so beautiful - for the goddess in my heart."
There are many more plots that I won't list one by one. Mary Sue is very serious.
2. The text is a bit unclear. It's obvious that I didn't read carefully, so I suggest you revise more.
3. Because I also write about the pain of youth, but sorry, I am not writing about BG, which is considered a cold topic. So when I saw this article, I couldn't help but talk about it. I didn't feel the pain of youth at all, and those long paragraphs of words really left people speechless. Youth literature has a beautiful beginning, but the reality in the end is very cruel. It has a realistic atmosphere, and it is not something that Mary Sue added to moaning without reason.
4. The article actually changed the perspective once, from the perspective of the female protagonist to that of the male protagonist. I didn't notice it at first and didn't understand it, but later I found out that the perspective had secretly changed! How can you make readers feel so embarrassed~
I have raised so many opinions for the time being, so I bow.
Is this about to start a massacre? Abuse the body and mind
Torture the scumbag emperor to death! I suddenly felt pity for the Crown Princess. . .
Hello, Mary Suvin. It's really true, not only the copywriting, but also the main text is full of sophistication!
I haven't updated it yet. I'm so depressed that I really can't go on.
Leave a mark in the new article. Fatten, fatten
I got another ID and forgot the password. I forgot to score points last time, so I made up for it this time. Ru.
There has been new progress, looking forward to the next chapter!
Came from BS. Can't help but complain. Girl, if you are under 16 years old, please ignore my words below, because I understand. I hope you will improve in the future. I won't talk about the whole thing about Danmei. I'll just talk about my feelings after watching it. 1. Mary Sue. The heroine in the article describes herself this way: As for my appearance... It's not that I'm narcissistic, they all say I'm very cute and loved by everyone. I once received a love letter from a boy, which described it like this: "A beautiful, lovely girl, with black and smooth hair draped under her shoulders, with bangs on her forehead that meet her eyelashes, holding up her pink face, which exudes an elegant atmosphere. The long and curved shape resembles a crescent moon. A pair of big, bright black eyes are exposed under the eyelashes, and they seem to be able to talk. The small mouth is like a peach, and there is always an urge to kiss. The delicate white skin always feels like a touch, as tender and translucent as a pear, and is so beautiful - for the goddess in my heart." There are many more plots that I won't list one by one. Mary Sue is very serious. 2. The text is a bit unclear. It's obvious that I didn't read carefully, so I suggest you revise more. 3. Because I also write about the pain of youth, but sorry, I am not writing about BG, which is considered a cold topic. So when I saw this article, I couldn't help but talk about it. I didn't feel the pain of youth at all, and those long paragraphs of words really left people speechless. Youth literature has a beautiful beginning, but the reality in the end is very cruel. It has a realistic atmosphere, and it is not something that Mary Sue added to moaning without reason. 4. The article actually changed the perspective once, from the perspective of the female protagonist to that of the male protagonist. I didn't notice it at first and didn't understand it, but later I found out that the perspective had secretly changed! How can you make readers feel so embarrassed~ I have raised so many opinions for the time being, so I bow.
Is this about to start a massacre? Abuse the body and mind
Torture the scumbag emperor to death! I suddenly felt pity for the Crown Princess. . .
Hello, Mary Suvin. It's really true, not only the copywriting, but also the main text is full of sophistication!
I haven't updated it yet. I'm so depressed that I really can't go on.