This is a very bizarre time travel. The somewhat confused female protagonist meets the extremely handsome male protagonist, and the story unfolds from there. . .
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I come here from time to time to brush it up, and I've done it N times.
Finished? ?
Every time, it gives people an inexplicable result. It is thought-provoking~~
SF said ````
Finally updated~~~~I am crying and wiping away my tears~%>_<% I wish you a happy married life, haha
Happy National Day! O(∩_∩)O
I was silent for a longer time after reading this chapter. I didn't want to comment at first, but when I think about it, I don't like others to leave after reading the article, so I decided to comment anyway.
It's really, really funny! !
But you have to at least keep doing it. In fact, it's good to keep it like this. However, I suggest that you find someone to dress up as Comrade Wu Xie. This way is more in line with the tone of modern people. The time in the original work does not match ours, nor does the thinking.
Also, based on these two chapters, you can only defeat Wu Xie! For the rest, just try to write the original version. Since you start with the character of Wu Xie, you don't have to know much about the Five Elements, gossip, etc., Just be responsible for spoofing and so on.
Of course, this is just a suggestion. I am not writing this to say that your writing is not good, I just want to express my opinion towards you:
1. We are both novices, let's encourage each other!
2. Take responsibility for this pitfall and come back to me to fill it in!
3. Please improve this review! !
Well written, real skills can be seen in a small place
Um, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hmm, not bad
Come on
This copywriting is very confusing.
Owner? Is there a JQ owner with Qin Yin?
The turned-out serf sings and sings~~ It's just that for a smart person like Zhou Lu, his emotional intelligence is really zero~~ I doubt it
I come here from time to time to brush it up, and I've done it N times.
Finished? ? Every time, it gives people an inexplicable result. It is thought-provoking~~
SF said ````
Finally updated~~~~I am crying and wiping away my tears~%>_<% I wish you a happy married life, haha
Happy National Day! O(∩_∩)O
I was silent for a longer time after reading this chapter. I didn't want to comment at first, but when I think about it, I don't like others to leave after reading the article, so I decided to comment anyway. It's really, really funny! ! But you have to at least keep doing it. In fact, it's good to keep it like this. However, I suggest that you find someone to dress up as Comrade Wu Xie. This way is more in line with the tone of modern people. The time in the original work does not match ours, nor does the thinking. Also, based on these two chapters, you can only defeat Wu Xie! For the rest, just try to write the original version. Since you start with the character of Wu Xie, you don't have to know much about the Five Elements, gossip, etc., Just be responsible for spoofing and so on. Of course, this is just a suggestion. I am not writing this to say that your writing is not good, I just want to express my opinion towards you: 1. We are both novices, let's encourage each other! 2. Take responsibility for this pitfall and come back to me to fill it in! 3. Please improve this review! !
Well written, real skills can be seen in a small place
Um, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hmm, not bad Come on
This copywriting is very confusing.
Owner? Is there a JQ owner with Qin Yin?
The turned-out serf sings and sings~~ It's just that for a smart person like Zhou Lu, his emotional intelligence is really zero~~ I doubt it
Come on, author. . . Expect