She blocked her life
Watching the world with cold eyes
Living a very hard life
for someone's happiness
she surrounds herself
for someone's happiness
she ruined herself
Elegant and crazy Lan Xuan says he loves her
The sincere and passionate Joey wants to protect her
The sickly and mysterious Xiu pierced her soul
Finally, she woke up
That love is no longer the only one
Intention:
Reader comments
The writing is very good. I like this kind of writing very much. It is clean, a little wordy but very warm. But why write about the Kazakhs? ^ ^
I hope the author will continue to serialize it
If the male protagonist is confirmed to be Han, I will abandon the article
I came here from Bishui to meet the author... The setting of supernatural abilities is very suitable to my taste, especially the ability of the heroine, very creative =w=
Personally, I think that if a small and intriguing subplot is inserted in the first few chapters to better reflect the importance of the heroine's abilities, and a more detailed description of this can arouse readers' interest more. It can also familiarize readers with the main character's personality and the basic settings of the article, and at the same time, it can pave the way for the following main plot.
In addition, I am a little confused about the names of the characters in the article. Is it a European and American style name or a stroke... (Ignore this sentence orz)
The above is just my personal opinion, please don't be impatient~ As long as the author persists, there will be results, come on ↖(^ω^)↗
The writing is very good. I like this kind of writing very much. It is clean, a little wordy but very warm. But why write about the Kazakhs? ^ ^
I hope the author will continue to serialize it
If the male protagonist is confirmed to be Han, I will abandon the article
I came here from Bishui to meet the author... The setting of supernatural abilities is very suitable to my taste, especially the ability of the heroine, very creative =w= Personally, I think that if a small and intriguing subplot is inserted in the first few chapters to better reflect the importance of the heroine's abilities, and a more detailed description of this can arouse readers' interest more. It can also familiarize readers with the main character's personality and the basic settings of the article, and at the same time, it can pave the way for the following main plot. In addition, I am a little confused about the names of the characters in the article. Is it a European and American style name or a stroke... (Ignore this sentence orz) The above is just my personal opinion, please don't be impatient~ As long as the author persists, there will be results, come on ↖(^ω^)↗
Big~~~~~~Love Wenwen~~~~~Support YOU~~~~~~Come on~~~~Oh~~~~~
T^TThis story...
我想说我眼里容不下渣男……即使他也有他的痛苦，但是谁没有呢？
我发现在所以的同人文里除了榊太郎是主角的外，榊太郎要不是路人要不是反派。 PS：不喜欢榊太郎，虐他！！！！
B, remember to choose A upstairs.
I think I need to fatten up... How often should I update it?
Shisui like this is so cute, I look forward to it
没坑就好，会一直等哒~