The pen falls in the storm, and the poem turns into weeping ghosts and gods!
In this world, literati come first!
Writing articles and poems can lead to immortality, and literati can kill demons and bring peace to the world!
Poems, songs, calligraphy and painting, hundreds of schools of thought, where else can compare with the five thousand years of Greater China?
The moment Yunyuan came through, the legend was born!
Who else is more qualified to be the "unparalleled national warrior" than him?
Strong master and strong opponent, 1VS1, the cp is Qin Weilou.
In Su Shuang's upgraded stream, the protagonist can use ancient poems and songs.
As well as being inspired by "The Supreme Sage of Confucianism and Taoism", the author has agreed.
Bojun smiles, there is no need to be serious.
Tips ① Fire of life levels: red, orange, yellow, green, cyan, blue, purple.
②Levels of thunder tribulation: first-level thunder hidden dragon, third-level thunder seeing dragon, sixth-level thunder war dragon, ninth-level thunder rising dragon, worldly tribulation, inner demon tribulation, and one tribulation.
③Levels of literati: scholar, scholar, scholar, scholar, scholar, scholar, semi-sage, sub-sage, saint.
④My final article: Nishen [Quick Travel]
⑤My final article: Superstar [Cultivation]
⑥My final article: The highest reward in the universe
⑦My column: The end of dawn
Intention:
Reader comments
I support Wu CP. After doing his best for his family, country and the world, I hope he can no longer worry and be free and at ease.
The moment Peach Blossom Fairy turned around, I knew they wouldn't be together. If I had to do it again, maybe they would be together.
Damn it, I want to kill the author, it's not satisfactory.
It's a pity, I don't know why.
After reading it, I really had a lot of feelings. I didn't expect that I could stay up late to finish reading the article I randomly clicked on when I was short of books. I almost cried when I read it. I almost thought they were both dead. You, the author, are so heartless. 😭😭😭😭😭It made me cry like crazy and I couldn't stop. 😭Anyway, I wish the young couple 99🎉🎉🎉
Although there is not much meat in the whole text, no! There is no meat at all! (Pointing) But overall I still enjoyed reading it. Each character gives me a very three-dimensional and profound feeling, not a perfect character but vivid enough. It feels like it's been a long time since I remembered the people in it, and I also enjoyed watching the plot. Yunyuan is really crazy and crazy. He is the most arrogant and arrogant one I have ever read, which is enough for me to remember for a long time. Except for the final ending where the protagonist's name is buried, which is a bit unsatisfying, everything else is very enjoyable. But actually, it's understandable. After all, there are times when Yunyuan's actions are so harsh that sometimes I don't feel comfortable with them. Even though a person who was so prosperous and flamboyant in the past ended up being ignored in the end, as a reader, it's really a bit unacceptable and I feel empty (it's already half past two in the night, I probably won't be able to sleep tonight [vomiting blood])
There is also the problem of CP. Alas, when I was watching it, I once suspected that Qi Guang was a CP. After all, his appearance was a bit large. On the other hand, Qin did suffer more. But missing is missing, inappropriate is inappropriate. The moment Qi Guang took the initiative to leave for ten days to untie the contract, the fate was over. As a god who has lived for thousands of years, he is too arrogant. He is arrogant and does not allow himself to be trapped by love. He is not willing to spend a long time in the future. There was a change in the light. Yunyuan briefly pulled him off the altar, but he returned so decisively. He was weighing and fearing it from the beginning to the end. The lifespan gap between immortals and humans was like an unbridgeable gap in his eyes. Just one glance could make him retreat. Their early ambiguous pull was a deliberate illusion from the beginning. After being torn apart by the devil himself, I believe Qi Guang went through painful choices and considerations, but in the end he still chose to leave, right? Even if he tried to make amends later, it would be useless. Qi Guang's ideas are deeply ingrained, which was a tragedy from the beginning. I'm also very happy that the author gave him another chance in the extra chapter, and I hope he will be firm enough this time.
There is also Qin Weilou. I was actually quite surprised, because the author in the early stage created the image of his Bone Lord and the battlefield, and I thought he would be a very cold, cruel and paranoid person. I didn't expect that he would turn out to be a heroic figure with a righteous heart. He is incredibly kind and tolerant, he is truly cold on the outside and warm on the inside, with a sharp mouth and a soft heart. In fact, I think he and Yun Yuan are quite complementary, because Yun Yuan is already tough enough, but he is aloof and arrogant, a top-notch genius, and he has to deal with the things he believes in even if he is determined to do so. What he needs is not Qi Guang's powerful and all-round protection, but Qin Weilou's tolerant and firm support. It can make Yunyuan feel at ease and be a backing rather than a protective umbrella. I think the author's choice is quite good, and I respect it. [Hug] It really takes up too little space, which is pitiful. 🥹
Overall, your writing is very good. It is really the most impressive article I have read in the past few months. And it's an old article from a few years ago. (It's really old. Some of the descriptions and some of the plots made me grin. Hahahahaha) Finally, I am very happy to meet the people and stories in this article. Qin Yun99🎉Also sister Yunyi and Xiao Shitou are also99🎉Han Ye and the princess (I'm sorry that I suddenly can't remember your name. I apologize😱[kiss])99🎉
It's such a shame, but it's satisfying
I read the article a few years ago, and I still like Yunyuan very much.
It's not necessary. It's not easy for the author to write down the story. I really like the protagonist's early character design and early plot. The memory of the story in my mind cannot be deleted, so I'll refund the money to you.
Secondly, I would like to explain that I am posting a long list of comments because I have read all of your works except Superstar. It was by chance that during this event, I discovered that there is actually a book called "Guo Shi Wushuang" that I had no impression of. I did not hesitate to read it because of my trust in the protagonist Su Shuang who had read your work before. If you have also seen my ratings, you will know that I think this story has always been good in the early stages.
But what I personally cannot accept the most is that heroes are unknown, or even harshly criticized and insulted. The protagonist finally bought a hundred years of peace for mankind and can be called a hero. Even if his ruthless methods are not recognized by those in power and he is regarded as a "bad example that cannot be followed", he should be a hero with mixed success and failure in later generations' comments, rather than the part where the author tried his best to portray him as unworthy, and even the plot design directly concealed his existence. This is what I care about most. Also, after following the refreshing rhythm all the way, I had a pleasant reading experience, but at the end, the author I trusted hit my least favorite point, and I felt a sense of disappointment and loss that my trust was betrayed. However, this is my personal psychological self-esteem as a reader, and you, as the author, are a natural disaster.
There is also the matter of deletion of comments. I leave a comment without thinking that readers or authors will respond. After all, it is an old article from a long time ago. I just want to vent my dissatisfaction with being criticized and leave an impression on the readers. I didn't expect that my comments would be deleted one after another. The timing was too coincidental. After being "covered", I was so angry that I didn't think much about anything else. But after reading what you said, I calmed down a bit. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
Ah, the big text is so beautiful! Apart from crying over and over again, breaking the glass, and struggling to death, there really is no problem at all~
Author, you have many idioms, but those idioms of yours are basically inappropriate and will cause grammatical problems when used in written language, and excessive repetition of idioms will bore readers. Also, don't you need to use double quotation marks in dialogues? I don't believe you don't know this common sense. You are just deliberately trying to be different and mysterious. But I just want to tell you that using correct punctuation marks in text is not only a reflection of the author's personal quality, but also respect for the text.
There is no peer in the country, why pay for what you ask for?
I haven't played in 10 years. The heroine is now 20 years old. I remember when the heroine used her body as a lolita to fool a group of teenagers who were about to become adults (｡ò∀ó｡)
The ending is unfinished, the ending is mixed, focusing on the relationship between ruin, anonymity and Su Shuang in the copywriting? The character structure collapsed, and the protagonist changed from plotting the world for ambition to repaying the debts of Gong Yi and Cannon Fodder Gong II. The reason why his friends had nothing to ask for anymore led the protagonist to accept the ending that was hidden by history. The emotional line is incomprehensible, approaching nothing, without any points, setting the royal family.
Suddenly, I felt like I was on the wrong page. The copy said System and BOSS, but are Yinan and System the same person?
Was Jiang driving the car back then? If it is the age, can it be modified? After all, underage driving is not recommended. (A little suggestion)
I support Wu CP. After doing his best for his family, country and the world, I hope he can no longer worry and be free and at ease.
The moment Peach Blossom Fairy turned around, I knew they wouldn't be together. If I had to do it again, maybe they would be together.
Damn it, I want to kill the author, it's not satisfactory.
It's a pity, I don't know why.
After reading it, I really had a lot of feelings. I didn't expect that I could stay up late to finish reading the article I randomly clicked on when I was short of books. I almost cried when I read it. I almost thought they were both dead. You, the author, are so heartless. 😭😭😭😭😭It made me cry like crazy and I couldn't stop. 😭Anyway, I wish the young couple 99🎉🎉🎉 Although there is not much meat in the whole text, no! There is no meat at all! (Pointing) But overall I still enjoyed reading it. Each character gives me a very three-dimensional and profound feeling, not a perfect character but vivid enough. It feels like it's been a long time since I remembered the people in it, and I also enjoyed watching the plot. Yunyuan is really crazy and crazy. He is the most arrogant and arrogant one I have ever read, which is enough for me to remember for a long time. Except for the final ending where the protagonist's name is buried, which is a bit unsatisfying, everything else is very enjoyable. But actually, it's understandable. After all, there are times when Yunyuan's actions are so harsh that sometimes I don't feel comfortable with them. Even though a person who was so prosperous and flamboyant in the past ended up being ignored in the end, as a reader, it's really a bit unacceptable and I feel empty (it's already half past two in the night, I probably won't be able to sleep tonight [vomiting blood]) There is also the problem of CP. Alas, when I was watching it, I once suspected that Qi Guang was a CP. After all, his appearance was a bit large. On the other hand, Qin did suffer more. But missing is missing, inappropriate is inappropriate. The moment Qi Guang took the initiative to leave for ten days to untie the contract, the fate was over. As a god who has lived for thousands of years, he is too arrogant. He is arrogant and does not allow himself to be trapped by love. He is not willing to spend a long time in the future. There was a change in the light. Yunyuan briefly pulled him off the altar, but he returned so decisively. He was weighing and fearing it from the beginning to the end. The lifespan gap between immortals and humans was like an unbridgeable gap in his eyes. Just one glance could make him retreat. Their early ambiguous pull was a deliberate illusion from the beginning. After being torn apart by the devil himself, I believe Qi Guang went through painful choices and considerations, but in the end he still chose to leave, right? Even if he tried to make amends later, it would be useless. Qi Guang's ideas are deeply ingrained, which was a tragedy from the beginning. I'm also very happy that the author gave him another chance in the extra chapter, and I hope he will be firm enough this time. There is also Qin Weilou. I was actually quite surprised, because the author in the early stage created the image of his Bone Lord and the battlefield, and I thought he would be a very cold, cruel and paranoid person. I didn't expect that he would turn out to be a heroic figure with a righteous heart. He is incredibly kind and tolerant, he is truly cold on the outside and warm on the inside, with a sharp mouth and a soft heart. In fact, I think he and Yun Yuan are quite complementary, because Yun Yuan is already tough enough, but he is aloof and arrogant, a top-notch genius, and he has to deal with the things he believes in even if he is determined to do so. What he needs is not Qi Guang's powerful and all-round protection, but Qin Weilou's tolerant and firm support. It can make Yunyuan feel at ease and be a backing rather than a protective umbrella. I think the author's choice is quite good, and I respect it. [Hug] It really takes up too little space, which is pitiful. 🥹 Overall, your writing is very good. It is really the most impressive article I have read in the past few months. And it's an old article from a few years ago. (It's really old. Some of the descriptions and some of the plots made me grin. Hahahahaha) Finally, I am very happy to meet the people and stories in this article. Qin Yun99🎉Also sister Yunyi and Xiao Shitou are also99🎉Han Ye and the princess (I'm sorry that I suddenly can't remember your name. I apologize😱[kiss])99🎉
It's such a shame, but it's satisfying
I read the article a few years ago, and I still like Yunyuan very much.
It's not necessary. It's not easy for the author to write down the story. I really like the protagonist's early character design and early plot. The memory of the story in my mind cannot be deleted, so I'll refund the money to you. Secondly, I would like to explain that I am posting a long list of comments because I have read all of your works except Superstar. It was by chance that during this event, I discovered that there is actually a book called "Guo Shi Wushuang" that I had no impression of. I did not hesitate to read it because of my trust in the protagonist Su Shuang who had read your work before. If you have also seen my ratings, you will know that I think this story has always been good in the early stages. But what I personally cannot accept the most is that heroes are unknown, or even harshly criticized and insulted. The protagonist finally bought a hundred years of peace for mankind and can be called a hero. Even if his ruthless methods are not recognized by those in power and he is regarded as a "bad example that cannot be followed", he should be a hero with mixed success and failure in later generations' comments, rather than the part where the author tried his best to portray him as unworthy, and even the plot design directly concealed his existence. This is what I care about most. Also, after following the refreshing rhythm all the way, I had a pleasant reading experience, but at the end, the author I trusted hit my least favorite point, and I felt a sense of disappointment and loss that my trust was betrayed. However, this is my personal psychological self-esteem as a reader, and you, as the author, are a natural disaster. There is also the matter of deletion of comments. I leave a comment without thinking that readers or authors will respond. After all, it is an old article from a long time ago. I just want to vent my dissatisfaction with being criticized and leave an impression on the readers. I didn't expect that my comments would be deleted one after another. The timing was too coincidental. After being "covered", I was so angry that I didn't think much about anything else. But after reading what you said, I calmed down a bit. Sorry for the misunderstanding.
Ah, the big text is so beautiful! Apart from crying over and over again, breaking the glass, and struggling to death, there really is no problem at all~
Author, you have many idioms, but those idioms of yours are basically inappropriate and will cause grammatical problems when used in written language, and excessive repetition of idioms will bore readers. Also, don't you need to use double quotation marks in dialogues? I don't believe you don't know this common sense. You are just deliberately trying to be different and mysterious. But I just want to tell you that using correct punctuation marks in text is not only a reflection of the author's personal quality, but also respect for the text.
There is no peer in the country, why pay for what you ask for?
I haven't played in 10 years. The heroine is now 20 years old. I remember when the heroine used her body as a lolita to fool a group of teenagers who were about to become adults (｡ò∀ó｡)
The ending is unfinished, the ending is mixed, focusing on the relationship between ruin, anonymity and Su Shuang in the copywriting? The character structure collapsed, and the protagonist changed from plotting the world for ambition to repaying the debts of Gong Yi and Cannon Fodder Gong II. The reason why his friends had nothing to ask for anymore led the protagonist to accept the ending that was hidden by history. The emotional line is incomprehensible, approaching nothing, without any points, setting the royal family.
Suddenly, I felt like I was on the wrong page. The copy said System and BOSS, but are Yinan and System the same person?
Was Jiang driving the car back then? If it is the age, can it be modified? After all, underage driving is not recommended. (A little suggestion)