We are like two concentric circles. Although our hearts are together, there is always a constant distance between us. That is a long river that can never be crossed.
Digging a new hole
"Butterfly Wings"
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如此了吗，李然以后与诸葛槿的日常生活
The original long comment was accidentally deleted by the author. After several days of tossing, I finally found it and posted it again to commemorate it with the author.
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How could I bear to see a good article without any comments, but very few review points? If I hadn't been reading a book in recent days, and suddenly fell in love with Fuxiao, I searched for articles in Jinjiang, and there were very few completed articles. Reading the copy was also deserted, how could I finally start reading this article reluctantly? However, speaking of the articles inherited from this article, the writing style is indeed a bit young, and the length is short and unsatisfactory, which also indirectly affected my enthusiasm for reading.
But as soon as I entered the length of the article, I realized that it was completely wrong. It was completely different from some articles that were ranked at the top of major lists. There was a strange idea at the beginning. After reading part of it, I felt bored and couldn't read it again and again. I finally closed it with regret and lamented that another article with no reputation was a waste of my expectations and emotions. There was no surprise in this article at first, but it soon turned into Yang Xiao's romantic youth, which made me, a layman who wants to read lingering romances, very unhappy.
But if you look closely, you will see that the love stories are numerous but not complicated. There is no facial makeup or stereotypes, but there are women with their own beauty. They are all beautiful, but none of them are loved by everyone, but they each have their own unique style. They are approachable and very attractive. Of course. Yang Xiaomei is an exquisite daughter, who is infinitely cuter than Huang Rong. (I always hate the writing written by male authors. Good women are either innocent and ignorant of the world, or they are unruly and aggressive. Even Jin Da Xia is not very redeemable. For this reason, I love the author's writing style)
The supporting actor only portrays Yi He Taichu, but with only a few strokes and a few details, he captures the essence of the story without describing his actions, and more successfully makes the readers spontaneously think of Yang Xiaomei as a perfect match. Against the background of the protagonist and the beautiful couple, he is not inferior, but has a different kind of love.
After talking about the male and female supporting roles eloquently, when it comes to the protagonist, I feel a little tongue-tied, just like a good work is difficult to separate and dissect and point out what is good and what is bad. It is as harmonious and smooth as flowing clouds. I can only imitate it and get its charm. Pointing and pointing will kill the scenery. I can only sort out some feelings from my intermittent and careless reading psychology to describe it (it is only related to my recent state of mind, so even though it is a good article, I still cannot concentrate on it)
In a word, in the author's writing, it can be said that they are already the immortal and heroic couple that I can imagine and have the greatest admiration and expectation for. I have always hated and highly praised Guo and Huang. They were originally a clever wife who stayed with her humble husband until she was born. She restrained her temper because of a heartbeat when she was young. She felt wronged and wronged. My father, who is naturally clever in marriage, has nowhere to complain and no one understands him. If he inadvertently hinders his husband's benevolence and righteousness, he still has to endure the rude anger. After decades of transformation from a born spiritual creature to a "good wife and mother who best meets the requirements of feudal ethics", how much tiredness is unknown?
Yang and Long were the two people I praised the most. One was ignorant of the world, the other was cynical, and they were a perfect match. But now that I think about it, they have been separated more than each other since they fell in love. It is said that it is easy to fall in love but difficult to get along. Even though Yang Guo has experienced everything in the world and is willing to live a mediocre life, how can he understand each other and understand the little dragon girl with his extraordinary talents and countless wisdom? He can only settle down to the word "peace of mind". After all, he is one step ahead of Guo Huangsheng.
The author's Fu Xiao and Fu Xiao are far beyond the realm of the first two. Yang Xiao inherits a bit of Yang Guo's talent and arrogance, but is no longer just a knight-errant, but has a bit more worldly responsibility (of course he is not a perfect man, and the author also clearly depicts this). How talented he is depends on the author's detailed description. I will only say that I love Yang's emotional attitude. He is frank and does not cover up, force or deceive, but he is by no means a heartless person. He is passionate, he has the capital of affection, but he clearly knows what he wants, what he can and cannot have, and his sense of proportion and responsibility are very clearly controlled. Although it is not worth learning, at least it makes him blameless. At the same time, he always appreciates and respects beautiful women. Even when he meets true love and wants to force his lover to stay, he does not use force in the end, and he always respects the other person's will in marriage.
As for Xiaofu, I still felt a little inferior at first, but the more I went on, the more I realized what a rare woman she was, fresh and clear, full of wisdom and tenderness (I admire Yang Xiao's intuition, how could she be so confused that she instantly recognized someone as a good woman after spending hundreds of flowers)? The feeling of the water being soft yet strong, the scabbard being dull and the sword being made is so subtle that it is difficult to describe in detail. It permeates between the lines. The wisdom in it is worth learning for women in marriage~~ (a bit off topic~)
What is even more rare is that the author does not use other settings (such as time travel) to forcefully change the character's personality. Of course, this also depends on the fact that the original work of Jin Daxia does not have much writing and therefore has few restrictions. Instead, he slowly digs out the deep-seated character and makes the character full. The whole story is clearly written about things outside of the original work, but it is believable to read, and the changes to the original ending are not abrupt. In addition, the plots outside the original work can be read together with the original work, as a prequel and spin-off. The writing is also sophisticated and skillful, with a hint of Dream of Red Mansions.
One last shout out~~ I really like the sweet scenes of the two getting along with each other in the later part of the article!!! It is sweet but not greasy. It does not feel like the lowering of IQ in ordinary articles. Instead, it has an extra fresh air, which is worthy of my long expectation in the previous article~~~ The sentiment in it suggests that men and women in love can learn a thing or two~~ (again~)
Okay, originally I just wanted to write a review to express my grievances for the author, but it turned out to be a long review, which took me almost an afternoon, which is rare for a lazy person like me. I usually don't read VIP, and I don't log in. It is a kind of fate to happen to see such a wonderful and complete article without VIP and on my favorite subject. Let's look at the author again. The writing style is calm and beautiful, and the large amount of literary and historical knowledge conveyed in the text makes people feel ashamed of the author's diligence. Every comment must be answered, but there is a sense of arrogance and self-admiration in it, so I am willing to contribute and send this long review as a gift, hoping to attract the attention of more tasteful readers. I also look forward to the author's new work in the near future, so don't waste such talent~~
Author's reply:
The author answers:
This long review was first published on February 15. The author has never meant to be cold-hearted, but when he saw the long review, he was also very excited. I replied three times, but the page looked ugly after refreshing. As evidenced by http://www. Jjwxc. Net/comment. Php? Commentid=51622&novelid=261419, I wanted to delete the redundancy. I don't want my hands to shake, and the reader's hard work will be wiped out in an instant.
In addition to being shocked, I sincerely apologized and went to the Jinjiang Original Commentary and Bishuijiangting Editions to ask if it could be restored. Netizens all replied that they couldn't think of it. The author learned that he was filled with grief and anger. The author feels extremely regretful, but fortunately, his memory of words is still good. He wrote the article in such a way that the general idea can be given to the readers. He tried his best to make up for it. Even though it cannot replace the original article, he hopes it can alleviate the frustration a little bit.
Here it is.
I remember that Jun said: When I look at Yitian again, I feel most happy and happy, so I went to Jinjiang to search for articles. It may be unfinished, it may be VIP, or it may be too shocking. So in the deserted situation, I had no choice but to look through Yu's humble works by chance. The story starts off mediocre and then turns to the story of Yang Xiaozhi's youth. I was planning to enjoy the romance novels, but it was not like this. I was disappointed, and as I read it patiently and carefully, I gained more and more interest.
Looking at the female partners, not all of them have beautiful faces, but they each have their own style and look amiable. The girl I love the most is Yunqing. She is not as weak or unruly and willful as described by the male author, but she has something cute and moving about her. The only male supporting actor, He Wenchu, is a bit different and does not appear much, but with a few details, readers will feel that this man is the younger sister's original partner. Not inferior to the protagonist.
The male and female protagonists are like flowing clouds and flowing water, and the descriptions are precise. Yang Xiao is a great talent and has strong moral integrity, but he also has weaknesses. What I love most is that I don't deceive or lie about love, I know clearly where the boundaries are. Respect and care for women and never force them. The same is true for marriage.
Xiao Fu seemed mediocre at first, but gradually became interested in her. Finally, she felt tender as water and clear in wisdom. Sigh, how can Yang Xiao be able to live a lifetime with one glance? His wisdom in choosing people is rare in the world.
When you read Jin Yong, you don't like Guo Huang. You only think that Rong'er sacrificed the most for a clever woman and a clumsy husband. Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu broke through the worldly views and were aloof, so they were quite suitable. It's just that they get together less and stay apart more, and their personalities don't match each other. They just want peace of mind. But Yu Wenzhong's love for Yang Ji is an ideal in the world. The love paragraph is warm and pleasant, sweet but not greasy, and does not feel mentally retarded. My favorite. ——Netizen Yu Yi once said: The feeling of liking Mr. Yang and Ji... The feeling of a couple, well, I can't describe it. I just touched each other lightly, so I won't say more, but I believe you also know what I want to say, haha. I really hope to see more of their things, no matter the details. Even if you think it is too sweet, we still want it very much, haha. I agree with you.
As for the plot, Junzan did not use time travel, but only used Jin Yong to leave blank spaces. The character's personality has not changed, and it adheres to the original work. Even though the ending has been changed, it is not abrupt and can be used as a prequel.
In addition, Jun commented after the praise that the author had good intentions and was proud of himself when replying. Encouragement and anticipation.
Finally, the readers understand and feel at ease. Suddenly I saw a "MORE" prompt in the long comment column on the homepage. I looked through the page and saw that the long comment was deleted. I clicked the mouse... MY GOD! There is actually one! Putting it on in a hurry will pay off the painstaking efforts. The connection between literary friends and the Internet is amazing!
Author's reply:
It is the "reader" who learns this and is filled with grief and anger.
Wrong writing.
如此了吗，李然以后与诸葛槿的日常生活
The original long comment was accidentally deleted by the author. After several days of tossing, I finally found it and posted it again to commemorate it with the author. ------------------ How could I bear to see a good article without any comments, but very few review points? If I hadn't been reading a book in recent days, and suddenly fell in love with Fuxiao, I searched for articles in Jinjiang, and there were very few completed articles. Reading the copy was also deserted, how could I finally start reading this article reluctantly? However, speaking of the articles inherited from this article, the writing style is indeed a bit young, and the length is short and unsatisfactory, which also indirectly affected my enthusiasm for reading. But as soon as I entered the length of the article, I realized that it was completely wrong. It was completely different from some articles that were ranked at the top of major lists. There was a strange idea at the beginning. After reading part of it, I felt bored and couldn't read it again and again. I finally closed it with regret and lamented that another article with no reputation was a waste of my expectations and emotions. There was no surprise in this article at first, but it soon turned into Yang Xiao's romantic youth, which made me, a layman who wants to read lingering romances, very unhappy. But if you look closely, you will see that the love stories are numerous but not complicated. There is no facial makeup or stereotypes, but there are women with their own beauty. They are all beautiful, but none of them are loved by everyone, but they each have their own unique style. They are approachable and very attractive. Of course. Yang Xiaomei is an exquisite daughter, who is infinitely cuter than Huang Rong. (I always hate the writing written by male authors. Good women are either innocent and ignorant of the world, or they are unruly and aggressive. Even Jin Da Xia is not very redeemable. For this reason, I love the author's writing style) The supporting actor only portrays Yi He Taichu, but with only a few strokes and a few details, he captures the essence of the story without describing his actions, and more successfully makes the readers spontaneously think of Yang Xiaomei as a perfect match. Against the background of the protagonist and the beautiful couple, he is not inferior, but has a different kind of love. After talking about the male and female supporting roles eloquently, when it comes to the protagonist, I feel a little tongue-tied, just like a good work is difficult to separate and dissect and point out what is good and what is bad. It is as harmonious and smooth as flowing clouds. I can only imitate it and get its charm. Pointing and pointing will kill the scenery. I can only sort out some feelings from my intermittent and careless reading psychology to describe it (it is only related to my recent state of mind, so even though it is a good article, I still cannot concentrate on it) In a word, in the author's writing, it can be said that they are already the immortal and heroic couple that I can imagine and have the greatest admiration and expectation for. I have always hated and highly praised Guo and Huang. They were originally a clever wife who stayed with her humble husband until she was born. She restrained her temper because of a heartbeat when she was young. She felt wronged and wronged. My father, who is naturally clever in marriage, has nowhere to complain and no one understands him. If he inadvertently hinders his husband's benevolence and righteousness, he still has to endure the rude anger. After decades of transformation from a born spiritual creature to a "good wife and mother who best meets the requirements of feudal ethics", how much tiredness is unknown? Yang and Long were the two people I praised the most. One was ignorant of the world, the other was cynical, and they were a perfect match. But now that I think about it, they have been separated more than each other since they fell in love. It is said that it is easy to fall in love but difficult to get along. Even though Yang Guo has experienced everything in the world and is willing to live a mediocre life, how can he understand each other and understand the little dragon girl with his extraordinary talents and countless wisdom? He can only settle down to the word "peace of mind". After all, he is one step ahead of Guo Huangsheng. The author's Fu Xiao and Fu Xiao are far beyond the realm of the first two. Yang Xiao inherits a bit of Yang Guo's talent and arrogance, but is no longer just a knight-errant, but has a bit more worldly responsibility (of course he is not a perfect man, and the author also clearly depicts this). How talented he is depends on the author's detailed description. I will only say that I love Yang's emotional attitude. He is frank and does not cover up, force or deceive, but he is by no means a heartless person. He is passionate, he has the capital of affection, but he clearly knows what he wants, what he can and cannot have, and his sense of proportion and responsibility are very clearly controlled. Although it is not worth learning, at least it makes him blameless. At the same time, he always appreciates and respects beautiful women. Even when he meets true love and wants to force his lover to stay, he does not use force in the end, and he always respects the other person's will in marriage. As for Xiaofu, I still felt a little inferior at first, but the more I went on, the more I realized what a rare woman she was, fresh and clear, full of wisdom and tenderness (I admire Yang Xiao's intuition, how could she be so confused that she instantly recognized someone as a good woman after spending hundreds of flowers)? The feeling of the water being soft yet strong, the scabbard being dull and the sword being made is so subtle that it is difficult to describe in detail. It permeates between the lines. The wisdom in it is worth learning for women in marriage~~ (a bit off topic~) What is even more rare is that the author does not use other settings (such as time travel) to forcefully change the character's personality. Of course, this also depends on the fact that the original work of Jin Daxia does not have much writing and therefore has few restrictions. Instead, he slowly digs out the deep-seated character and makes the character full. The whole story is clearly written about things outside of the original work, but it is believable to read, and the changes to the original ending are not abrupt. In addition, the plots outside the original work can be read together with the original work, as a prequel and spin-off. The writing is also sophisticated and skillful, with a hint of Dream of Red Mansions. One last shout out~~ I really like the sweet scenes of the two getting along with each other in the later part of the article!!! It is sweet but not greasy. It does not feel like the lowering of IQ in ordinary articles. Instead, it has an extra fresh air, which is worthy of my long expectation in the previous article~~~ The sentiment in it suggests that men and women in love can learn a thing or two~~ (again~) Okay, originally I just wanted to write a review to express my grievances for the author, but it turned out to be a long review, which took me almost an afternoon, which is rare for a lazy person like me. I usually don't read VIP, and I don't log in. It is a kind of fate to happen to see such a wonderful and complete article without VIP and on my favorite subject. Let's look at the author again. The writing style is calm and beautiful, and the large amount of literary and historical knowledge conveyed in the text makes people feel ashamed of the author's diligence. Every comment must be answered, but there is a sense of arrogance and self-admiration in it, so I am willing to contribute and send this long review as a gift, hoping to attract the attention of more tasteful readers. I also look forward to the author's new work in the near future, so don't waste such talent~~ Author's reply: The author answers: This long review was first published on February 15. The author has never meant to be cold-hearted, but when he saw the long review, he was also very excited. I replied three times, but the page looked ugly after refreshing. As evidenced by http://www. Jjwxc. Net/comment. Php? Commentid=51622&novelid=261419, I wanted to delete the redundancy. I don't want my hands to shake, and the reader's hard work will be wiped out in an instant. In addition to being shocked, I sincerely apologized and went to the Jinjiang Original Commentary and Bishuijiangting Editions to ask if it could be restored. Netizens all replied that they couldn't think of it. The author learned that he was filled with grief and anger. The author feels extremely regretful, but fortunately, his memory of words is still good. He wrote the article in such a way that the general idea can be given to the readers. He tried his best to make up for it. Even though it cannot replace the original article, he hopes it can alleviate the frustration a little bit. Here it is. I remember that Jun said: When I look at Yitian again, I feel most happy and happy, so I went to Jinjiang to search for articles. It may be unfinished, it may be VIP, or it may be too shocking. So in the deserted situation, I had no choice but to look through Yu's humble works by chance. The story starts off mediocre and then turns to the story of Yang Xiaozhi's youth. I was planning to enjoy the romance novels, but it was not like this. I was disappointed, and as I read it patiently and carefully, I gained more and more interest. Looking at the female partners, not all of them have beautiful faces, but they each have their own style and look amiable. The girl I love the most is Yunqing. She is not as weak or unruly and willful as described by the male author, but she has something cute and moving about her. The only male supporting actor, He Wenchu, is a bit different and does not appear much, but with a few details, readers will feel that this man is the younger sister's original partner. Not inferior to the protagonist. The male and female protagonists are like flowing clouds and flowing water, and the descriptions are precise. Yang Xiao is a great talent and has strong moral integrity, but he also has weaknesses. What I love most is that I don't deceive or lie about love, I know clearly where the boundaries are. Respect and care for women and never force them. The same is true for marriage. Xiao Fu seemed mediocre at first, but gradually became interested in her. Finally, she felt tender as water and clear in wisdom. Sigh, how can Yang Xiao be able to live a lifetime with one glance? His wisdom in choosing people is rare in the world. When you read Jin Yong, you don't like Guo Huang. You only think that Rong'er sacrificed the most for a clever woman and a clumsy husband. Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu broke through the worldly views and were aloof, so they were quite suitable. It's just that they get together less and stay apart more, and their personalities don't match each other. They just want peace of mind. But Yu Wenzhong's love for Yang Ji is an ideal in the world. The love paragraph is warm and pleasant, sweet but not greasy, and does not feel mentally retarded. My favorite. ——Netizen Yu Yi once said: The feeling of liking Mr. Yang and Ji... The feeling of a couple, well, I can't describe it. I just touched each other lightly, so I won't say more, but I believe you also know what I want to say, haha. I really hope to see more of their things, no matter the details. Even if you think it is too sweet, we still want it very much, haha. I agree with you. As for the plot, Junzan did not use time travel, but only used Jin Yong to leave blank spaces. The character's personality has not changed, and it adheres to the original work. Even though the ending has been changed, it is not abrupt and can be used as a prequel. In addition, Jun commented after the praise that the author had good intentions and was proud of himself when replying. Encouragement and anticipation. Finally, the readers understand and feel at ease. Suddenly I saw a "MORE" prompt in the long comment column on the homepage. I looked through the page and saw that the long comment was deleted. I clicked the mouse... MY GOD! There is actually one! Putting it on in a hurry will pay off the painstaking efforts. The connection between literary friends and the Internet is amazing! Author's reply: It is the "reader" who learns this and is filled with grief and anger. Wrong writing.
Well, I hope you write it down
Why didn't Su Xian let go of Linfeng? Why bother