This World Is Not Peaceful [Comprehensive]

This book is quite old, feel free to write a review. Anyway, the author forgot his password (?) You can tell that you are very diligent. You don't need to read other books. You can see it just by reading this one. However, just being diligent in writing a book cannot make it a good book. I haven't read the whole book (it's so long that I don't believe anyone has actually read it all!) Because it's too long. Just reading the table of contents makes people lose their worldly desires. It would be better if the storyline is reduced appropriately. The novel is like an anime, with branches interspersed around the main plot to occasionally relax in daily life. If there are too many branches, it will be difficult to fill in the pit later. I feel that you really haven't finished telling a lot. Although the open ending that allows readers to let go of their imagination is good, your ending did not make me feel that it was an open ending. It felt like it was unfinished. Writing is the key... Another issue is perspective. The transition from third person to first person is awkward, and it reads like a student reading, or like the prompter in the narrator's hand. I tried my best to be emotionally involved, but I still felt as helpless as a narrator in a stage play. Isn't there a female protagonist's perspective? Why is the heroine's appearance rate so low? The heroine may not appear in every chapter but Conan will. It makes people think that the hero of this book is Conan and the heroine Xiaolan is. Another one is the use of punctuation marks. When I read the novel, I really just guessed whether it was a verbal description or a psychological description. If I didn't pay attention, I wouldn't know what it was saying. Again, it sounds like a narration, but there really is no dialogue, okay? Also, you really don't have to use a period in every sentence. There is also sorting. Sentences can be classified. Some completely unrelated sentences will look difficult to understand and confusing when put together. This arrangement is a rectangle on one side, which makes your eyes hurt when you look at it. There must be a transition between chapters, just like when you are dating a partner, you cannot get married and have children after the first meeting, right? When cases change, you can't just start the next one. Continuity is quite important. Less important: Another thing is that having a good introduction is a good way to increase readers. Most people (such as me) decide whether to read a novel based on reading the introduction. What you wrote feels weird, but I don't know where it is. In general, what is said above does not matter. After all, what kind of bicycle is needed to generate electricity for love? This article is recommended for Conan and people who are really short of reading. The female protagonist's appearance rate is so hard to describe that you can basically think of Conan as the protagonist. What you wrote is really okay. I can't speak clearly, so I don't know if there is any malice in what I said, but you may not be able to see my long review. I quite like the company, and some of the pre-collection ideas are quite interesting. By the way, do you still remember the password?

On a whim, I looked through my previous comments and found that in 2017, this article still had more than 700 chapters, but now it has more than 1,000 chapters, and it is completed.

It's a really good fanfic T^T There is an ideal world inside, a group of very gentle people, and a very healing and warm feeling! ! There may be a little ups and downs along the way, but it makes me more aware of the bonds and emotions between Huali and other people, making everyone feel alive in my mind. I originally wanted to read it as a bedtime story, but it turned out that it was almost dawn and it was really good. Let's all watch it together. Woohoo.

I didn't let it go, I thought the author would write a different ending, but this ending is probably the best. The black organization really can't let it go. I really finished reading it! This is the longest article I have read in a while. In fact, I still want to read a lot of extras, but I feel like I haven't finished talking about them, such as who is the other Kudo, what should Conan do, how the "love triangle" between them will develop, and whether their son from the parallel world has returned, and who is the person in the last chapter and the person in the other world. Also, Kaito and Sakutsu's daily life after being together, etc. There are so many, I feel like most of them are unfinished and left with suspense. Let the reader imagine. Finally, if you like Conan, you can give it a try, even though the protagonists are Kaito and Sakuzuki. But if you read it completely, you will find that Conan should be the protagonist. After all, the protagonist may not be present in every chapter, but Conan is really present in almost every chapter. And I think the author is writing it in the form of an anime. There may be a case in several chapters, and after the case is over, it will go directly to the next one. There is not much transition, which may seem a bit uncomfortable, but okay, just get used to it. Oh, of course, it may be that I didn't see the transition myself, haha. Ah, I accidentally wrote a long review. From a personal perspective, this article is okay. You can take a look. But the most important thing is to look at personal taste, don't force yourself to not like the article~ Okay, okay, it's really over. Then watch Spreading Flowers.

It's the first time I've seen an article of this size, and I'm a little scared.

Madam, feel free to write another article [crying] [crying] [crying]

我一晚上被虐的死去活来，不是真正意义上的虐，就是不知道为啥就这么扎我心窝。最后魔千秋的那个我是真的爱了，就快爱的抑郁了?太太，这是我最近看到的最合我心的，感谢创作

On a whim, I looked through my previous comments and found that in 2017, this article still had more than 700 chapters, but now it has more than 1,000 chapters, and it is completed.

I went straight to the last chapter. To be honest, I admire the author very much. The fan wrote so many words. But, do you know why it doesn't become popular? That's because I made a fatal flaw, writing style, writing style is the key...

I can't stand it. I like it so much??

This Xiaoxue is also cute [star eyes][star eyes][star eyes]. Nutrient solution is detected, please turn on the "Crazy Coding" mode!

I like Gin, and I hope I can give him a good ending. My heart beats back and forth as Conan discovers the clues of the black organization in the plot. I am terrified. I am afraid that Conan, a righteous person, will hurt Gin. I don't care what happens to the black organization. I just like Gin.

I really hope all the authors in Jinjiang are like you...

Looking forward to the update! I really like this setting! Please don't be fooled! Ask me how deeply I love you, the nutrient solution represents my heart~

Cat ah ah ah [star eyes]

Seeing this number of chapters, I thought it was time to jump in. Maybe reading these 1,000 chapters is less than one-third of the author's goal. . .

[Orange Candy] I got it. Why is it so short! [Changed][changed][changed]

[Cat Claw] Nutrient Solution +1! Great update also +1!

Come on↖(^ω^)↗ You are so amazing that you have been writing for so long

The author is so great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Lin Xiaoyi?

Woooooooooooooooooh What a beautiful closed loop! The timeline that was very confusing at the beginning has been sorted out bit by bit. It's great that they are so good! Woooooooo! ! ! ! The author's writing is also very good. I lay on the bed and burst into tears. The last dozen or so chapters of the text were really depressing. But fortunately, everyone has their own story in the end (Cao Junning, who is so upset that he forgot Jiang Ding's time, likes him so much, ugh) No gifts will be accepted for today's update, only nutrient solution will be accepted as gifts!

Please update

Ouch

Char? ? ? ?

Love is always the same across thousands of rivers and mountains, can you give me an extra bottle? OK!

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, come on 2333

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it

Came here from Little Monk, so happy to tie it

If you don't update the article, how can I buy the article? If I don't buy the article, how can I get the nutrient solution? Tell me what to do!