Because it is a completely first-person description, the pace may be too fast. However, I can guarantee the integrity of the story, so if you are interested, please come and take a look.
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I am a rabbit, a weak rabbit spirit. I live alone carefully, hoping that I can live longer. But God allowed me to meet a wolf. He is my natural enemy and can eat me at any time with his big mouth! However, as time passed slowly, I fell in love with him. I don't know if I chose happiness, but I know that I longed for the warmth in his arms.
The first part has been completed and very little has been written, but at least the story is fairly complete. To be honest, the next step has not yet been decided. I will take a break and take a look. I'm not sure whether I should continue to use the first person in the second part. I can't explain a lot of things in the first person. Anyway, I will think about it carefully... Drift away...
I have started writing the second part. Although it has been so long, I am trying to find the feeling from before.
This chapter is about Yanying's story. I'll leave aside the rabbit thing for now. I'll start writing it from Yanying's childhood. I hope everyone will support it.