Summary of the first part:
Because of an accident, Ye Yunjin's consciousness was left in the holographic Swordsman game world.
After the battle of Kunlun, although she was famous all over the world and was avenged, she still could not change the fact that she was behind bars.
It's pitiful that Nai He, who was full of joy and thought he had achieved the right result of cultivation, found out within two days of his happiness that the Ji Sa Ya Zi had run away and disappeared without a trace, leaving not a single hair on his head.
Naihe is very hurt, ah ugh——
The story of the second part takes place half a year after Ye Yunjin disappeared. It doesn't matter if you jump directly to the second part. Everyone has a good time (づ￣ 3￣)づ
Please accept and comment.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~. Friendly reminder from the author.~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Holographic game settings:
1. Real scanning of all players. The gender of transvestites and monsters will not be corrected. If the transvestites can only continue to wear women's clothes, the system will provide friendly silicone fake breasts and breast wraps as gifts;
2. Skill proficiency does not require the use of Nayuan Dan, it depends entirely on practice. Two additional skill columns have been added: martial arts and mental skills. Obtaining cheats depends entirely on face.
The address of the first part: Sword Three: Chicken and Dog Jump I
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Reader comments
Stepmother! (｀Δ′)!
I thought it was candy, but ended up eating a big mouthful of broken glass! I still can't bear to vomit! ! !
Watch your resentment towards yellow chickens through the screen
We're going to meet, I'm going. Why do I always come across books stuck in key places?
Xiaolan, are you too happy not to update?
The soul is so weak! ! ! You don't even update! ! ! Not even updated! ! ! ! Grab your neck and shake it like crazy!
Can I wear the 1240 graduation pvp outfit and beat Xintinghou Naihe? I am very angry and annoyed and want to beat him. Hey, when will it become sweet again... It's not a good feeling... Our Yunjin is so good... Sigh (•̥́ˍ•̀ू)
Wow, what a pervert! Only the heroine can hold him...
I don't know what to say when I open a comment. I hope I can continue writing. I've been waiting for so long QAQ
It's been two years since my last comment, but it's still connected. Can I wait for an update? Woohoo
First of all, the author's IQ is two steps higher than the one below (1 step is 20), and the writing style is even worse than the one below. [
Therefore, writing this review is a bit scary...
Dressed as a concubine in reserve, to be honest, this is the first time I've seen it? !
The subject matter is very novel, please give it a thumbs up.
Looking further down, the author's writing style has a very light feel. It is not too heavy-duty or too literary, which will make readers like this look crooked. I think it is worthy of praise in ancient costumes where literary style is prevalent.
But I would like to make a small suggestion: the protagonist's beauty, national beauty, etc., Should be described less often... [Although it is already very few... But I personally... Can't stand this hexagram...
The author has detailed research and uses cases to explain the heroine's current difficult situation from the side.
The overt and secret fighting in "The Romantic Woman" (don't pay attention to the wording of the illiterates) is very novel at first glance.
As for the popular counterattack drama of first suppressing and then ascending, this kind of subject matter should have a large audience.
However, based on my experience of reading countless long novels, I think the author's ability to control the plot progression may not be suitable for a long novel, at least for now. Some things are very abrupt. For example, when I entered Jingyuan, I was hit by a bunch of fresh names, which made it a bit difficult for a reader like me with an IQ of less than 80 to read...
Then there is the appearance of the male character (the male protagonist and the male partner), which is also very abrupt, and the relationship with the female protagonist is even more abrupt, it is just a passing mention and suddenly a call comes.
The writing description is simple and concise (that's how you describe it), but it doesn't mean that the plot advancement needs to be concise. If this article ends within 500,000, forget it. If it ends with one million, well... If this is done, it will make people worry that the train is going too fast and there are not enough rails.
Another thing that must be resisted is that in terms of counterattack stories, the attitude shown by the heroine, or in other words, the scene is very depressing, but the actor is too calm. That is to say, the author is still not bloody enough. He knows in his heart that the heroine should be miserable at this time, but he can't help but write the heroine as an epiphyllum blooming in the corner. Anyone who accidentally sees her will fall in love with her and pity her.
Well, I am so troubled to write a long review, I am also drunk. How about reorganizing the plot? Research what kind of plot has a pee pad and describe it in detail; what kind of plot will readers scroll down and skip over?
I tried to describe the entire plot, but in the end the plot lost its priority, making the characters look rather pale...
Write what can highlight a certain character, and mention what just advances the plot. [Please do not mention the important interactions between the male and female protagonists in one stroke.
The final point is: I have written the review so sincerely, please give me some of your writing skills
Stepmother! (｀Δ′)!
I thought it was candy, but ended up eating a big mouthful of broken glass! I still can't bear to vomit! ! !
Watch your resentment towards yellow chickens through the screen
Missing persons return! Sprinkle flowers(❀ฺ′∀`❀ฺ)ﾉ
We're going to meet, I'm going. Why do I always come across books stuck in key places?
Xiaolan, are you too happy not to update?
The soul is so weak! ! ! You don't even update! ! ! Not even updated! ! ! ! Grab your neck and shake it like crazy!
Can I wear the 1240 graduation pvp outfit and beat Xintinghou Naihe? I am very angry and annoyed and want to beat him. Hey, when will it become sweet again... It's not a good feeling... Our Yunjin is so good... Sigh (•̥́ˍ•̀ू)
Wow, what a pervert! Only the heroine can hold him...
I don't know what to say when I open a comment. I hope I can continue writing. I've been waiting for so long QAQ
It's been two years since my last comment, but it's still connected. Can I wait for an update? Woohoo
First of all, the author's IQ is two steps higher than the one below (1 step is 20), and the writing style is even worse than the one below. [ Therefore, writing this review is a bit scary... Dressed as a concubine in reserve, to be honest, this is the first time I've seen it? ! The subject matter is very novel, please give it a thumbs up. Looking further down, the author's writing style has a very light feel. It is not too heavy-duty or too literary, which will make readers like this look crooked. I think it is worthy of praise in ancient costumes where literary style is prevalent. But I would like to make a small suggestion: the protagonist's beauty, national beauty, etc., Should be described less often... [Although it is already very few... But I personally... Can't stand this hexagram... The author has detailed research and uses cases to explain the heroine's current difficult situation from the side. The overt and secret fighting in "The Romantic Woman" (don't pay attention to the wording of the illiterates) is very novel at first glance. As for the popular counterattack drama of first suppressing and then ascending, this kind of subject matter should have a large audience. However, based on my experience of reading countless long novels, I think the author's ability to control the plot progression may not be suitable for a long novel, at least for now. Some things are very abrupt. For example, when I entered Jingyuan, I was hit by a bunch of fresh names, which made it a bit difficult for a reader like me with an IQ of less than 80 to read... Then there is the appearance of the male character (the male protagonist and the male partner), which is also very abrupt, and the relationship with the female protagonist is even more abrupt, it is just a passing mention and suddenly a call comes. The writing description is simple and concise (that's how you describe it), but it doesn't mean that the plot advancement needs to be concise. If this article ends within 500,000, forget it. If it ends with one million, well... If this is done, it will make people worry that the train is going too fast and there are not enough rails. Another thing that must be resisted is that in terms of counterattack stories, the attitude shown by the heroine, or in other words, the scene is very depressing, but the actor is too calm. That is to say, the author is still not bloody enough. He knows in his heart that the heroine should be miserable at this time, but he can't help but write the heroine as an epiphyllum blooming in the corner. Anyone who accidentally sees her will fall in love with her and pity her. Well, I am so troubled to write a long review, I am also drunk. How about reorganizing the plot? Research what kind of plot has a pee pad and describe it in detail; what kind of plot will readers scroll down and skip over? I tried to describe the entire plot, but in the end the plot lost its priority, making the characters look rather pale... Write what can highlight a certain character, and mention what just advances the plot. [Please do not mention the important interactions between the male and female protagonists in one stroke. The final point is: I have written the review so sincerely, please give me some of your writing skills
Please update ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
This is my blushing puberty period.