I originally wanted to lock it, but after all, I still like your proof and couldn't bear it.
Sorry, I still can't persist.
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Merry Christmas ~ Be happy every day ~
I have finished reading this book again, of course, including Fireworks in the World. I actually like the title of the electronic version of the book, "Heaven is too far away, but the world is just right". It is very warm. I have stayed in Xi'an for several years, but I always felt that I was just a passing visitor. But after reading this book, I don't know why the city became vivid in my heart. I remember that when I first read this book, I suddenly longed for these dessert shops. Sometimes I even had the urge to throw away my education and find a dessert shop to start as an apprentice until I could make these pastries myself. However, considering that although they are delicious, my attitude towards the taste is so-so, and I am not so confident in my tongue. If I can't do this, it is best to just learn to make some in my spare time for fun. Mr. Orange Tree uses words to make a delicacy that will make people remember it for a long time!
Big. . . . . TAT
Damn it! ! ! Got engaged! ! ! So sudden! ! ! Then what should I do with my love for you? [Death]! ! ! Ouch! ! ! You must be happy and happy ah ah ah ah ah
The writing is quite good~ If you don't repeatedly emphasize Lin Zhi's upbringing and start with details such as psychological description, it might be richer~ Also, when is this story taking place...? The writing style feels ancient, but the writing feels modern, so it's better to pay attention to it when the time comes. Generally speaking, you can have such a delicate thought, which is unexpected and reasonable. The suspense setting is also good, and the story is well narrated. It would be more surprising if there are more twists and turns.
I came in and saw the comments. Is it because no one read it or everyone is just lazy?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I shouldn't have given young people such a setting casually! When writing a chapter, I always want to drive! ! It's so hard for me QVQ
Regarding knowledge and faith, in this sense Hailsham should be the successor of the second uncle.
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Ah, I like it so much! Hug the author and give her a kiss!
Merry Christmas ~ Be happy every day ~
I have finished reading this book again, of course, including Fireworks in the World. I actually like the title of the electronic version of the book, "Heaven is too far away, but the world is just right". It is very warm. I have stayed in Xi'an for several years, but I always felt that I was just a passing visitor. But after reading this book, I don't know why the city became vivid in my heart. I remember that when I first read this book, I suddenly longed for these dessert shops. Sometimes I even had the urge to throw away my education and find a dessert shop to start as an apprentice until I could make these pastries myself. However, considering that although they are delicious, my attitude towards the taste is so-so, and I am not so confident in my tongue. If I can't do this, it is best to just learn to make some in my spare time for fun. Mr. Orange Tree uses words to make a delicacy that will make people remember it for a long time!
Big. . . . . TAT
Damn it! ! ! Got engaged! ! ! So sudden! ! ! Then what should I do with my love for you? [Death]! ! ! Ouch! ! ! You must be happy and happy ah ah ah ah ah
The writing is quite good~ If you don't repeatedly emphasize Lin Zhi's upbringing and start with details such as psychological description, it might be richer~ Also, when is this story taking place...? The writing style feels ancient, but the writing feels modern, so it's better to pay attention to it when the time comes. Generally speaking, you can have such a delicate thought, which is unexpected and reasonable. The suspense setting is also good, and the story is well narrated. It would be more surprising if there are more twists and turns.
I came in and saw the comments. Is it because no one read it or everyone is just lazy?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I shouldn't have given young people such a setting casually! When writing a chapter, I always want to drive! ! It's so hard for me QVQ
Regarding knowledge and faith, in this sense Hailsham should be the successor of the second uncle.
????????????
Ah, I like it so much! Hug the author and give her a kiss!
Gone? Who called Chen Qianqian?
Update, update, update
I feel a little dizzy...
Beautifully written in big letters~