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As a species that has not been in love for more than 20 years, Lu Liangjian said that she just burst into tears when she saw her friends around her show affection one by one.
The holidays that I least want to celebrate are Valentine's Day and Singles' Day, okay?
I'm looking for a handsome, tall, and good-looking man.
Do you also want to post photos in your circle of friends to show off your kindness and hobbies?
So, just when Lu Liang saw that her resentment was getting deeper and deeper, she unknowingly opened a new switch and entered the door to a new world.
There are all kinds of male tickets for you to choose from!
The only stipulation is that you can only get along with the male ticket for one month.
Name: The Moon of Love
Xinwen Danmei "Captive Relationship"
Intention:
Reader comments
Loulou, when will it be updated?
BY Aaoaotang
When I first saw the title, I really thought it was from the Republic of China. So when I came in and saw the words "Xianxia in Ancient Chinese", I hit myself hard - I have to be careful in the future... (It's actually because I'm not good at commentaries on "Xianxia in Ancient Chinese". Don't blame me, the author...)
Ahem, so, let me get to the point next, and I would like to express my personal opinion. If you have any thoughts that are contrary to the girl's, just check it out.
I read this article using a moon stone, which is much more convenient than reading it on a computer [beat yourself! Off topic again!
So, Shuowen! Shuowen! → In the copywriting, the girl said that the sadistic feeling at the beginning was just an illusion. I was looking forward to it a little, but after reading it from the beginning, I personally didn't think it was very sadistic. Maybe the plot did have some heart-wrenching parts, but the girl's writing was too calm and steady, and not very vivid.
But on the other hand, this is also an advantage. The natural and smooth writing style makes the writing very smooth and does not make people feel stiff. In terms of text processing, I think it is too light for a fairy tale. Originally, fairy tales do not exist in the real world. So if you want to write more vividly and let people indulge in the realm outlined by the author, you must need stronger words.
What makes me most comfortable about the girl's writing is that I didn't see any basic flaws such as punctuation or typos. This is the first O(∩_∩)O among the articles I have reviewed. Only one or two trendy words occasionally interspersed can make me travel back to the real world.
In short, the girl's writing is still good, natural and smooth, but she should think more about the style of writing to make it more suitable for her own theme. The above is purely my humble opinion, keep up the good work, girl! ╭(╯3╰)╮
I'm about to take the Duan exam...
Looking forward to the follow-up
Sherlock used a pseudonym, but John's sister became his brother? = ̄ω ̄=
No matter how many times I see the words "Finished", I am always touched... Because this is a feat.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, long live the leader, don't abuse the leader, I feel so bad
Golden Bird: I'm afraid I'm really going to become a bird
Loulou, when will it be updated?
BY Aaoaotang When I first saw the title, I really thought it was from the Republic of China. So when I came in and saw the words "Xianxia in Ancient Chinese", I hit myself hard - I have to be careful in the future... (It's actually because I'm not good at commentaries on "Xianxia in Ancient Chinese". Don't blame me, the author...) Ahem, so, let me get to the point next, and I would like to express my personal opinion. If you have any thoughts that are contrary to the girl's, just check it out. I read this article using a moon stone, which is much more convenient than reading it on a computer [beat yourself! Off topic again! So, Shuowen! Shuowen! → In the copywriting, the girl said that the sadistic feeling at the beginning was just an illusion. I was looking forward to it a little, but after reading it from the beginning, I personally didn't think it was very sadistic. Maybe the plot did have some heart-wrenching parts, but the girl's writing was too calm and steady, and not very vivid. But on the other hand, this is also an advantage. The natural and smooth writing style makes the writing very smooth and does not make people feel stiff. In terms of text processing, I think it is too light for a fairy tale. Originally, fairy tales do not exist in the real world. So if you want to write more vividly and let people indulge in the realm outlined by the author, you must need stronger words. What makes me most comfortable about the girl's writing is that I didn't see any basic flaws such as punctuation or typos. This is the first O(∩_∩)O among the articles I have reviewed. Only one or two trendy words occasionally interspersed can make me travel back to the real world. In short, the girl's writing is still good, natural and smooth, but she should think more about the style of writing to make it more suitable for her own theme. The above is purely my humble opinion, keep up the good work, girl! ╭(╯3╰)╮
I'm about to take the Duan exam... Looking forward to the follow-up
Sherlock used a pseudonym, but John's sister became his brother? = ̄ω ̄=
No matter how many times I see the words "Finished", I am always touched... Because this is a feat.
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, long live the leader, don't abuse the leader, I feel so bad
Golden Bird: I'm afraid I'm really going to become a bird
When will it be updated next time?