The Beauty of Youth, the Beauty of Kunlun [Twelve Kingdoms Fan]

Beckman, Vice Captain, thank you very much...

In fact, you can write more

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I feel that the one who had the worst emotional disputes in the previous generation was Gu Yu... She was a product used by her mother to take revenge on her father, and she felt that her father did not love her and her mother did not love her. I hope she can have a good ending, and I also hope that Xu can be abused, not the kind of love abuse, but the kind of abuse that makes her realize that her daughter has been ruined by herself. As for Dad Gu, I don't know what he thinks about his daughter since there aren't that many descriptions, but he's probably not a good person. Both Xu and I look like they're selfish. I hope they will not block the love paths of the heroines because of their own failures.

I have discovered a pair of hidden CPs hahahaha! I'm pretty imaginative. By the way, how do you pronounce that word?

Mo Mo Mo Mo Mo Da~ (^з^)-☆ I hope Selan and Legge are well, and Happy New Year~ Finally I've been waiting for the update~

I had some opinions from the beginning of this article, but after reading this chapter, I finally couldn't help it. Who told you that Dazai was physically disabled? Before joining the Armed Detective Agency, he was one of the top cadres at the port [Double Black], and it was he who brought Akutagawa out. Let's not talk about whether he really can't hide from a little girl. The reason why he can't hide is "physical failure" is a little too unsatisfactory. Seriously. Before writing a fanfic, I didn't even understand the basic character settings carefully, and the opening lines were borrowed from other authors' works. After reading the previous comment, it seems that you [borrowed] someone else's memes without permission from the author. Although you said it was explained in the copy. But does the author know? For readers' questions, just say "Thank you little angel for the reminder" and leave it alone. It also doesn't say whether you have the author's consent. This shows that you are not aware of anything wrong with your behavior at all, but are just trying to gain "understanding" from readers, hoping that they will not care about it so that you can gain fans. Everyone knows the principle of "taking the name of a thief without complaining". You said that you "borrowed" the meme because you liked the author's writing. Then I want to ask you, have you ever thought about how the original author of such an article felt? Sorry, since I only read the words "If you like to read or not to scroll" from your reply to another reader, I can only think that you have not considered the author of the article "you like" at all, and this article only appeared because "you like". Then your so-called "like" is too cheap. From a plot perspective, many things that should be explained clearly are unclear. In the two worlds that have appeared so far, the protagonist is forcibly related to the key characters in the plot. It doesn't matter if you use it once, the setting is still the same in the second world. Every time the protagonist goes to a world, someone will come to her door to guide her. The first world is that of Slicker who was "borrowed", and the second world is that of Kunikida and Dazai who were "assigned by the president". The protagonist seems to have hitched a ride, and the plot develops smoothly inexplicably. Also, in the section about killing the Colorless King, the system requires the protagonist to complete the task. The protagonist is afraid of killing, but makes up his mind with Zong San's comfort. I just think the protagonist's mood is like this: Oh, if I don't kill him, I won't be able to complete the task. What should I do? I'm scared. I don't want to take the blame for killing him. Are you willing to take the blame for me? That's great. Then kill him, okay? At least that's what I felt when I read it. At this point, I would like to ask, are you really writing this article seriously and attentively?

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I really don't understand that Ji Xiaofu actually likes the criminal

Finally updated (*ˉˉ*) I really like this article

Come on! I come to see it every day

Forget it, forget it, stop falling in love, brother, you are not worthy, you are not worthy.