Recently, Xing Mengxun is very happy because Hanzhi stays with him every day, never leaving him, but he always feels that Hanzhi's face is getting darker day by day. In fact, this is all because...
When Meng Hanzhi escorted Xing Mengxun to court...
Meng Hanzhi: "This sedan is too small. It's a bit crowded for two people."
Xing Mengxun: "Indeed, Han'er, just follow the sedan outside!"
Meng Hanzhi: "..."
When the two of them dine together...
Meng Hanzhi: "Don't ask the kitchen to cook shrimps in the future. Peeling them is very troublesome and your hands will hurt."
Xing Mengxun: "It doesn't matter. If you peel it off for me, my hands won't hurt! Come on, peel it off!"
Meng Hanzhi: "..."
When it's time to rest at night...
Xing Mengxun: "Shall we sleep in bed together?"
Meng Hanzhi: "Of course not." Men and women still need to be careful.
Xing Mengxun: "Oh, then you can sleep on the ground."
Meng Hanzhi: "..."
When Xing Mengxun went to the toilet...
Xing Mengxun: "Han'er, do you want to come with us?"
Meng Hanzhi: "I might really kill you."
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Reader comments
My classmate borrowed it from me when I was in the fourth grade of elementary school. It was the first novel in my life. I have been looking for it for many years, but I just can't remember the name. I found it by chance today, and I am really moved.
The sixteen-year-old bat is so tender and fragrant
Throw flowers! ! This is the first Mermaid book that I have read in its entirety. I'm most afraid of the ending. I'm used to leaving some parts to leave some space. I won't read the extras in this book.
Why are all stolen pens locked?
Broom protection oil hhhhhh So the two kids are finally leaving the pure chu boy army?
I remember when there was a comic about this chapter hahahahaha
Nice! Unexpected
Sprinkle flowers! ~Biu
The cat demon is Big Orange! ! ! Out of ten big oranges, nine are fat! Maomao's transformation must be a handsome guy with a belly!
Chirp~~~~~bang! One hit the author's backstage!
Take her home quickly!
Thank you for the limited fee. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I like it very much~
More lonely(?△｀)?
Why is Chapter 36 locked and can't be seen (tears
It is almost a foregone conclusion that the brother and sister are on opposite sides, but if Sora and Ying are really the prince and princess of Camrea, they will definitely be against the Seven Gods. After all, the Seven Gods destroyed Camrea.
In other words, Wendy and Zhongli may become enemies in the future, which makes me feel even more heartbroken.
I'm a plush guy, but I'm afraid of animals... Even puppies are afraid
Hey, let's go to the sunshine for the red leaves.
Can be seen or not
Let me give you some advice
First of all, the subject matter of this article is good
I roughly read the content
It's the first time I've written a novel. It's pretty good.
Then
1. Didn't separate what you said
It's a bit unclear who is talking to whom. They don't agree with each other.
The author can be quoted in quotation marks
2. Not too many segments
There is a lot of content in one paragraph
Really... It hurts my eyes to see
I excerpted a section of the original text and changed it a bit
[Original text:
A tree appears in Chen Xi's mind. It looks beautiful. Are you the owner of the voice? That's right. I am the tree of memory and my memory is ninjutsu, so why did you bring me here? Don't you want to travel through time? Is it because of this? That's right. Can I trust you? Certainly. Chen Xi looked at the tree and laughed, then I believe it.
Changes:
A tree appeared in Chen Xi's mind. It looked very beautiful.
"Are you the owner of the voice?"
"That's right. I am the tree of memory and my memory is ninjutsu."
"So? Why did you bring me here?"
"Don't you want to travel through time?"
"Is that why?"
"That's right."
"Can I trust you?"
"Of course."
Chen Xi looked at the tree and laughed, "That's good, I believe it."]
Of course, this is only the formatting has been changed and quotation marks have been added.
The author could add some more content before and after what he said to enrich it.
In terms of word count... It was quite uneven in the early stage, but it was better in the later stage.
In short, I hope the author will get better and better.
The break may last until tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. I want to finish the two books on Yuewen, Qidian and Hongxiu. Now Jinjiang is really my only account (0 x 0)
Feminine scent? ? ? This man is a female hahahahaha
My classmate borrowed it from me when I was in the fourth grade of elementary school. It was the first novel in my life. I have been looking for it for many years, but I just can't remember the name. I found it by chance today, and I am really moved.
The sixteen-year-old bat is so tender and fragrant
Throw flowers! ! This is the first Mermaid book that I have read in its entirety. I'm most afraid of the ending. I'm used to leaving some parts to leave some space. I won't read the extras in this book.
Why are all stolen pens locked?
Broom protection oil hhhhhh So the two kids are finally leaving the pure chu boy army?
I remember when there was a comic about this chapter hahahahaha
Nice! Unexpected
Sprinkle flowers! ~Biu
The cat demon is Big Orange! ! ! Out of ten big oranges, nine are fat! Maomao's transformation must be a handsome guy with a belly! Chirp~~~~~bang! One hit the author's backstage!
Take her home quickly!
Thank you for the limited fee. It's very beautiful. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I like it very much~
More lonely(?△｀)?
Why is Chapter 36 locked and can't be seen (tears
It is almost a foregone conclusion that the brother and sister are on opposite sides, but if Sora and Ying are really the prince and princess of Camrea, they will definitely be against the Seven Gods. After all, the Seven Gods destroyed Camrea. In other words, Wendy and Zhongli may become enemies in the future, which makes me feel even more heartbroken.
I'm a plush guy, but I'm afraid of animals... Even puppies are afraid
Hey, let's go to the sunshine for the red leaves.
Can be seen or not Let me give you some advice First of all, the subject matter of this article is good I roughly read the content It's the first time I've written a novel. It's pretty good. Then 1. Didn't separate what you said It's a bit unclear who is talking to whom. They don't agree with each other. The author can be quoted in quotation marks 2. Not too many segments There is a lot of content in one paragraph Really... It hurts my eyes to see I excerpted a section of the original text and changed it a bit [Original text: A tree appears in Chen Xi's mind. It looks beautiful. Are you the owner of the voice? That's right. I am the tree of memory and my memory is ninjutsu, so why did you bring me here? Don't you want to travel through time? Is it because of this? That's right. Can I trust you? Certainly. Chen Xi looked at the tree and laughed, then I believe it. Changes: A tree appeared in Chen Xi's mind. It looked very beautiful. "Are you the owner of the voice?" "That's right. I am the tree of memory and my memory is ninjutsu." "So? Why did you bring me here?" "Don't you want to travel through time?" "Is that why?" "That's right." "Can I trust you?" "Of course." Chen Xi looked at the tree and laughed, "That's good, I believe it."] Of course, this is only the formatting has been changed and quotation marks have been added. The author could add some more content before and after what he said to enrich it. In terms of word count... It was quite uneven in the early stage, but it was better in the later stage. In short, I hope the author will get better and better.
The break may last until tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. I want to finish the two books on Yuewen, Qidian and Hongxiu. Now Jinjiang is really my only account (0 x 0)
Feminine scent? ? ? This man is a female hahahahaha
This skill is interesting!
Please update! (ˊ?ˋ*)