[Rebirth] the Golden Finger of the Useless Man

Can you not use the first person pronoun? I can't stand it anymore, especially the word "I". Don't you think it's too much? It's really fun

So Zhongli Shang was killed by him once. . . Disgusting enough

Come on \^O^/

I was browsing books these days and happened to see a big article. What should I say? Looking at the copy, why is there a Xueba system, and you can also gamble on stones? Forget about gambling on stones, you are here to cultivate immortals, and you still have a boyfriend from your previous life! ! Taking the heroine to cultivate immortality π_π I couldn't get the cuteness at all. It felt like different systems were put together, a hodgepodge! After reading the first few chapters, I wonder, do you want to write about the story of rebirth, farming, family life, and campus youth Mary Sue? ! The dialogue that feels irrelevant is a little too long-winded. And this is a world of cultivating immortals. The heroine has an awesome husband who is the head of the sect? ! I feel out of place with the world of cultivating immortals. If the heroine has no memory of cultivating immortality, when she wakes up after being reborn in this life, why can she calmly accept the rebirth, the system, the fat cat, and the cultivation of immortality so quickly... I always feel that it is difficult to change the style of painting from the style of rebirth and farming to the style of rebirth of past and present lives.