Comment: [From 'An Ruowei', thank you for carefully reading my unfinished article and so sincerely providing suggestions and comments]: I have a strong desire to express but I seem to be impatient, and the title is too long. Certain subjects require a long period of in-depth understanding before they can be mastered, especially those related to war or history. The influence of movies and novels is important, but it will assimilate the mind. I suggest you read "Latent". The storyline and emotional integration are very natural and atmospheric. Most importantly, the author tells the story in a very calm manner. I think your story is too eager for quick success and loses the narrative charm of the novel itself. There is no tension and it is very confusing. You can use materials but don't quote too many to make people feel confused. The advantage is that the language has improved a lot. Author's reply:
The inscription was entirely due to ancient literature. It seems a little cumbersome now, but I am really too lazy to change it...
We are watching "Insidious" but it is very scatteredEscape from Mom's Pursuit ING
Originally, this article was not about pure love. It was just my nagging after the mid-term exam and my recent reading of "College Entrance Examination 1977", "My Sister's Keeper" and a lot of Su Tong Yishu's silent novels. In fact, it is really messy.
But I'm really too lazy to change it. It may be possible to change it in a few years, but it is still difficult to change the current story now, because the progress is very small for the time being, so it is difficult to change it XD
It seems that I have to put aside my original convulsions-themed articles.
Comment: [From 'An Ruowei', thank you for carefully reading my unfinished article and so sincerely providing suggestions and comments]: I have a strong desire to express but I seem to be impatient, and the title is too long. Certain subjects require a long period of in-depth understanding before they can be mastered, especially those related to war or history. The influence of movies and novels is important, but it will assimilate the mind. I suggest you read "Latent". The storyline and emotional integration are very natural and atmospheric. Most importantly, the author tells the story in a very calm manner. I think your story is too eager for quick success and loses the narrative charm of the novel itself. There is no tension and it is very confusing. You can use materials but don't quote too many to make people feel confused. The advantage is that the language has improved a lot. Author's reply: The inscription was entirely due to ancient literature. It seems a little cumbersome now, but I am really too lazy to change it... We are watching "Insidious" but it is very scatteredEscape from Mom's Pursuit ING Originally, this article was not about pure love. It was just my nagging after the mid-term exam and my recent reading of "College Entrance Examination 1977", "My Sister's Keeper" and a lot of Su Tong Yishu's silent novels. In fact, it is really messy. But I'm really too lazy to change it. It may be possible to change it in a few years, but it is still difficult to change the current story now, because the progress is very small for the time being, so it is difficult to change it XD It seems that I have to put aside my original convulsions-themed articles.