It's another chapter of another life
The original beauty battle---
The protagonist... Of course is----
You will know after reading the article ^_^
Intention:
Reader comments
If it reaches 60,000, I will write a long review. Otherwise, they will be whipped.
I haven't left a message in Jinjiang for a long time. I came here after seeing someone else's recommendation. It's a pity that the very good article is so unpopular. The heroine has a very good character, and her little nerdiness and falling book bags make her even more cute. Although I don't know if the male protagonist has been decided, the layout and arrangement of the case are quite interesting, and the updates are also very powerful. I hope the author can write better and better!
There is no other way to repay it, I can only save it and leave a message. . .
De · Flash Death Single Dog · Erfu is online
A new article has started again, probably another Lily article. Author, I support you very much, but I hope you change the genre?
Xiao Xun is such a tsundere. To have such a good place, the eldest sister must have sex with her once, hahaha
I don't know if I put it in or not. -The claw machine is pumping
The speed of story development is okay. If I plan to write a long novel, this speed is indeed a bit fast, but if it is a short story, this speed will be almost the same.
Flower flower
It seems very depressing. Why are there so many people who take advantage of others by taking advantage of them? Even though it is a martial arts world, not everyone has a bad character who is always blackmailed by their abilities. How come Yunmu has encountered so many unreasonable people in his uneven life?
How come no one left a comment?
Suddenly I thought of Xian Si. . I don't know if I'm going too far. .
Your writing is actually pretty good, but I'd like to remind you one by one. . The number of words in each chapter must reach 3,000 to 4,000 words to get the highest points. . And I don't know whether it should be 2000 or 3000 words or more to get on the homepage~~
If Ray is still so good in the future, there will still be people like Noel... Also... Author, you disappeared for quite a while... Finally you are back...
It's another lonely morning~ Baibai, you haven't updated yet~ It's been 20 days! Although exams are very important, they still need to be updated! ! !
Xiao Zuo, you should study hard. . .
Dwarf, you still have a portal! Thanks for the tweet! This chapter is not displayed.
Very delicate writing, I like this feeling, spread flowers~~~~~
Keep going~~~~~
Kindness. What a great article. Although we haven't watched animations very often
After all, we never liked the heroine's character.
But I like this CP. Hope it can continue
Such obsession... Baozi was moved by the braised pork...
Fighting joyhhhhhhh
Zishu? ? No, there is an article called Zi Shu Family Affairs. I think the overall feeling is quite good. If you have nothing to do, you can go take a look.
The first reaction is so cute
The second reaction is, it can't be just this chapter.
It's disappointing that I've started digging into history to dig up spoilers. Will the author let me succeed?
The novel is well written, but I still hope that my lover can live happily.
Ye Jia, do you want to be so obsessed with money~~~
Because everyone guessed that you wouldn't let anything happen to it.
I like it very much. Come on.
Not bad, I can see the writing style is more profound. But the narrative aspect is a little weaker. Too much inner drama.
Regarding the meaning of Xue Qianxun's name, I think it's better if you just write how Xue Qianxun feels about your name, and you don't need to write so much about what others think. Just write "Xue Qianxun is my name. Maybe my parents didn't know it for a long time. From now on, I will spend my whole life looking for someone..." Or something like that. I didn't read the rest of it, but I have a hunch that your article would be better if I changed it a little bit.
Then there is the sequential aspect of the narrative. It would probably be better if it started from when Xue Qianxun and Dongfang Bubai were young. Or skipping the apprenticeship plot and starting directly from Goodbye Dongfang Bubai, it would be more gimmicky.
Let's encourage each other~~
The idea is very good. I like time travel. Is this a few chapters? I like the heroine very much. I am a noob. When will the male protagonist come out? I really want to know. Please follow me soon. Damn!
It feels very good. I haven't read Wang Wen on the Internet for a long time because I was afraid of meeting Miss Mary Sue, but I found the very lively twin sisters~ Come on, author~
Slapping the table, when can I have such a free life? Youyou, you make me full of resentment.
If it reaches 60,000, I will write a long review. Otherwise, they will be whipped.
I haven't left a message in Jinjiang for a long time. I came here after seeing someone else's recommendation. It's a pity that the very good article is so unpopular. The heroine has a very good character, and her little nerdiness and falling book bags make her even more cute. Although I don't know if the male protagonist has been decided, the layout and arrangement of the case are quite interesting, and the updates are also very powerful. I hope the author can write better and better! There is no other way to repay it, I can only save it and leave a message. . .
De · Flash Death Single Dog · Erfu is online
A new article has started again, probably another Lily article. Author, I support you very much, but I hope you change the genre?
Xiao Xun is such a tsundere. To have such a good place, the eldest sister must have sex with her once, hahaha
I don't know if I put it in or not. -The claw machine is pumping
The speed of story development is okay. If I plan to write a long novel, this speed is indeed a bit fast, but if it is a short story, this speed will be almost the same.
Flower flower
It seems very depressing. Why are there so many people who take advantage of others by taking advantage of them? Even though it is a martial arts world, not everyone has a bad character who is always blackmailed by their abilities. How come Yunmu has encountered so many unreasonable people in his uneven life?
How come no one left a comment? Suddenly I thought of Xian Si. . I don't know if I'm going too far. . Your writing is actually pretty good, but I'd like to remind you one by one. . The number of words in each chapter must reach 3,000 to 4,000 words to get the highest points. . And I don't know whether it should be 2000 or 3000 words or more to get on the homepage~~
If Ray is still so good in the future, there will still be people like Noel... Also... Author, you disappeared for quite a while... Finally you are back...
It's another lonely morning~ Baibai, you haven't updated yet~ It's been 20 days! Although exams are very important, they still need to be updated! ! !
Xiao Zuo, you should study hard. . .
Dwarf, you still have a portal! Thanks for the tweet! This chapter is not displayed.
Very delicate writing, I like this feeling, spread flowers~~~~~
Keep going~~~~~
Kindness. What a great article. Although we haven't watched animations very often After all, we never liked the heroine's character. But I like this CP. Hope it can continue
Such obsession... Baozi was moved by the braised pork...
Fighting joyhhhhhhh
Zishu? ? No, there is an article called Zi Shu Family Affairs. I think the overall feeling is quite good. If you have nothing to do, you can go take a look.
The first reaction is so cute The second reaction is, it can't be just this chapter.
It's disappointing that I've started digging into history to dig up spoilers. Will the author let me succeed?
The novel is well written, but I still hope that my lover can live happily.
Ye Jia, do you want to be so obsessed with money~~~
Because everyone guessed that you wouldn't let anything happen to it.
I like it very much. Come on.
Not bad, I can see the writing style is more profound. But the narrative aspect is a little weaker. Too much inner drama. Regarding the meaning of Xue Qianxun's name, I think it's better if you just write how Xue Qianxun feels about your name, and you don't need to write so much about what others think. Just write "Xue Qianxun is my name. Maybe my parents didn't know it for a long time. From now on, I will spend my whole life looking for someone..." Or something like that. I didn't read the rest of it, but I have a hunch that your article would be better if I changed it a little bit. Then there is the sequential aspect of the narrative. It would probably be better if it started from when Xue Qianxun and Dongfang Bubai were young. Or skipping the apprenticeship plot and starting directly from Goodbye Dongfang Bubai, it would be more gimmicky. Let's encourage each other~~
The idea is very good. I like time travel. Is this a few chapters? I like the heroine very much. I am a noob. When will the male protagonist come out? I really want to know. Please follow me soon. Damn!
It feels very good. I haven't read Wang Wen on the Internet for a long time because I was afraid of meeting Miss Mary Sue, but I found the very lively twin sisters~ Come on, author~
Slapping the table, when can I have such a free life? Youyou, you make me full of resentment.