Sesshomaru: Akira

The ending sucks. The ending that was well written earlier is inexplicable.

So pretty (??ω??)??

I wish you happiness forever! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is good, but there is a problem with the character. It may be that logic is not taken into account in order to promote the development of the storyline. The heroine has so far consciously pushed the plot to develop according to the original tragedy and grabbed plot points to increase the favorability of the Ghost Spider. It feels like the guide is like a game/at the same time, it is to show the kindness of the heroine/so it emphasizes her passivity, so the character has become a hypocritical white lotus. Many motives can only be said to be intentional and bad by the heroine.

I feel the author's strong desire to survive

Two swords... Sesshomaru only had the natural teeth at this time, and the Doukijin was later made using the teeth of Naraku Fenshen Goshinki.

"Four" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

Author, I support you!

There are so many bugs... So many grammatical errors... So many typos... So confusing thinking... And so bad the killing palace... But the writing is pretty good...

Author, you have a lot of typos

You need to have a good relationship, some people are not allowed to make mistakes

I feel like the ending was caught off guard orz

Daily... Daily updates? ? ? ＿? B(???)_It's been two weeks

Like it (≧3≦)/

If you become a human, what will you do with the powerful demon power?

Ahhhhhhhhhh, so beautiful! ! ! Why! ? Why not update it? In my lifetime, I beg you to come back. It has been 16 to 22 years. I have been promoted to college from the first year of junior high school, and I am still waiting.

Dear author, please indicate it in the copywriter when you dismantle the cp.

27Bg! Come on!

~(≧▽≦)/~