One of Tianya and Tieba Divine Commentary said: In the past thirteen years, Yeluqi returned to Mongolia, and Yang Guo and Guo Fu met again.
This is where the story I wrote begins.
At the foot of Zhongnan Mountain, the Tomb of the Living Dead, the Condor Heroes and their Couple disappeared from the world.
Written after The Legend of the Condor Heroes and before The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying
Give Guo Fu and Yang Guo a chance to be together
Xiao tide (let's call him my name) has all kinds of bad habits, such as
Writing speed is very slow
The development of the plot, especially the relationship between the male and female protagonists, is very slow.
The writing style will change with the wind
The character is both crooked and right
The writing is uneven.
Wait a minute~~~
Because I am very busy this semester and there are some things I want to do, I changed it to irregular updates.
The article is coming to an end, I promise not to give up~~~
I also found that my article has an extra cover~~~
O(∩_∩)O haha~
Intention:
Reader comments
The story told is generally good, but the emotional line surprised me a little. The author deepened Yang Guo's feelings for Xiao Longnu, and also whitewashed the image of Xiao Longnu. In fact, this did not match my feelings after reading the original work. On the contrary, it was very similar to my imagination of the content of the original work after watching the 1995 version of the TV series [Dog Head]. After all, I can read Jin Yong's ill will toward Xiao Longnu in the original work, which makes me uncomfortable. Although I have reservations about whether Yang Guo blames Xiao Longnu or not, after reading the original work, I think that Yang Guo's feelings for Xiao Longnu are not love, at least what I think of as love. It is just a habit, not even dependence, let alone attachment. Because no matter how Yang Guo says he can't live without Xiao Longnu, he is happier than anyone else when he is alone. This is like my feelings for my mother. I care about her very much, but this does not mean that I have to be tied to her all the time. I occasionally think of her when I am out of town, but I will not give up my life abroad and go back to my mother. Habits may be good or bad, but they change and disappear. In your continued story, Guo Fu further occupied Yang Guo's world, and it was difficult for him to miss Xiao Longnu anymore. I think there is indeed emotion between Yang Guo and Guo Fu in the original work, but this emotion can hardly be called love. It should be said to be the emotion most likely to be called love. Because their emotions may have been quietly tested and violently collided, but the emotions were not intertwined. The time they spent together was too short, so they could only achieve no results.
I don't know if you, the author, can see it, but I'm still looking forward to this modern fanfic, and want to see the two of them having a good time in peacetime. In the ending of this book, although the two were able to stay together for a long time, they also lost their close relatives and friends because of the war, and their bodies were also left with irreversible damage. The bright Miss Guo was so sad for the rest of her life, always regretting it.
Why, every time I see the Queen Mother being called Queen Mother, I always call her Queen Mother! ! ! ! She is obviously the queen mother!
... Why did I think when I first saw the article that there were ice flowers that could save girls from being choked? After reading the article, I thought that Guan Xuanming and Guan Xuanming would be frozen directly into ice sculptures by the ice prison...
The story told is generally good, but the emotional line surprised me a little. The author deepened Yang Guo's feelings for Xiao Longnu, and also whitewashed the image of Xiao Longnu. In fact, this did not match my feelings after reading the original work. On the contrary, it was very similar to my imagination of the content of the original work after watching the 1995 version of the TV series [Dog Head]. After all, I can read Jin Yong's ill will toward Xiao Longnu in the original work, which makes me uncomfortable. Although I have reservations about whether Yang Guo blames Xiao Longnu or not, after reading the original work, I think that Yang Guo's feelings for Xiao Longnu are not love, at least what I think of as love. It is just a habit, not even dependence, let alone attachment. Because no matter how Yang Guo says he can't live without Xiao Longnu, he is happier than anyone else when he is alone. This is like my feelings for my mother. I care about her very much, but this does not mean that I have to be tied to her all the time. I occasionally think of her when I am out of town, but I will not give up my life abroad and go back to my mother. Habits may be good or bad, but they change and disappear. In your continued story, Guo Fu further occupied Yang Guo's world, and it was difficult for him to miss Xiao Longnu anymore. I think there is indeed emotion between Yang Guo and Guo Fu in the original work, but this emotion can hardly be called love. It should be said to be the emotion most likely to be called love. Because their emotions may have been quietly tested and violently collided, but the emotions were not intertwined. The time they spent together was too short, so they could only achieve no results.
I don't know if you, the author, can see it, but I'm still looking forward to this modern fanfic, and want to see the two of them having a good time in peacetime. In the ending of this book, although the two were able to stay together for a long time, they also lost their close relatives and friends because of the war, and their bodies were also left with irreversible damage. The bright Miss Guo was so sad for the rest of her life, always regretting it.
Why, every time I see the Queen Mother being called Queen Mother, I always call her Queen Mother! ! ! ! She is obviously the queen mother!
... Why did I think when I first saw the article that there were ice flowers that could save girls from being choked? After reading the article, I thought that Guan Xuanming and Guan Xuanming would be frozen directly into ice sculptures by the ice prison...