While I am following up on the updated work, I came to look at the old work and I have something to say. After thinking about it, I should be able to compile a long review. Please forgive me if the words are offensive.
You are an author I like very much. I must read every article you write (except for modern and time-travel themes). I have read almost every work more than twice. This is the only one I read for the first time because I don't like reading fan fiction, and because Wu Zetian is a historical figure that I care about very much.
It is too difficult to adapt a historical figure, especially this famous one. It seems that it is not convincing at all to write about her romance, her passion and sincerity. After all, this is a ruthless person. It is difficult to imagine that there is tenderness hidden behind the decisive killing. When I saw it two-thirds of the time, I I'm still wondering if A Wu will imprison Gao Yang and let him have his desires... But A Wu and Wu Zetian are different after all. What Wu Zetian wants is power over the world, while A Wu mainly wants to be with Gao Yang. The world is just a branch of the main line. It must be done, but it is not the ultimate goal.
Titled "Rebirth of the Tang Dynasty", Gao Yang's reaction after rebirth was too natural, as if it was normal, he accepted it without any struggle, but later he scorned Li Shimin's longing for eternal life... Hey, is it reasonable to say that rebirth is normal and eternal life is nonsense? Moreover, Gao Yang's personality is a bit strange. Unlike A Wu, she acts with a sense of benevolence and justice. When she was young, she was as gentle and loving as a mother to Jin Yang. It is normal that she does not have much respect and love for Li Shimin. After all, Li Shimin did not take much care of her in the previous life. But it's not harsh treatment. If her father is going to die of illness, she should have some reaction. Just like she knew that Jinyang wouldn't survive until twelve and went to all the trouble to find Sun Simiao, so she didn't have any idea after knowing that Li Shimin was ill. Isn't it a bit abnormal?
Her attitude towards Li Zhi is also a bit subtle. Li Zhi gave her death in her previous life. Although it was inseparable from Fang Yiai's stupidity and Zhang Sun Wuji's calculations, if she had any wisdom after her rebirth, she would have understood that Li Zhi was not completely blameless. Li Zhi also had to bear a share of the responsibility for her death in her previous life. If she knew this well but still had no resentment or thoughts about Li Zhi, it means that she essentially values kinship and brotherhood (this is indeed true from her attitude towards Jinyang), then it would be a bit unjustifiable to stab Li Zhi without hesitation and pull him off his horse. Although Li Zhi was at fault, his fault was that he was blinded by his lust, snatched away Awu, and then abolished him after he was established, but other than that, Li Zhi had no fault in Gaoyang. Why did he end up in such a situation? He was obviously Gaoyang's brother who never resented him until his death, and was Jiulang who had cared for him when he was young. This move is suitable for Awu Laixia, but Gao Yanglai is a bit strange. It was mentioned later that Gao Yang didn't kill him purely for Jin Yang's sake. They were both born to the same parents. Why is there such a big difference in treatment? (As expected, men are inferior to women)
It makes sense to explain that Li Zhi wants to depose the queen. No one knows whether this is just the beginning. Since he realizes that A Wu has too much authority, the next step after deposing the queen may be to clean up the court, and finally find a reason for A Wu to be blamed. This is something Gao Yang never wants to see, so the Zen position is a must. The stabbing was far-fetched. She and A Wu joined forces and were able to speak the truth in the court. There was no shortage of such scenes in history, and there were even emperors who starved to death... So it made no difference whether Li Zhi was dead, alive or half-dead at this time. This stab seems to be a bit of a vent of personal anger, which is in line with normal people's psychology, but does not match Gao Yang's character. In my imagination, it is either A Wu's original plan to force the palace, or Gao Yang forced Li Zhi to live under house arrest.
The character of A Wu has not been changed badly. She is not Wu Zetian by nature, but Wu Zetian created by Li Shimin and Li Zhi. Li Shimin is the teacher who teaches her, and Li Zhi is the friend who helps her (not completely useless like in this work). It is true that A Wu herself is courageous and ambitious, but between the two In the story, without Li Shimin, Awu will not become Wu Zhaoyi who has the means to make decisions; without Li Zhi, Awu will not become Wu Zhao with experience and ideas. After all, even Li Zhi who was not trained as a prince would have a hard time becoming emperor, not to mention Awu who only grew up under the influence of Li Shimin.
But it can't be said to be good. One thing about Wu Zetian is finalized anyway, she tried her best to climb up to that position, not because she could sit there and sit back and relax with someone, not because she was forced to be, but because she wanted to sit there. She wanted to be an emperor and change the world. Therefore, in Awu's world, becoming a king is the main line, and love is just the icing on the cake. Before I clicked on this article, I was looking forward to seeing how an ambitious woman would talk about love on the way to becoming king.
But this makes a lot of things not make sense, so your adaptation of her is understandable.
I personally like the Tang Dynasty very much. Whether it is the style of the aristocratic families or the open folk customs, it is the dynasty other than the Wei and Jin Dynasties that I think is the most suitable for the background of ancient Lily literature. But Li Shimin is a very difficult character to write. Basically, if he appears in a novel, it would be best to be a mascot. It is difficult to integrate him into the plot without being obtrusive. Because this person's thoughts are hard to fathom, he can do anything, and his personality is very contradictory. He kills brothers without mercy, but he is ruthless to his own son. He is obviously very resourceful, and he plays well with checks and balances. However, he was disturbed by his ministers, and finally established the most unexpected prince. Wu Zetian is more difficult to write about. Her unscrupulous side is impressive. The rumor of strangling her own daughter to death is still inconclusive. I personally prefer that she really did it. Look at what happened to the Li family later... It is absolutely undesirable to portray Wu Zetian as a white lotus, but Being too cruel and ruthless will arouse readers' disgust. You have a good grasp of the character's personality. You don't have much to write about this side of Awu, but you also mentioned it in a rather subtle way through her reactions to the few people Gao Yang had close contact with.
This ending is really bad... It's not as good as the following chapters... Awu's entry should be a big climax, and more foreshadowing is needed before the ending. I have a guess, did you write Gao Yang off because you wanted to be...
According to Gao Yang's identity and character, it is natural that she would forgive A Wu and the two get back together. True love will not hold on to that little thing. She knew very well that A Wu's choice was the best choice at the time. Otherwise, if the two of them were to die and their reputation would be broken, then there would really be nothing left. Wu endured the humiliation for nearly ten years. She was angry and distressed. Gao Yang was more at odds with herself and her powerless self. She hated herself for not having enough power to protect Wu. She believed that if she had to live her life over again, she would choose to sit in that position. Putting aside the prototype, Awu is still a rare and strange woman. After ten years of planning, she has not changed her original intention. All she wants is Gaoyang. Therefore, she did not kill all the Li clan members just because they have the same surname as her. She did not even do anything to Jinyang. There was any act of revenge, which is unbelievable from the perspective of a queen who has a high position and always spends money, just because she knew that Jinyang was Gao Yang's beloved sister, and she couldn't say that she loved the whole family, but we can see that Jinyang had a good ending.
Judging from the development of the story, Taiping will succeed to the throne. The child named Gao Yang can even be said to be a child raised by her. In Awu's heart, its weight needless to say. Besides, Awu will not have any more children.
Gao Yang's bloodline can be considered continued in Taiping.
If Gao Yang is not dead, her position will be very awkward. Although she has great power, she will not want Awu to bear the reputation of being the leader (first as father, then son, then daughter). If Awu is only the queen, this matter is just a palace secret, but if Awu ascends the throne and becomes the queen, this matter will be recorded in the annals of history. It is not easy to end, so it is understandable intellectually.
It's a pity that Gao Yang didn't end well in his two lives.
In this life, I was confused and didn't know it. In this life, I couldn't get love at first, but then I got it hard, but I was tortured by illness and passed away.
It's pity that Wu saw his lover die twice.
Without the high sun, I dream about it at midnight and feel so miserable that I don't want to live. After gaining Gaoyang, he lost his beloved and left nothing in the world.
Fortunately, okay, I quit the game three times because of the first few chapters, and the fourth time, because I was curious about why the collection was so high, I read the comments again, and finally made up my mind to read it. Fortunately, I didn't miss it! ! The plot is so fascinating ~ I love it so much! ! ! ! It can be said that I have been into writing about Naruto for a long time. Basically, I have read almost all the good-looking ones with some content. I am facing a huge crisis of literary shortage! The surprise is beyond words, it can be said that it is too late to meet each other! Why didn't I stick to it before? If you persevere, you can discover this treasure article sooner! ! ! But it's neither too early nor too late, and I'm stuck at the time when I'm short on literature~ I read this article in one sitting! I feel like the author is getting better and better with his writing. The previous content was a bit nonsensical, there were too many psychological descriptions, and the characters felt a bit like paper figures, but then it got better and better! I won't reveal too much about the content. Fans who are interested in building the foundation of Naruto can go and take a look. It perfectly combines Naruto's background, black technology, ninjutsu and other aspects. Background), it is an idealized world, and it is a cool article. The so-called glass slag is not abusive in my opinion (to the protagonist). Most likely I am not good at writing abusive points. He said that the description of the glass slag still gives people a sweet feeling. Compared with the Naruto stories I have read before, it is simply angelic! The protagonist in this article does not describe much about what he has lost - as far as the overall plot is concerned - he only lost two important characters in the early stage when he did not fully grow up, but it is also for the needs of the plot, in order for the protagonist to grow up and have a firmer determination. I can see from the few words in the article the difficulties that the protagonist has not been described, but because there is no specific description, I have no specific impression, just a vague concept, so I always feel that this is a sweet article - because there is no more description of the protagonist's hardships. It's a story, but it's great, because this way I won't burst into tears again, thinking about how the protagonist would not be so miserable every day. When I read the article, I was super worried about whether a glass shard would suddenly appear - I thought based on the previous Naruto article, and I always felt that it was almost The plot is full of possible reversals - sometimes when the description is very good, I am tortured by my own brain to make me cry. TT I dare not continue watching until I forcefully suppress my pessimism and think about the law of the protagonist's immortality and then reluctantly continue watching... In short, thank you very much! Showed me such a beautiful story! It makes me look forward to more Naruto fanfics!
Xincheng is really powerful and can restrain himself from saying anything for a lifetime.
It turned out to be a tragedy, not happy
I watched it again all night, hey.
I was caught off guard when it ended (?ò ? ó?)
After all, not all people will die. It's good that A Wu and Gao Yang can communicate with each other and have peace.
Mr. Darcy's love talk skills are max, his seductive skills are max, and he finally has the beauty back in his arms. The next step is marriage, right?
Nice! I like this article very much, but I was very sad when I saw Shen Wen die at the beginning o(╥╥)o, and burst into tears, but fortunately it has a happy ending, the author, keep up the good work (? ??_??)? Waiting for the new article
So scary! Damn, you are back from the dead!
Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~
It's too classic, and it still looks good almost 10 years later
A classic article that I can't help but recall every year [Good Luck Lotus] [Applause], but it's a pity that there is no follow-up from Taiping and Wan'er
Datang and Chunrujiu are my two favorites. I really hope Xiaoshu can start a gentle and satisfying chapter~
In the end, I ended up being. It's a pity and it's hard to let go.
Crying
I said why was it suddenly locked? It hurt a lot for a second.
The author is awesome~
... Why do I feel so heartbroken when I am single? QAQ
Great. The main text is over. You can see the baby in the extra story. Yes, it's great to be grown up after all.
While I am following up on the updated work, I came to look at the old work and I have something to say. After thinking about it, I should be able to compile a long review. Please forgive me if the words are offensive. You are an author I like very much. I must read every article you write (except for modern and time-travel themes). I have read almost every work more than twice. This is the only one I read for the first time because I don't like reading fan fiction, and because Wu Zetian is a historical figure that I care about very much. It is too difficult to adapt a historical figure, especially this famous one. It seems that it is not convincing at all to write about her romance, her passion and sincerity. After all, this is a ruthless person. It is difficult to imagine that there is tenderness hidden behind the decisive killing. When I saw it two-thirds of the time, I I'm still wondering if A Wu will imprison Gao Yang and let him have his desires... But A Wu and Wu Zetian are different after all. What Wu Zetian wants is power over the world, while A Wu mainly wants to be with Gao Yang. The world is just a branch of the main line. It must be done, but it is not the ultimate goal. Titled "Rebirth of the Tang Dynasty", Gao Yang's reaction after rebirth was too natural, as if it was normal, he accepted it without any struggle, but later he scorned Li Shimin's longing for eternal life... Hey, is it reasonable to say that rebirth is normal and eternal life is nonsense? Moreover, Gao Yang's personality is a bit strange. Unlike A Wu, she acts with a sense of benevolence and justice. When she was young, she was as gentle and loving as a mother to Jin Yang. It is normal that she does not have much respect and love for Li Shimin. After all, Li Shimin did not take much care of her in the previous life. But it's not harsh treatment. If her father is going to die of illness, she should have some reaction. Just like she knew that Jinyang wouldn't survive until twelve and went to all the trouble to find Sun Simiao, so she didn't have any idea after knowing that Li Shimin was ill. Isn't it a bit abnormal? Her attitude towards Li Zhi is also a bit subtle. Li Zhi gave her death in her previous life. Although it was inseparable from Fang Yiai's stupidity and Zhang Sun Wuji's calculations, if she had any wisdom after her rebirth, she would have understood that Li Zhi was not completely blameless. Li Zhi also had to bear a share of the responsibility for her death in her previous life. If she knew this well but still had no resentment or thoughts about Li Zhi, it means that she essentially values kinship and brotherhood (this is indeed true from her attitude towards Jinyang), then it would be a bit unjustifiable to stab Li Zhi without hesitation and pull him off his horse. Although Li Zhi was at fault, his fault was that he was blinded by his lust, snatched away Awu, and then abolished him after he was established, but other than that, Li Zhi had no fault in Gaoyang. Why did he end up in such a situation? He was obviously Gaoyang's brother who never resented him until his death, and was Jiulang who had cared for him when he was young. This move is suitable for Awu Laixia, but Gao Yanglai is a bit strange. It was mentioned later that Gao Yang didn't kill him purely for Jin Yang's sake. They were both born to the same parents. Why is there such a big difference in treatment? (As expected, men are inferior to women) It makes sense to explain that Li Zhi wants to depose the queen. No one knows whether this is just the beginning. Since he realizes that A Wu has too much authority, the next step after deposing the queen may be to clean up the court, and finally find a reason for A Wu to be blamed. This is something Gao Yang never wants to see, so the Zen position is a must. The stabbing was far-fetched. She and A Wu joined forces and were able to speak the truth in the court. There was no shortage of such scenes in history, and there were even emperors who starved to death... So it made no difference whether Li Zhi was dead, alive or half-dead at this time. This stab seems to be a bit of a vent of personal anger, which is in line with normal people's psychology, but does not match Gao Yang's character. In my imagination, it is either A Wu's original plan to force the palace, or Gao Yang forced Li Zhi to live under house arrest. The character of A Wu has not been changed badly. She is not Wu Zetian by nature, but Wu Zetian created by Li Shimin and Li Zhi. Li Shimin is the teacher who teaches her, and Li Zhi is the friend who helps her (not completely useless like in this work). It is true that A Wu herself is courageous and ambitious, but between the two In the story, without Li Shimin, Awu will not become Wu Zhaoyi who has the means to make decisions; without Li Zhi, Awu will not become Wu Zhao with experience and ideas. After all, even Li Zhi who was not trained as a prince would have a hard time becoming emperor, not to mention Awu who only grew up under the influence of Li Shimin. But it can't be said to be good. One thing about Wu Zetian is finalized anyway, she tried her best to climb up to that position, not because she could sit there and sit back and relax with someone, not because she was forced to be, but because she wanted to sit there. She wanted to be an emperor and change the world. Therefore, in Awu's world, becoming a king is the main line, and love is just the icing on the cake. Before I clicked on this article, I was looking forward to seeing how an ambitious woman would talk about love on the way to becoming king. But this makes a lot of things not make sense, so your adaptation of her is understandable. I personally like the Tang Dynasty very much. Whether it is the style of the aristocratic families or the open folk customs, it is the dynasty other than the Wei and Jin Dynasties that I think is the most suitable for the background of ancient Lily literature. But Li Shimin is a very difficult character to write. Basically, if he appears in a novel, it would be best to be a mascot. It is difficult to integrate him into the plot without being obtrusive. Because this person's thoughts are hard to fathom, he can do anything, and his personality is very contradictory. He kills brothers without mercy, but he is ruthless to his own son. He is obviously very resourceful, and he plays well with checks and balances. However, he was disturbed by his ministers, and finally established the most unexpected prince. Wu Zetian is more difficult to write about. Her unscrupulous side is impressive. The rumor of strangling her own daughter to death is still inconclusive. I personally prefer that she really did it. Look at what happened to the Li family later... It is absolutely undesirable to portray Wu Zetian as a white lotus, but Being too cruel and ruthless will arouse readers' disgust. You have a good grasp of the character's personality. You don't have much to write about this side of Awu, but you also mentioned it in a rather subtle way through her reactions to the few people Gao Yang had close contact with. This ending is really bad... It's not as good as the following chapters... Awu's entry should be a big climax, and more foreshadowing is needed before the ending. I have a guess, did you write Gao Yang off because you wanted to be... According to Gao Yang's identity and character, it is natural that she would forgive A Wu and the two get back together. True love will not hold on to that little thing. She knew very well that A Wu's choice was the best choice at the time. Otherwise, if the two of them were to die and their reputation would be broken, then there would really be nothing left. Wu endured the humiliation for nearly ten years. She was angry and distressed. Gao Yang was more at odds with herself and her powerless self. She hated herself for not having enough power to protect Wu. She believed that if she had to live her life over again, she would choose to sit in that position. Putting aside the prototype, Awu is still a rare and strange woman. After ten years of planning, she has not changed her original intention. All she wants is Gaoyang. Therefore, she did not kill all the Li clan members just because they have the same surname as her. She did not even do anything to Jinyang. There was any act of revenge, which is unbelievable from the perspective of a queen who has a high position and always spends money, just because she knew that Jinyang was Gao Yang's beloved sister, and she couldn't say that she loved the whole family, but we can see that Jinyang had a good ending. Judging from the development of the story, Taiping will succeed to the throne. The child named Gao Yang can even be said to be a child raised by her. In Awu's heart, its weight needless to say. Besides, Awu will not have any more children. Gao Yang's bloodline can be considered continued in Taiping. If Gao Yang is not dead, her position will be very awkward. Although she has great power, she will not want Awu to bear the reputation of being the leader (first as father, then son, then daughter). If Awu is only the queen, this matter is just a palace secret, but if Awu ascends the throne and becomes the queen, this matter will be recorded in the annals of history. It is not easy to end, so it is understandable intellectually. It's a pity that Gao Yang didn't end well in his two lives. In this life, I was confused and didn't know it. In this life, I couldn't get love at first, but then I got it hard, but I was tortured by illness and passed away. It's pity that Wu saw his lover die twice. Without the high sun, I dream about it at midnight and feel so miserable that I don't want to live. After gaining Gaoyang, he lost his beloved and left nothing in the world.
Fortunately, okay, I quit the game three times because of the first few chapters, and the fourth time, because I was curious about why the collection was so high, I read the comments again, and finally made up my mind to read it. Fortunately, I didn't miss it! ! The plot is so fascinating ~ I love it so much! ! ! ! It can be said that I have been into writing about Naruto for a long time. Basically, I have read almost all the good-looking ones with some content. I am facing a huge crisis of literary shortage! The surprise is beyond words, it can be said that it is too late to meet each other! Why didn't I stick to it before? If you persevere, you can discover this treasure article sooner! ! ! But it's neither too early nor too late, and I'm stuck at the time when I'm short on literature~ I read this article in one sitting! I feel like the author is getting better and better with his writing. The previous content was a bit nonsensical, there were too many psychological descriptions, and the characters felt a bit like paper figures, but then it got better and better! I won't reveal too much about the content. Fans who are interested in building the foundation of Naruto can go and take a look. It perfectly combines Naruto's background, black technology, ninjutsu and other aspects. Background), it is an idealized world, and it is a cool article. The so-called glass slag is not abusive in my opinion (to the protagonist). Most likely I am not good at writing abusive points. He said that the description of the glass slag still gives people a sweet feeling. Compared with the Naruto stories I have read before, it is simply angelic! The protagonist in this article does not describe much about what he has lost - as far as the overall plot is concerned - he only lost two important characters in the early stage when he did not fully grow up, but it is also for the needs of the plot, in order for the protagonist to grow up and have a firmer determination. I can see from the few words in the article the difficulties that the protagonist has not been described, but because there is no specific description, I have no specific impression, just a vague concept, so I always feel that this is a sweet article - because there is no more description of the protagonist's hardships. It's a story, but it's great, because this way I won't burst into tears again, thinking about how the protagonist would not be so miserable every day. When I read the article, I was super worried about whether a glass shard would suddenly appear - I thought based on the previous Naruto article, and I always felt that it was almost The plot is full of possible reversals - sometimes when the description is very good, I am tortured by my own brain to make me cry. TT I dare not continue watching until I forcefully suppress my pessimism and think about the law of the protagonist's immortality and then reluctantly continue watching... In short, thank you very much! Showed me such a beautiful story! It makes me look forward to more Naruto fanfics!
Xincheng is really powerful and can restrain himself from saying anything for a lifetime.
It turned out to be a tragedy, not happy
I watched it again all night, hey.
I was caught off guard when it ended (?ò ? ó?)
After all, not all people will die. It's good that A Wu and Gao Yang can communicate with each other and have peace.
Mr. Darcy's love talk skills are max, his seductive skills are max, and he finally has the beauty back in his arms. The next step is marriage, right?
Nice! I like this article very much, but I was very sad when I saw Shen Wen die at the beginning o(╥╥)o, and burst into tears, but fortunately it has a happy ending, the author, keep up the good work (? ??_??)? Waiting for the new article
So scary! Damn, you are back from the dead!
Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~
It's too classic, and it still looks good almost 10 years later
A classic article that I can't help but recall every year [Good Luck Lotus] [Applause], but it's a pity that there is no follow-up from Taiping and Wan'er
Datang and Chunrujiu are my two favorites. I really hope Xiaoshu can start a gentle and satisfying chapter~
In the end, I ended up being. It's a pity and it's hard to let go.
Crying I said why was it suddenly locked? It hurt a lot for a second.
The author is awesome~
... Why do I feel so heartbroken when I am single? QAQ
Great. The main text is over. You can see the baby in the extra story. Yes, it's great to be grown up after all.
Hahahahahahahahahahaha Wu
I feel like my vest is crumblingww