The lonely soul in another world, the spiritual stone enters the immortal world, and the way of heaven does not allow it, so I will shake the sky.
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Yuanfang Xinwen, Imperial Master
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It's not easy for this pair of wood and stone lovers to be released [Spread Flowers]
This article is not the struggle article that most writers usually write. This is a pure gold-finger article, and it is a super gold-finger article, completely crushing the level.
Some people say that it's strange to break up one line after another, but that's the style of writing. Maybe people who read it for the first time are not used to it, but once you get used to it, it's quite interesting.
So what did the ancestor of Baiyun Mountain do... Use the Human Emperor Sword to kill his own love and then ascend? Why are you sorry for Li You? I don't understand this at all.
The second playthrough felt that the ending was too hasty, especially the plot of liberating the ancient gods... Revealing a bunch of new characters all at once at the end should be considered a taboo in writing novels, especially when the foreshadowing of the founder of Baiyun Mountain has been confiscated. Originally, it was just a matter of making a new copy to reveal the true identity, then retracting the foreshadowing and settling all the causes and consequences, which is a perfect happy ending... I have been writing for so many years and I don't know what the situation was when it was serialized. It feels like the plot of fifty chapters was just taken over in two or three chapters, or it seems that at the end of the writing, I suddenly had an idea and completely let it go and can't take it back...
It's not easy for this pair of wood and stone lovers to be released [Spread Flowers]
Finished reading! ! ! Please revise Chapter 137 Woo Woo Woo
This article is not the struggle article that most writers usually write. This is a pure gold-finger article, and it is a super gold-finger article, completely crushing the level. Some people say that it's strange to break up one line after another, but that's the style of writing. Maybe people who read it for the first time are not used to it, but once you get used to it, it's quite interesting.
So what did the ancestor of Baiyun Mountain do... Use the Human Emperor Sword to kill his own love and then ascend? Why are you sorry for Li You? I don't understand this at all.
The second playthrough felt that the ending was too hasty, especially the plot of liberating the ancient gods... Revealing a bunch of new characters all at once at the end should be considered a taboo in writing novels, especially when the foreshadowing of the founder of Baiyun Mountain has been confiscated. Originally, it was just a matter of making a new copy to reveal the true identity, then retracting the foreshadowing and settling all the causes and consequences, which is a perfect happy ending... I have been writing for so many years and I don't know what the situation was when it was serialized. It feels like the plot of fifty chapters was just taken over in two or three chapters, or it seems that at the end of the writing, I suddenly had an idea and completely let it go and can't take it back...