Although the husband who was raised by Ba Xin Ba Fei was beautiful and beautiful, in the end he used her as a stepping stone to accompany the beautiful princess and rose to prominence.
Mu He thought, that's it, just raise a white-eyed wolf.
But this white-eyed wolf gained the upper hand, and after growing fangs, he came back arrogantly, ready to bully her.
It is tolerable, but what is unbearable!
Wen Heng: "I didn't want to do this either."
Mu He didn't mention it in one breath, "Could it be that I forced you?"
PS: The male protagonist is sinister and has no (shua) or (jian) attributes.
Although the heroine is capable of fighting, she just wants to live a low-key life. She only wants to see women being superior to women and being strong. She thinks the hero is too scumbag to accept a reunion, so let's not make things difficult for each other. Orz
One sentence summary: The husband I raised flew away~
Intention: Intention to be added
Reader comments
Isn't this the wife's early article? I felt so uncomfortable after reading it. Why didn't I explain the child clearly? Abortion is actually a very serious matter, and at that time, if the abortion is not clean, it will have lifelong consequences. Moreover, the abusive man actually didn't explain this. This is obviously very easy to poke. Wow.
Sorry, it's really a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers.
Although I saw a lot of people in the comments section seeming dissatisfied with this article, I really liked it.
I read this article very early when I was tweeting about it, but at that time I read it as a pirated article. A few years later, I read it twice, and I like it more and more. The delicate torture of the male protagonist is really to my liking. The author's brushstrokes are very delicate. This kind of abuse of the male protagonist completely satisfied my imagination of torturing the male protagonist.
I really like it.
So after so many years, I'm sorry that I didn't buy it until now.
This review is just an expression of love.
Overall, the writing is okay, and the part about torturing the male protagonist is quite exciting to watch, but I just can't bring my brain to think about the plot. If you think about it carefully, many of the settings are for the sake of torture. The heroine has no desire, no need for fame and wealth, and does not care about anything. She is the most powerful virgin in heaven and earth. She has an inexplicable attraction buff, and has no sense of keeping a proper distance from the opposite sex. There is no reasonable explanation in the article. The heroine gave up the inheritance rights of a power and insisted on becoming a wandering doctor (I am also a wandering mage). She could not save any of her cronies and subordinates. She was passive in everything. Even at the beginning of the story, the hero directly threatened the life of his maid. Is this something that anyone with a normal mind can do? Do you want to be indifferent to fame and fortune and stay away from disputes, so you can keep it to yourself? It's just like, although I am a genius and a genius in politics, I am really a man who wants to be disarmed and return to work as a mermaid? If you were the true Holy Mother, everyone would want to protect you, but you would hold the power in your hands. You don't have any power, but you still have to protect someone when you see him. It's really crazy. Both the male and female protagonists have the character to die if they say more than one word. This eliminates the need for you to listen to my explanation, and I don't listen, and I don't listen, and I don't listen. They get divorced at the first step, and they become fathers at the first step, which is very exciting. But yes, if the male and female protagonists were willing to say one more word, this story would not exist at all, because as long as they were a couple with normal communication, none of the subsequent abuse would have happened. In the end, at the end, the female protagonist still refused to tell the male protagonist that the reason she was afraid of him was because she had had an abortion due to the male protagonist's soup to avoid her baby (the male protagonist did not know she was pregnant when he gave her the soup), and refused to explain the innocence between her and the second male protagonist. You didn't react when he directly kissed you, and you even made excited noises with him on the bed, risking the world's disapproval to protect him. Would a man with a normal IQ believe that the relationship between you is innocent? ! ! ! The same goes for the male protagonist. He just told the female protagonist from the beginning that you are going back to the capital for revenge. You can't marry the princess. It's not convenient for you to have children during the revenge period. Isn't that okay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Anyway, in the end, the story reached a happy ending with the heroine saying "I love you". Another common problem with this author's writing is that there are many supporting characters, but they are all tool men. Their only function is to promote the plot of the male and female protagonists, and there is a lot of description when they appear. After the plot of the male and female protagonist is over, there is no such person in the supporting role. It's normal for supporting characters to have few roles, but can you at least mention them in one sentence or hint at their whereabouts in the dialogue? All of them directly found out that this person was not found. Everything lies in the silence of the male and female protagonists. OK. Fine. The above are all complaints. There is no big problem with the overall writing style of this article. Compared with other novice BG heroines in Jinjiang who are smart and have no connotations other than being soft and cowardly, the heroine of this article is just a weird brain, not wise. It's still worth watching, just don't get too deep into the plot.
Wow, the male protagonist is really abused from beginning to end. I don't know why some people still say that the male protagonist is a scumbag. Have you really read it carefully? Ah, I feel so bad for the male protagonist. The female protagonist is also a tough and strong girl. The author's writing is super good. I like it.
I think the heroine should still tell the hero that she had a child. This is just a short-term reconciliation. If she doesn't tell them, it will be a time bomb. There will be quarrels later.
This... Doesn't it feel like the male protagonist was abused at all? (￣ε(#￣)Σ
Did I forget to write about the child or something?
Second brush, I'm still a little sad that Xiaobai's matter was not explained clearly.
Why didn't the author let the male protagonist know at the end that the child was aborted and that Xiaobai was the male protagonist's? This needs to be confirmed so that the male protagonist can have confirmation that the female protagonist loved her before. Alas, I felt that the ending was lacking. Whether the female protagonist didn't want to make the male protagonist sad or for some reason, it is better to make it clear that the relationship between the two is going to be long. They have awkward personalities and have to make changes for each other in their future lives. Otherwise, they will still quarrel in the future. Treating the symptoms but not the root cause of the article has ended. Their lives are still going on. Alas, it's great to have a good beginning and an end. I always feel that the ending is unclear. I really like this article. That's all that's wrong with the ending.
I rarely come to Jinjiang because I feel that the system is too broken. I read this book at 12 o'clock last night, and when I got up at 3 o'clock in the morning and 7 o'clock in the morning to continue reading it, I couldn't help but come up and write a long review for the author.
First of all, I think the writing style is quite fluent. The style in the ancient Chinese novels I have read is relatively tasteful. I saw some comments saying that the language at the end is too modern. I feel that the author may have been too high-minded and didn't pay attention. However, it does not affect the reading. I still like the overall style.
The plot is very smooth. After reading it, I felt that the abuse was so enjoyable (huh?). I would cry when I read the story about abusing the heroine. It's too sweet and I don't want to watch other people show affection. Abusing the male protagonist is the best. The harder the abuse, the happier I am (M?). The best love story I long for is one with ups and downs and hard-won sweetness. "Returning Slowly" fully meets my expectations and has become one of the best ancient novels I have ever read. (The main taste is a bit confusing. I can't explain the background of the story in the first 10 chapters. If I can't tell the main plot, I won't read further.) The climax of the whole book is the part where the scumbag male protagonist abandons his wife, and then marries the princess and enjoys the glory and wealth. Zaohuang (sends people) to find him and is beaten with blood and so on. It's a typical image of Chen Shimei, and his hatred is crazy. The plot of the subsequent abuse of the male protagonist was also very well written. Ah He did not abandon her armor when the male protagonist gave him a little warmth like other female protagonists. There was a scene where Ah He stabbed Wen Heng mercilessly with a blunt sword. Wen Heng used the sword to block her way to escape, but was slapped by Ah He. This part was very touching to me. I have never seen enough of female protagonists abusing male protagonists. This time, for the first time, I felt like "stop abusing Wen Heng." Very exciting (covering my heart)
Ah He has a lively temperament in the early stage but becomes less tempered in the later stage. The male protagonist Wen Heng is like an immortal figure (Yan Control). He has a childish and paranoid possessiveness towards Ah He, but he is also very self-controlling. Ah He looks down on Wen Heng and has a weak temper. The two of them together really make a story. Let's talk about Wen Heng first, it can be said that he is very scheming + careful at every step + single-minded. Although there is no focus on showing how powerful Wen Heng is and how he plans, as Xiao Yan, the side profile is quite enough. As for A He's previous actions, he was not good enough. After all, no one is perfect. If Wen Heng did not make a mistake, it would no longer be a story.
As for Ah He, I have never been picky about the heroine. As long as she has good conduct, I will carry her a ladder even if she wants to go to heaven. There is a plot where Xing Huai and Ah He get along. Ah He is kissed by Xing Huai and indirectly abuses Wen Heng. , I have no mental obsessive-compulsive disorder towards the heroine (only when going to bed), Ahe gave me the overall feeling of being really indifferent. If only this aspect was indeed successfully portrayed, and the writing was not broken in the later period, but other aspects of portraying her are slightly inferior to Wen Heng. (However, Xiaoyan always assumes the role of the female protagonist, and the male protagonist can just tease her hard)
Finally, let me talk about the shortcomings. Maybe it's because I read articles relatively quickly. Although I also write novels, I may not be qualified to say that the author is an orz. As for the combination of long sentences and short sentences, short sentences can highlight the rhythm, but when the long sentences are matched with what the characters say, they start to get a bit messy, and I have to interrupt the speed of reading the article. I wonder who said this sentence in Lushun. I feel that unless there are actions that have to be described, the dialogue should not be placed after the long sentences.
There is also a description of the characters. In addition to the description of the two protagonists, I think the images of Ah Zhu, Ah Li, and Xing Huai are all very good. But the descriptions of others are a bit sketchy (although it does not affect the reading). If the supporting characters and other branches of the protagonist can be expanded, the whole story will be fuller. (But this requirement is a bit high, it must be both detailed and clear... Myself...) I don't mean to criticize. This is the author's first article that I have come across. Compared with many others, it is really good, so I was surprised to see that it was an article in 2014. I also planned to follow Weibo (but I couldn't find it), and I will continue to follow the author's books. Come on~
So Wen Yan never knew that she had lost a child... I have been waiting for a long time to watch the abusive male protagonist, but I didn't see π_π
It is said that the male protagonist is about to be tortured. There was only a little bit of abuse at the end... And they kept saying that the next few chapters would be brutal.
It was so good, I stayed up all night to read it. But what should I do with my online class homework? Can I still save it? T^T
Damn, can you do a sweet side story about the two of them before they were married?
So there are two updates today?
Wen Heng's way of fighting the cold war is really unique~~
I'm so excited, it's the finale~
I don't want it to end! ! ! !
Will there be a double update? I'm really looking forward to it.
What time is it? ! ! ! God, I'm so worried
For a while, do you mean tonight?
It will be 11 o'clock soon, waiting for the finale
Still waiting╭(╯ε╰)╮
The perfect ending. Reluctant to watch the extras
Finished with flowers~ People will not die from heartbreak in the moment. The history of bone debt next door is always surprisingly similar (x) However, the ending is a bit rushed. I feel that the heart-wrenching emotions in the first half have not yet calmed down. The sweetness is not enough. It is a bit regretful. I hope the extra sweet jokes will satisfy me! Also looking forward to new articles!
I can't bear to see the ending~ Thank you for your hard work~
Two arrogant and sultry children falling in love is really annoying
That's it. T^T I'll save it for now and come back to it after the exam~ I really want to read a post-apocalyptic article!
Finally waiting for Wen Heng's extra episode!! Spread flowers~~
Will all future updates to the extra series be in this chapter?
Because I saw Chacha was finished~~
Ps: Let me ask again, besides Wen Heng, how many extra stories does Chacha plan to write now?
Damn, this extra episode is not enough. Try harder.
Isn't this the wife's early article? I felt so uncomfortable after reading it. Why didn't I explain the child clearly? Abortion is actually a very serious matter, and at that time, if the abortion is not clean, it will have lifelong consequences. Moreover, the abusive man actually didn't explain this. This is obviously very easy to poke. Wow.
Sorry, it's really a thousand Hamlets for a thousand readers. Although I saw a lot of people in the comments section seeming dissatisfied with this article, I really liked it. I read this article very early when I was tweeting about it, but at that time I read it as a pirated article. A few years later, I read it twice, and I like it more and more. The delicate torture of the male protagonist is really to my liking. The author's brushstrokes are very delicate. This kind of abuse of the male protagonist completely satisfied my imagination of torturing the male protagonist. I really like it. So after so many years, I'm sorry that I didn't buy it until now. This review is just an expression of love.
Overall, the writing is okay, and the part about torturing the male protagonist is quite exciting to watch, but I just can't bring my brain to think about the plot. If you think about it carefully, many of the settings are for the sake of torture. The heroine has no desire, no need for fame and wealth, and does not care about anything. She is the most powerful virgin in heaven and earth. She has an inexplicable attraction buff, and has no sense of keeping a proper distance from the opposite sex. There is no reasonable explanation in the article. The heroine gave up the inheritance rights of a power and insisted on becoming a wandering doctor (I am also a wandering mage). She could not save any of her cronies and subordinates. She was passive in everything. Even at the beginning of the story, the hero directly threatened the life of his maid. Is this something that anyone with a normal mind can do? Do you want to be indifferent to fame and fortune and stay away from disputes, so you can keep it to yourself? It's just like, although I am a genius and a genius in politics, I am really a man who wants to be disarmed and return to work as a mermaid? If you were the true Holy Mother, everyone would want to protect you, but you would hold the power in your hands. You don't have any power, but you still have to protect someone when you see him. It's really crazy. Both the male and female protagonists have the character to die if they say more than one word. This eliminates the need for you to listen to my explanation, and I don't listen, and I don't listen, and I don't listen. They get divorced at the first step, and they become fathers at the first step, which is very exciting. But yes, if the male and female protagonists were willing to say one more word, this story would not exist at all, because as long as they were a couple with normal communication, none of the subsequent abuse would have happened. In the end, at the end, the female protagonist still refused to tell the male protagonist that the reason she was afraid of him was because she had had an abortion due to the male protagonist's soup to avoid her baby (the male protagonist did not know she was pregnant when he gave her the soup), and refused to explain the innocence between her and the second male protagonist. You didn't react when he directly kissed you, and you even made excited noises with him on the bed, risking the world's disapproval to protect him. Would a man with a normal IQ believe that the relationship between you is innocent? ! ! ! The same goes for the male protagonist. He just told the female protagonist from the beginning that you are going back to the capital for revenge. You can't marry the princess. It's not convenient for you to have children during the revenge period. Isn't that okay? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Anyway, in the end, the story reached a happy ending with the heroine saying "I love you". Another common problem with this author's writing is that there are many supporting characters, but they are all tool men. Their only function is to promote the plot of the male and female protagonists, and there is a lot of description when they appear. After the plot of the male and female protagonist is over, there is no such person in the supporting role. It's normal for supporting characters to have few roles, but can you at least mention them in one sentence or hint at their whereabouts in the dialogue? All of them directly found out that this person was not found. Everything lies in the silence of the male and female protagonists. OK. Fine. The above are all complaints. There is no big problem with the overall writing style of this article. Compared with other novice BG heroines in Jinjiang who are smart and have no connotations other than being soft and cowardly, the heroine of this article is just a weird brain, not wise. It's still worth watching, just don't get too deep into the plot.
Wow, the male protagonist is really abused from beginning to end. I don't know why some people still say that the male protagonist is a scumbag. Have you really read it carefully? Ah, I feel so bad for the male protagonist. The female protagonist is also a tough and strong girl. The author's writing is super good. I like it.
I think the heroine should still tell the hero that she had a child. This is just a short-term reconciliation. If she doesn't tell them, it will be a time bomb. There will be quarrels later.
This... Doesn't it feel like the male protagonist was abused at all? (￣ε(#￣)Σ
Did I forget to write about the child or something?
Second brush, I'm still a little sad that Xiaobai's matter was not explained clearly.
Why didn't the author let the male protagonist know at the end that the child was aborted and that Xiaobai was the male protagonist's? This needs to be confirmed so that the male protagonist can have confirmation that the female protagonist loved her before. Alas, I felt that the ending was lacking. Whether the female protagonist didn't want to make the male protagonist sad or for some reason, it is better to make it clear that the relationship between the two is going to be long. They have awkward personalities and have to make changes for each other in their future lives. Otherwise, they will still quarrel in the future. Treating the symptoms but not the root cause of the article has ended. Their lives are still going on. Alas, it's great to have a good beginning and an end. I always feel that the ending is unclear. I really like this article. That's all that's wrong with the ending.
I rarely come to Jinjiang because I feel that the system is too broken. I read this book at 12 o'clock last night, and when I got up at 3 o'clock in the morning and 7 o'clock in the morning to continue reading it, I couldn't help but come up and write a long review for the author. First of all, I think the writing style is quite fluent. The style in the ancient Chinese novels I have read is relatively tasteful. I saw some comments saying that the language at the end is too modern. I feel that the author may have been too high-minded and didn't pay attention. However, it does not affect the reading. I still like the overall style. The plot is very smooth. After reading it, I felt that the abuse was so enjoyable (huh?). I would cry when I read the story about abusing the heroine. It's too sweet and I don't want to watch other people show affection. Abusing the male protagonist is the best. The harder the abuse, the happier I am (M?). The best love story I long for is one with ups and downs and hard-won sweetness. "Returning Slowly" fully meets my expectations and has become one of the best ancient novels I have ever read. (The main taste is a bit confusing. I can't explain the background of the story in the first 10 chapters. If I can't tell the main plot, I won't read further.) The climax of the whole book is the part where the scumbag male protagonist abandons his wife, and then marries the princess and enjoys the glory and wealth. Zaohuang (sends people) to find him and is beaten with blood and so on. It's a typical image of Chen Shimei, and his hatred is crazy. The plot of the subsequent abuse of the male protagonist was also very well written. Ah He did not abandon her armor when the male protagonist gave him a little warmth like other female protagonists. There was a scene where Ah He stabbed Wen Heng mercilessly with a blunt sword. Wen Heng used the sword to block her way to escape, but was slapped by Ah He. This part was very touching to me. I have never seen enough of female protagonists abusing male protagonists. This time, for the first time, I felt like "stop abusing Wen Heng." Very exciting (covering my heart) Ah He has a lively temperament in the early stage but becomes less tempered in the later stage. The male protagonist Wen Heng is like an immortal figure (Yan Control). He has a childish and paranoid possessiveness towards Ah He, but he is also very self-controlling. Ah He looks down on Wen Heng and has a weak temper. The two of them together really make a story. Let's talk about Wen Heng first, it can be said that he is very scheming + careful at every step + single-minded. Although there is no focus on showing how powerful Wen Heng is and how he plans, as Xiao Yan, the side profile is quite enough. As for A He's previous actions, he was not good enough. After all, no one is perfect. If Wen Heng did not make a mistake, it would no longer be a story. As for Ah He, I have never been picky about the heroine. As long as she has good conduct, I will carry her a ladder even if she wants to go to heaven. There is a plot where Xing Huai and Ah He get along. Ah He is kissed by Xing Huai and indirectly abuses Wen Heng. , I have no mental obsessive-compulsive disorder towards the heroine (only when going to bed), Ahe gave me the overall feeling of being really indifferent. If only this aspect was indeed successfully portrayed, and the writing was not broken in the later period, but other aspects of portraying her are slightly inferior to Wen Heng. (However, Xiaoyan always assumes the role of the female protagonist, and the male protagonist can just tease her hard) Finally, let me talk about the shortcomings. Maybe it's because I read articles relatively quickly. Although I also write novels, I may not be qualified to say that the author is an orz. As for the combination of long sentences and short sentences, short sentences can highlight the rhythm, but when the long sentences are matched with what the characters say, they start to get a bit messy, and I have to interrupt the speed of reading the article. I wonder who said this sentence in Lushun. I feel that unless there are actions that have to be described, the dialogue should not be placed after the long sentences. There is also a description of the characters. In addition to the description of the two protagonists, I think the images of Ah Zhu, Ah Li, and Xing Huai are all very good. But the descriptions of others are a bit sketchy (although it does not affect the reading). If the supporting characters and other branches of the protagonist can be expanded, the whole story will be fuller. (But this requirement is a bit high, it must be both detailed and clear... Myself...) I don't mean to criticize. This is the author's first article that I have come across. Compared with many others, it is really good, so I was surprised to see that it was an article in 2014. I also planned to follow Weibo (but I couldn't find it), and I will continue to follow the author's books. Come on~
So Wen Yan never knew that she had lost a child... I have been waiting for a long time to watch the abusive male protagonist, but I didn't see π_π
It is said that the male protagonist is about to be tortured. There was only a little bit of abuse at the end... And they kept saying that the next few chapters would be brutal.
It was so good, I stayed up all night to read it. But what should I do with my online class homework? Can I still save it? T^T
Damn, can you do a sweet side story about the two of them before they were married?
So there are two updates today? Wen Heng's way of fighting the cold war is really unique~~
I'm so excited, it's the finale~
I don't want it to end! ! ! !
Will there be a double update? I'm really looking forward to it.
What time is it? ! ! ! God, I'm so worried
For a while, do you mean tonight?
It will be 11 o'clock soon, waiting for the finale
Still waiting╭(╯ε╰)╮
The perfect ending. Reluctant to watch the extras
Finished with flowers~ People will not die from heartbreak in the moment. The history of bone debt next door is always surprisingly similar (x) However, the ending is a bit rushed. I feel that the heart-wrenching emotions in the first half have not yet calmed down. The sweetness is not enough. It is a bit regretful. I hope the extra sweet jokes will satisfy me! Also looking forward to new articles!
I can't bear to see the ending~ Thank you for your hard work~
Two arrogant and sultry children falling in love is really annoying
That's it. T^T I'll save it for now and come back to it after the exam~ I really want to read a post-apocalyptic article!
Finally waiting for Wen Heng's extra episode!! Spread flowers~~ Will all future updates to the extra series be in this chapter? Because I saw Chacha was finished~~
Ps: Let me ask again, besides Wen Heng, how many extra stories does Chacha plan to write now?
Damn, this extra episode is not enough. Try harder.